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 Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 8:40 pm
 [Name:]Taurus Minteo
[Nickname:] Tori
[Race:]Minotaur
[Gender:]Male
[Age:]17
[Sexuality:]Straight/Bi-Curious
[Weight:]200lbs
[Height:]6'6
[Year at Camp:]1st
[Strengths:]
Super Strength: He can lift things the size of boulders with extreme ease and packs a ridiculously strong punch. (Like enough to turn said boulder into dust.)
Extremely high endurance: He can do most physical activities for extremely long periods of time.
Unbreakable Horns: With his super strength, he can head charge opponents and impale them on his sharp horns.
[Weaknesses:]Insecure: (This speaks for itself)
Physically Slow: While he is very strong, he is very slow and cannot catch up with most people who are even moderately fast.
Range Combat: (Speaks for itself)
[Special Skills:]Is pretty good at intimidation by just standing there (Doesn't mean to however)
[Personality:]Despite his brute strength and extremely muscular body (That is hidden by his coat), he is very quiet and extremely shy if approached by most people (Especially girls). He isn't very talkative and not the most open person in the world but he is extremely kind hearted. However once he gets into a fight, he GETS INTO A FIGHT. He does a complete 180 in his personality and taunts his opponent and loves the thrill of a fist fight. However this is extremely rare since he avoids fighting all together.
[Bio:] Taurus was born to a Minotaur Father and a human mother in the month of June. While as a baby he had a normal human features he started to grow horns and a tail by the time he was 5. Soon enough he started training with his father who pushed him to his absolute limits and caused him to unlock his super strength. While in contrast his mother babied him to no end and always doted on him in every way she possibly could, making him quite the mommas boy. His mother and father sent him to the camp in order to try and get his confidence higher and for him to actually make friends, since he has none where he lives now.
[Likes:]
Candy (Jawbreakers in particular)
Working out
Sleeping
Being alone
[Dislikes:]
Beef
Country Music
Annoying People
[Other Information:]He tends to pull his Hood up to cover his face when he's embarrassed.
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Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 9:45 pm
Accepted?
I don't know if i'm truly allowed to do so ^^ But I would like to think so considering that i'm a Crew member, still, haven't been told so if i'm later reprimanded I apologize!
Then again, I see nothing truly wrong with this profile; but you may want to add in some more weaknesses, such as combat weaknesses; for instance agile attacks or ranged weaponry. That sort of thing ^^
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 2:23 pm
This can't be approved yet, you need combat weaknesses. If not, I'll consider it god moddding. Tag me when you edit and I'll come look at it again.
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 2:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 2:55 pm
Still a little god mod-ish. Try adding something like, when he gets into a fight he can be tricked easily, because he relies heavily on his strength. Something along those lines. I really like him as a character, especially the 180 personality change. Usually, in Greek mythology, minotaurs tended to not be the sharpest tools in the shed. I'm not saying make him an idiot, just give him some kind of weakness, not just to where he can be outran. Do you know what I mean? Tag me when you edit.
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 3:41 pm
Hey dudes, not sure where I stand in all this ether but in my opinion the profile was relatively okay.
He's a Bull-Man (lol) he's strong, got a high endurance and horns that could break steel. He even gets the 'red mist' when he's fighting, the 'lock on and go!' aspect.
But I do agree that he needs some form of weakness, Obviously we don't wanna get caught in a charge, or close combat with the guy, but like IGlacier said, Range could be a big problem for this fella. So could Fire or similar area attacks... he could even run into a wall, if he cant stop his charge. (Just a suggestion).
Personally if I had a character like this, I would play him in two ways, when not in combat, how he is now. And when in combat, pretty much how he is now, but a little 'over focused' if you know what I mean, not stupid, but consumed by the desire to gore my target.. dead. Probably taking a couple of arrows/magical/ranged attacks in the process. If I fail to many charges I would be going down myself xD
Just some ideas to try and help you out man! ^^
Noticed this hadn't had a reply so yeah, just trying to help xD
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:07 pm
I have no clue why I didn't put ranged combat down as a weakness in the first place, I think I was having a brain fart at that moment xD
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 9:12 pm
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