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New enemies worry an ancient entity. How do the Shinigami face beings as old as faith? 

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Hi Yuri Yoshi- Division 11 captain

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MagorBunbun

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 4:24 pm


↺ / / șɦiηiɠaɱi

Here is how she wears her uniform (yes it has to be specific):

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full Name: Hi Yuri Yoshi (beautiful fire lily)

Nickname(s): Queen of the frosted heavens, Yuri

Gender: Female

Actual Age: 425,

dob: December 15th, 1788

Appearance Age: 19

Height: 5'8'

Weight: 133lbs

Eye Color: Ice blue

Hair Color: Gold (But turns white when she battles to show she is in sync with her sword.)

Blood Type: O-

Reiatsu Color: Ice blue with Black edging

Special articles of clothing: A ice blue colored scarf that covers her nose and mouth, wraps around her neck 5 times, then falls to her waist.

Special scent that follows her every where: Peppermint

Division: Squad 11
Rank: Captain
Affiliation: Gotei 13

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Personality: Yuri is a quiet person who tends to always be alone. She has a very short temper and is very aggressive.

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Relationship Status: Single

Likes: sleeping, the cold, books, snow, heights, storms, tea, dogs, rabbits, dinosaurs, sweets, fighting (sometimes)
Dislikes: Senseless people, Paperwork, pointless fighting
Fear(s): nothing but will pretend to be afraid of Fire, just to throw off her mind reading opponents.

Bio:
Before Death:
Before She died, Yuri was a gymnast. She was all over the news and on magazine covers for being the youngest gymnast ever. But during the olympics at the age of 14, she was on the high beam and slipped. She landed oddly on her leg and broke it. A fragment of bone escaped into her bloodstream and punctured her heart, killing her.
Before school:
Yuri awoke and was in the 70th North rukon district for 2 years, thinking that she wasn't dead. Some how she wandered into the world of the living unnoticed by other souls, and was instantly discovered by hollows. She had always hated being around others. fended for herself, and never trusted anyone. But around the human age of 16, She was saved by the previous captain of squad 11 who was sent to gather information on strange occurrences that had been caused by Yuri in the world of the living.
Even though they only met briefly the captain felt attached to her and risked his life to get her back to the soul society when doing konso failed. After saving her, that night that the captain returned he died and his last words were," I want that girl to take my place". Then he died without another word. The captain's lieutenant seeked her out and carried out the final words of his captain.
School:
While her powers became well known, She tried hard to forget about all of the people who despised her . However that always failed and she was constantly being outcasted for her already determined position as captain. However, Her fighting technique is by far way different than any other captains' due to her gymnast backround.



↣ ʑαηραкυтō
Zanpakutō Name: Goku Yuki Shinu (hevanly snow death)
Type: element (snow)
Sealed Appearance: a regular katana
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:

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Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Shinu is very calm but loves freezing things and fighting.
Inner World:the inner world that contains Shinu is basically a frozen waste land. there is nothing but snow falling from the sky, a full moon, a empty town where in the center of town is a Giant throne on witch Shinu sits on with a bored expression on her face.

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Release Incantation: Rule the Frosted hevans, Shinu
Zanpakutō Changes: Zanpaktou becomes a massive sword that yuri easily wields with one hand
Physical Changes: Yuri's blond hair turns white

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Battlefield Changes: snow begins to fall in order to prepare for bankai
Additional Changes: snow forms solidly into another blade for her left hand and does the same thing as the original sword in her right hand

Power Boosts: Yuri is able to use snow as a shield and decoy body,enhanced speed and strength

Shikai Special Ability:

(Frozen skies) this move allows Yuri to have snow form solidly and turn into spikes that fall from the sky and onto her opponent

(conundrum) This move allows Yuri to be healed by the snow and freezes time at her will for her to do so

Shikai Abilities: when cut by shinu, that limb begins to feel slightly numb with ice begining to form on top of the wound

*Takes an hour to cool down after fighting once* (applies to all abilities)

↣ вαηкαι

Name: Goku Yuki Shinu
Zanpakutō Changes: the blade of shinu disappears and turns into snow
Physical Changes: 1 Ring forms on each of Yuri's middle fingers for her to weild the snow and 2 skin sleeves that match Yuri's scarf form on her arms to protect her from the snow blades.

Power Boosts: all mentioned in shikai
Bankai Special Ability: the blade of shinu becomes snow that can cut you (much like senbonzakura)
Bankai Abilities:all the ones above plus:

(Mimicry) this move allows Yuri to form a puppet marionette that looks like and has the same abilities as her opponent. she can control this puppet from any distance and it can severely harm the opponent.


↣ ѕнιηιgαмι αвιℓιтιєѕ

Hoho
All Kido
all Hado


↣ тнємєѕ

Main Theme:Let it be

Emotional Theme:Requiem from the Blind Alchemist

Battle Theme:Come Back for More

Innerworld theme:Snowfeild
PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 10:36 pm


MagorBunbun

Well, from the top:

I'm going to ask that you divvy up that Power Boosts section into a set of abilities. Additionally, you'll have to condense your special abilities with your standard two abilities the same way. Keep in mind, you can have no more than five Shikai abilities and three Bankai abilities. Now, as for the fairness of each technique, well that's coming next.

Frozen skies has no range, and consequently, it needs to have that added in.

Conundrum is free to do some healing, just add on limitations. Freezing time is a no go though.

That being said, the same applies to your Bankai Power boosts. The sole ability of your bankai though is a tad too strong. While being able to create a visual mimic of your foe is fine, you'll need a distance from which you can control it and it cannot possess the abilities of a foe (such as their Shikai or Bankai). Passing your own known Kido through it would be fine though.

That being said, your cool down needs to be for individual skills, and in posts. Time is easily manipulated in the RP and as such, a post limit cool down is significantly easier to manage (which is why they're required).

Quote me when you're ready for a new review.

iChan-Chan
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