hai erry1 i writed dis a while ago on meh old acount but i wantd 2 get ur fedbax bcuz ur leik tha pro pplz lolololol
A/n: so hey guyz i recently wrote a fanfic on here to see if u anyone liked it or not, but i got a lot of negative reviows and ppl sayin my charcter was a marie sew and weird stuff leik tht lolol. so anyway i looked up online stuff about teh chatacters of hp (i never readed the bookss lol) so i basically noe them an i got my smart friend to correct teh mistakes! i used a dictionary for all the big wurds. i dont own hp! lololol plz reviow
btw since im not puttin on ch 1(there are 12 chs in total) my characters name is raynbowe myst and shes a metamorphasus who was raised by orphans in an orphnage. shes a gryfindore 6th year (see not a slyutherin i looked it up) n it turns out there was a prophecy about her to that says she destroy the dark load with hairy. on there quest to sedtroy the dark loed, they meet some troubles. enjoy!
also this is not the whole fanfiuc just an exerpt k?
Chapter 2: (a/n: i chose to put an except from ch 2 k?)
We were walken down the great hall, on our way to potions class with profesor Snape. My loong red hair was tied up, and i changed my eye color to deep purple, matching my mood of concern and sorrow.
I walked down the great hall. Suddnely, I heard footsteps behind me. "hey, Rayn, ait up1" a voice called. IT was Harry Potter! "Hey harry," i said, tossing my elegant hair up in the air.
"I was wondering. There's gonna be a music group in Hogsville called the Wizard sisters. Do u wanna come w me, Ron, HErmione to watch them sing? They're a band."
I slimed elegantly. "Okay!" I called, gaping the air, and laughing. HArry said: "Okay, great! So im on my way to Quidditch practise, and I see you later!" he skipped away lawfully.
I was sooo excited! I was gonna skip Potions class, and get ready now! Just then, I heard a big evil opera voice behind me.
"Not so fast, you little ognormurate demon child!" It wauz prof. snape! he looekd so mad, I guess he took attendence for Potions class and i wasn't there.
"I took attendende for potionms class and you wasn't there!" he gasped eerily.
"Sorry professor," I said, graciously.
"Sorry? This is not as it used to be! Detention! 2,00000 points from Gryffindore lol!" he yielded.
"rofessor. I can't have detention tonite! I got to go to the Wizar Sister concert with hAIRy Potter!"
He laughed anxiously. "No more!" and he turned into his blakc cape and aparated away.
I was rly annoyed. Forget snape and his stoopid detention!
Just then, I heard footsteps behind me. IT was hermione! "Hey she said!"
"Hey," I replied maourisciously.
"I think snape is working for Lord Vlodemort." I said, woftily.
"What?" she asked.
"Oh, nothing."
"Wanna go shopping?"
"K!"
We went to hogsville in the cute stores and got me an outfit for later. Just then, Ron wesley walked in! "Hey, hermione," he said
"Hey Ron!"
"Ready 2 go?"
"Um...i gotta talk to Ron. U go on w out me! See u later!" she screeched unfooledly.
I walked back to the castle, and everyone complimented me on my beaty, My long, flowing red hair was out all around and my eyes were now a teal blue the sun's light shone on my elegant face and all that and i liked sort of kind when then and all i was pretty.
On my way back, I saw a man w a dark robe. I thought he might just be a tutor, so I kept walking.
He followed, and I walked faster. Then, he grabed my arm and pull me into da dark alley!
"I SCREAMED!"
He took off his darkness robe and it was DEATH EATER.
"Mwuahaha" he gulped spookily, and with his wand he did the "ABRA KEVADA!"
I gasped! I' was died!
I screamed and ran around in a circle.
Suddenly....he turned to dust!
"Huh?" I wourned mostily.
Ron, Hermione, and Harry ran in, looking scareed.
"OMG WHAT HAPPENED?"
He used the abra Kedavra soekkm, but I didn't die!"
"He used the abrada Kedavra spell but I didn't die!" I yielded.
Harry stood forward. "Do you know what this means?"
I gasped morosely.
Dumbledore appeared!
"Rayne," he said, "you survived the death curse! YOU MUST DEFEAT THE DARK LORD VOLDEMPRT!" he screamed, his eyes flying everywhere.
I gasped entusiverly!
"So, I have the power?"
Harrry nodded! The prophecy was about mee!!
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