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titenzoner

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Posted: Mon Dec 09, 2013 5:02 pm

Hello this is a sketch I did last night the hair was inspired by a photo I found on Google images. Any advice or criticism would be much appreciated.

Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2013 3:19 am

Its looks really good, Titenzoner. biggrin Keep up the good work.

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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:25 pm

thank you mate I will

Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2013 11:39 pm

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It's good. ^^ You stuck the the hairline very nicely and I love the way the
pulled back part came out. The only advice I can think to offer is that you
should consider drawing in the hair on the back of the head drape around to the
front, not just the sides.

Keep it up~

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Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 12:23 am

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It's good. ^^ You stuck the the hairline very nicely and I love the way the
pulled back part came out. The only advice I can think to offer is that you
should consider drawing in the hair on the back of the head drape around to the
front, not just the sides.

Keep it up~

alright ill try it on the next picture smile

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