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He's finally done!!! Let me know if there is anything I need to alter with him. :3

Have Faith In Us Eren (hate this name >>) is not feeling well, so i said i would help him by doing this for him. Now then, let me get to what matters.

As a note, i all of you abilities need to be changed over to time in the form of posts, because i can't really work five minutes in time in posts because in each fight the time per post varies, so the best way to judge is by a per post base, so if you could do that, that would help a lot.

"Able to read the movements of others"
this is over powered, This needs to be lower, after talking it over with some others, it would be best to leave this as a moderate ability to read someones movements. that seems fair, just because if you can always read their movements, you'll basically have no problem never letting them hit because you'll see everything coming.

Mosquito - this skill is to powerful, by freezing someone's mind i'm assuming you mean you make them incapable of taking actions, in the time span of thirty seconds, you could remove someone head if that was the case, and they would have no power to stop you. We talked about it, and said a complete stop like this is unusable. How ever, if it was to slow down the mind, make them see everything faster in turn making they reactions slower, or something like that, that would be.

Purga - With this, i don't really have problems with what it does, just need you to rework how you stated it, .2 doesn't help us understand when we're not using numbers to judge power, if it's 20% that's to high, and .2 % is like nothing, 2% seems fine, so i would recommend rewording it to say 2.5%. Also i would remove the part about it being weaker when someone isn't moving, I would just have it stay at 2.5% flat all time so they lose %5 over a minute.
How i see this working as a skill is it just makes weaker opponents much easier to kill,and stronger ones will gain advantage over you, because your power would drain far faster against someone with much larger power then you, this being a gamble for you to use. (if this isn't how you saw it working, please let me know so we can talk about it more.)

"Complete control of fire"
Can't allow this, this is far to strong, even more so against someone that creates fire to fight you, you would be able to completely turn their own skills on them, so this is a no. For this level of this i would say a moderate or slightly above moderate power to control fire would be ok, if i'm understanding what you mean by control fire.
For all of these skills i need to know better what you mean by control, a description for this would be helpful.

"Possess skin thicker and tougher than an arrancars hierro"
What i get out of this is a almost perfect, or perfect defense, i think others will take it the same way, this is to powerful just to have for free, if you added that it drains his power, and that it's just not able to be on all the time, on top of it not being a instant activate either, and it sounds alright, it doesn't have to use a ton of power lost, just can't let it be a for free thing either.

Peftasteri - Few things, how long (in posts) does this flame last on his hands? also it would be nice if you could list out what each number of hits with it does, so that we all better know what it can do.

Toxo Tis Fotias - A idea of how big the explosions are and how far he can shoot these flames would be really helpful in judging it.

To Telos - i think you could just add this in as a description of something that happens, because as far as i can tell, this implies that it just changes his personality and doesn't give any sorta buff to power, as such there is no reason for this to be a Technique, you can just add it in as a note or something, unless you want him to get strong as this happens, in which case, make sure to add that in and also give us a better idea in post how long this will take till he fully changes.
If you do decide that it'll not be a skill then go right ahead and add another.

─Skills Information─ (over all general note)
I would suggest trying to balance him just a little more, as you mention things go up and down in as he changes, i recommend that you have his intelligence go down in his final form, not saying to dumb, but, lower then very high, i would say above average, just because it'll help balance out his over all skills at his final stage (I pick Intelligence as an example, it's fine to change any of the others as well. i'm just confiding that moderate is the average captain level for you, if that sounds alright),

Strength - i wouldn't say moderate when you meant beating a captain that should be at the same strength as you, note that you should be of similar power as a captain, so if they have to release to beat you at your normal level, that's not really moderate. i would consider that high, or maybe even very high. if you said just beating a captain not in their release i would say this is fine.

"Speed: Speed remains at that of a normal arrancars sonido through all releases, though leaves after images behind Artemis."
This is contradicting itself, to leave a image behind you have to be moving at speed so much faster then a normal sonido, i can allow the normal speed, but the images cant stay unless you buff the speed a lot, and if you do that, other things will have to in turn drop.

Under special skills make sure to list Descorrer, that is the skill that will let him open the garganta. also, i would list a rank for the lower level you mean, and a maximum number, so there can be now disputes over this power later.

I like the details you put into his background, just need more in the skills and you'll be all set, quote me again once you change it up, and i'll look it over again.

Dont worry you did fine, and i know you weren't trying, i'm just pointing it out to you how others might take it ^^
alrighty, just one or two things for you now, so this should be simple

Mosquito - this seems fine ^^ just wondering if you could add in what happens after he tires, for example, like the others you could mention how long till he can do it again, or just tell me what happens when he tires so we know.

Purga - OK, let me explain why the way i see it works, and i'll use number to make things easier.
say your character spirit power is 100000
for the first situation, we'll look at a weaker person, say someone with 10000 spirit power. when this mark ticks, they'll lose, 250 power, putting them at 9750, and you will also lose 250, putting you to 90750, thus you power is barely going down, while they lose large sums of power.
second situation, someone of even level. so when they lose power, so do you of the same amount, thus you are both getting weaker at the same rate.
Finally, take the situation where you are facing someone with 1000000 spirit power. When they lose power on the tick, they'll lose 25000, thus bringing them down to 975000, when you lose power though, you will be brought to 75000, 3.4 of you full power, meaning you will get distractedly weaker far faster.
So that's how i see this working, does that sound ok? i'm just working with what i see in the wording, i might need you to rephrase it for me if this doesn't seem like what you want. because this will wear down them, but at he possible cost of wearing you down faster, though it's not likely there will be to many people stronger, most will likely be on par, keep that in mind.

"Skin is slightly thicker than an arrancar's hierro "
if we can treat his skin as a very similar thing to a hierro, then i see no problem with it, matter of fact if we treat it the same as a hierro then this is fine.

Toxo Tis Fotias - still need a range of how far he can send them, other wise looks fine at the moment.

That should fix everything here, just fix those these and let me know if the Purga sounds right, and that should be good as long as everything checks out with you too.

ohhhh, that's how you saw it, i understand now, yes, i was over thinking it a lot, just because i enjoy the premise of a skill that allowed you to widen a power gap, (basically make you stronger against the weak, but make the stronger against you, helping better solo out those of the same level as well.) anyways, it's alright, don't worry about that to much i'll keep that in mind.

now then, everything you changes is fine, but now i have to readdress Purga. SO for the skill as you want it, me, telling you to do 2.5% was wrong of me, and i over powered it for you not understand what you wanted. Now that i do, we have a slight problem, that, even a small amounts, make it so even those rare people that are stronger then you will have problem with you quicker in the fight. bring the only ones that could fight you and put you in a position of stress in a fight, even in small amounts, fights will take a long chem against you because you are a very strong person, i understand that you don't have many other outlets, but you do have other choices, you do have Cero yes?
I coudl see this being very fair if you lose the same amount as them, and we can reduce the amount lost if you want to, but truthfully, i would see this as more fair, if you lost a similar amount, basically, bringing those stronger down to your level over time, and bringing you closer to the weak (saying that you actually use this on someone that is weak, which you wouldn't have to). if you both lose the same amount, i see nothing wrong with it, on the other hand if you lose half what they do, a strong opponent, withing even a few turns for you may suddenly find it had to combat you. if this seems reasonable to you, then i have no problems with this and i'll approve you as soon as you reply ^^ if you still wish to try and work this in as you see it, i'm willing to talk about it more to, just let me know what you want me to do and we'll go from there ^^

That is what i meant, i see nothing wrong with this profile, so you have been approved ^^ good luck with you're role playing and i hope you have fun.