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 Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 6:14 pm
Jun Wei  "May your spirit find what you could not in life." Murder doesn’t necessarily mean evil, right? FULL NAME: Jun Wei
ALIAS : Martial artist
NICKNAMES: Yun
DATE OF BIRTH: May 29
CURRENT AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
NATIONALITY: Japanese
ORIGIN OF BIRTH: Osaka, Japan
OCCUPATION: Student
APPEARANCE: Jun has heavily trained himself. he has been in numerous fights which is where he got the scar's on his body. He's gotten tattoo's in dedication to his mentors and brothers who he trained with at a young age. He has an athletic body. He has a monk outfit that his mentor gave him that he wears to school in other days. on other days its either his training uniform or his monk out fit.
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 6:50 pm
But those who do take it upon themselves to kill others, have to be prepared to have others try to kill them. HEIGHT: 5' 7"
WEIGHT: 140 lbs.
BLOOD TYPE: A+
EYE COLOR: Black
HAIR COLOR: Brown ((Recently dyed black))
PIERCINGS: N/A
TATTOOS : Arm,back
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: Has a scars across his body from his past. He wears red ties around his body in dedication to his friends and master. On certain day's he would wear a monks outfit. gets to school on a skate board. At the bottom of it say's Master of Chi. He has had this skate board for years as a gift on his 13th birthday. he has been carrying it for years. it still has the scrapes from when he was younger.
EQUIPMENT:
1. Combat Knife
2.Prayer Beads
3. Throwing Knife Set
RUNES: None
EXPERTISE:
-assassination
Description: Silently and swiftly taking out a target assigned by a person of a higher rank.
-Hand-to-Hand Combat
Description: One on one or multiple target negotiation using arms and legs. Versed and proficient in the martial arts listed. Reflexes tried and tuned to function for entire body ambidextrously. Swift movement through rigorous speed and endurance training.
-Tactical advances
Description: Planning on how to approach something in many different way's. getting passed an enemy, getting inside a certain place, and way's that Could help in defeating the enemy.
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 6:56 pm
And that’s what they call the law of Karma, my friends. PERSONALITY:
Practical, traditional, and organized. He is a very athletic person. Not interested in theory or abstraction unless they see the practical application. Have clear visions of the way things should be. Loyal and hard-working. Like to be in charge. Exceptionally capable in organizing and running activities. "Also a Good citizen" who value security and peaceful living. Logical, original, creative thinker. Can become very excited about ideas. Exceptionally capable and driven to turn theories into clear understandings. Highly value knowledge, competence and logic. Quiet and reserved, hard to get to know well. Individualistic, having no interest in leading or following others.
LIKES: Training,Noodles,Beef,pork.
DISLIKES: Rotten food, mud, and demons...not half demons.
HOBBIES:Training.
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 7:09 pm
That’s why good or bad, the ones who are left standing are the ones with the strongest wills to survive. TRUE CROSS ACADEMY YEAR: 5th
TRUE CROSS CRAM SCHOOL YEAR:1st
EXORCIST CLASS: Page
AFFILIATION: Exorcist
BASE OF OPERATIONS: True Cross Academy
MY HISTORY: Being born in Osaka wasn't really the best thing for Jun. He never met his mother and father. He was also born with a disease that needs him to take an injection every 28 hours or else their are negative consiquences. He was taken in at the age of 5 by a martial artist who takes in orphans and trains them. Getting older at the age of 14 him and a group of friends saved a man who was being attacked back the a Japanese mafia gang. One of them said they'd regret it. They never though it would happen so soon. One day during a regular training exorcise they were attacked. bullets rang out cuts and slices. Jun, trying to save his fellow orphans was attacked giving him those scars. Some were badly injured and hospitalized. The rest were dead, including the master. In dedication to the people who he considered family he dyed red white ribbons and wears them around them around to honor his fallen family. After about years of training he mastered the technique he had created so long ago. As he got older he began loosing his sanity due to the traumatizing scene of his family dying. He recieved a letter days after his birthday. This letter had the information inviting him to the exorcist academy.
RELATIVES: Never met his family, Considered his master as a father and his fellow orphans at the dojo as brothers and sisters.
MY GOALS: To keep Demons from stealing the souls of innocents
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Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 7:19 pm
The world being what it is, a lot of people out there deserve to die, don’t they? MEISTER PRIMARY TYPE:Fighter PRIMARY ABILITY: Eternal Arms FIGHTING STYLE NAME: Kyoyun DESCRIPTION: Months after the attack on his home dojo, jun cleaned up the dojo after the bodies were taken out. he set up candles to in every day, honor his fallen family. He started on a new fourm of martial arts. Every day training and training to lead up to the moment were he can use it. He numbered each move to make it easier to memorize. He would mix in karate with a little of Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu. BASIC FORM NAME:Kyo ichi ((1)) DESCRIPTION: This fourm specializes in the first level of it. It is a series of punches and elbo attack's. But like all attacks they need momentum. Jun Must Shoot his fist forward to Send forth the energy from his body into his attacking body part. Offensive only. ADVANCE FORM NAME:Kyo Ni ((2)) DESCRIPTION: This is a series of Knee and foot attacks. These are made for a person to center their energy into their knee and or feet. It increase the power of the Attack.. TRUE FORM NAME: Kyo Rei ((0)) DESCRIPTION: This focuses on his supernatural attack strength which puts him into the exorcist category. Jun sends his feett/leg/or elbo flying towards his opponent like a jet. Jun's strength is planted into the opponent. The momentum of the punch increases. The force that acted upon the person/object will be strong enough the send them back a few feet.
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Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 11:57 am
FATAL VERSE NAME: Words of wise men.
VERSE: I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me.
The Lord is my strength and my shield.
In the day when I called out, You answered me, and made me bold with strength in my soul.
He gives power to the weak, and to those who have no might He increases strength.
Yet the righteous will hold to his way, and he who has clean hands will be stronger and stronger.
They shall walk after the Lord.
He will roar like a lion.
When He roars, then His sons shall come trembling from the west.
DEMONOLOGY CLASSIFICATION: Wind
VERSE CLASSIFICATION: Defensive
EFFECT RANGE:
VERSE BACKGROUND: Bible
VERSE ABILITY DESCRIPTION: A barrier of wind surrounds him along with a limited number of 3 other people. It stays that way for up to 3 minutes. ((2-3 post))
VERSE RITUAL: He gets on one knee bowing his head with closed eyes.
FATAL VERSE NAME: He gives me strength.
VERSE: He gives power to the weak, and to those who have no might He increases strength.
For the Lord will be your confidence, and will keep your foot from being caught.
Yet the righteous will hold to his way, and he who has clean hands will be stronger and stronger.
The Lord is my rock, my fortress and my deliverer; the God of my strength, in Him I will trust, my shield and the horn of my salvation, my stronghold and my refuge, my Savior, You save me from violence.
DEMONOLOGY CLASSIFICATION: Fire
VERSE CLASSIFICATION: offensive
EFFECT RANGE: 85-100 feet
VERSE BACKGROUND: bible
VERSE ABILITY DESCRIPTION: This ability allows jun's hands to become Intensely hot Which can leave burn marks and temporarily stop enemies
VERSE RITUAL: He places his hands together.
FATAL VERSE NAME: Peace
VERSE: Turn from evil and do good; seek peace and pursue it.
Consider the blameless, observe the upright; there is a future for the man of peace.
I will listen to what God the LORD will say; he promises peace to his people, his saints-- but let them not return to folly.
Come to me, all you who are weary and burdened, and I will give you rest.
Take my yoke upon you and learn from me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and you will find rest for your souls.
For my yoke is easy and my burden is light.
DEMONOLOGY CLASSIFICATION: Fire
VERSE CLASSIFICATION: Offensive
EFFECT RANGE:
VERSE BACKGROUND: Bible
VERSE ABILITY DESCRIPTION: Allows him to Send fire with every throw fist, or thrown leg.
VERSE RITUAL: Close his eyes and make his hands into a prayer motion.
FATAL VERSE NAME: Believe and he shall grant you more strength.
VERSE: I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
He gives strength to the weary and increases the power of the weak.
My soul is weary with sorrow; strengthen me according to your word.
but those who hope in the LORD will renew their strength.
They will soar on wings like eagles; they will run and not grow weary, they will walk and not be faint.
DEMONOLOGY CLASSIFICATION: Earth
VERSE CLASSIFICATION: Defensive
EFFECT RANGE: 77-89
VERSE BACKGROUND: Bible
VERSE ABILITY DESCRIPTION: It creates a body armor around the users body. It can be broken when attacked by a water based move. after about 2 or 3 post. but without that it would take about 4-5 post to break it.
VERSE RITUAL: (If your character must do something other than chant please describe what they must do here)
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Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 6:15 pm
Alright Jun Wei, as much as I like your idea behind your character there are a few errors and places I’d like to see you expand on your idea and detail. They say simple things are the best way to go, but really I don’t believe that as I am a stickler for the rules and when I say what’s in your profile is final, it can’t be changed once you’ve been approved, so it’s better to get these small fine details completed now before you regret them later.
Your character’s appearance that is written out, I would like to see you write a little more here. Your appearance is a lot more than just scars and tattoos, you should be able to talk about the style of clothing he wears during the day, training, even how his hair is, skin tone, eye color, and his height. Things like this all go into the descriptive portion of appearance for a character. Same thing goes for your section on Tattoos and Distinguishing features. I’d like to see more details to bring this character to life.
Under your equipment you can’t just have the option of Holy Water Grenades, because there isn’t a single option for them, you have to select from the Sets of Explosives. The section that has the definitions is just that, a definition, not an option.
Under your expertise, I think you could elaborate more here as well, and you really don’t need to have the bold part of a description, you should be speaking about your character’s first hand skills in these fields you have selected for them to be an expert in. These are not meant to be definitions.
Your character History could be a little longer, it seems rushed and really is sporadic.
You should also fix the coding on your Primary and Secondary Type. You’re also missing the area for the Secondary Meister Type and Ability which is crucial. You will need to add that. To be honest with you, your Fatal Verses and your fighting style forms could use more information in description. It’s too basic and you really won’t have freedom to protect yourself against a role player who was a little more exact with their character in terms of temperature, range, speed, length, thickness, and even style. So work on these things and then I’ll take another look at your profile. Until then I can not approve this profile.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 7:18 pm
Alright can you take a look now?
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 7:48 pm
I'm going to approve it, but it's not really any better than the last time I took a look at it. But so you can start role playing I guess it'll have to do.
Congratulations, you have been approved to be a student at True Cross Academy. You will be staying in House Kurthnaga. Please get use to the arrangements, because you will be staying there for the remainder of your time here at True Cross Academy.
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