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PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 3:25 am


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Name:
Elisia Mansouri
a.k.a Elise, Eli
Race:
Elemental Witch
Gender:
Female
Age:
19 (Almost 20)
Sexuality:
Heterosexual
Relationship Status:
Single
Weight:
120 Lbs
Height:
5,7
Year at Camp:
First year
Strengths:
-High stamina
-Quick learner
-Doesn't have to rely on a source in order to summon and manipulate element. However summoning it without the element present takes great physical strain on her body, as she is using her own energy force.
Weaknesses:
-Afraid of heights.
-Preforming in front of crowds or large groups of people.
-Uses a lot of energy when summoning and using an element without a source.
-Has difficulty saying no, and as a result her kindness is quite often taken for granted.
Special Skills:
Can control four elements. Lightning is her strongest element, and uses less energy when summoned or manipulated.
Lightning
Nature
Water/Ice
Air
Slow self regeneration
Personality:
Usually quite shy around others, especially groups of three or more people. She won't often speak unless spoken too, or if she feels the need to. Although she is quite kind and compassionate and at times could be considered quite timid and a bit of a push-over, she can be assertive when she needs to, and isn't afraid to stand up for herself or what she believes in, or for anyone else. Very loyal and devoted to those she trusts, and would consider friends, or those she cares a great deal about. Always willing to lend a hand whenever she can, and help those in need.
Bio:
Elisia never got to meet her mother as she died in the process of giving birth to her. It was heart-breaking for her father, but soon he moved on and re-married. Elise was at least 12 when this happened. Her step-mother tolerated her for a few years, up until the birth of her son. Then she no longer liked the idea of having Elise around, and ordered her father to make her leave. She didn't understand how her father could just abandon her, but at the age of 16 she was left on the streets of to fend for herself. Living amongst humans was no easy task. They were so full of hatred and discrimination against anyone or anything different. Which meant she had to hide the fact that she was a witch, and soon enough it became too difficult, as her powers started to get a little out of control. Three years later, she heard about a camp for those like her and decided to join it right away.
Likes:
-Cooking
-Classical Music
-Singing
-Art
-Reading
-Playing either of her three favourite instruments, the harp, piano or violin
-Dancing
Dislikes:
-Loud and/or obnoxious people
-Being disturbed from a good book
-Arrogance
-Small, dark spaces
Other Information:
Hmm..Nope I think that's pretty much it
Current Events:
Elisia heard rumours of a camp for those like her, so she left right away to find it.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 10:07 am


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:58 am


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Sorry. I decided I wanted to change my character, I hope that's okay.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:04 pm


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Sorry. I decided I wanted to change my character, I hope that's okay.



Well you see...
There's already an Elemental witch with basically... the same powers etc. You'd have to change yours up seeing as she had made her's first if you want to keep your character as an elemental witch.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:29 pm


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Sorry. I decided I wanted to change my character, I hope that's okay.



Well you see...
There's already an Elemental witch with basically... the same powers etc. You'd have to change yours up seeing as she had made her's first if you want to keep your character as an elemental witch.


Okay, I just thought elemental witches would be just that, a witch that can manipulate the elements....Um but if it's a problem I'll change it I guess.

Not really sure what else I can change it to though, since those are the four main elements I really have no other options.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:50 pm


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PoppiHolla


Sorry. I decided I wanted to change my character, I hope that's okay.



Well you see...
There's already an Elemental witch with basically... the same powers etc. You'd have to change yours up seeing as she had made her's first if you want to keep your character as an elemental witch.


Okay, I just thought elemental witches would be just that, a witch that can manipulate the elements....Um but if it's a problem I'll change it I guess.

Not really sure what else I can change it to though, since those are the four main elements I really have no other options.


I'm not saying not to have her be elemental. Just look over this already made profile and tweak yours so they aren't too similiar :

This one

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:02 pm


Rosie Mutiny
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PoppiHolla


Sorry. I decided I wanted to change my character, I hope that's okay.



Well you see...
There's already an Elemental witch with basically... the same powers etc. You'd have to change yours up seeing as she had made her's first if you want to keep your character as an elemental witch.


Okay, I just thought elemental witches would be just that, a witch that can manipulate the elements....Um but if it's a problem I'll change it I guess.

Not really sure what else I can change it to though, since those are the four main elements I really have no other options.


I'm not saying not to have her be elemental. Just look over this already made profile and tweak yours so they aren't too similiar :

This one


Do you mind specifying the things about my character and her's that are too similar? The only real similarities I see are, neither of them are very physically strong, and they can both control the elements. Is it because the four elements they control are the same? Because if it is, like I said, what other elements are there? Do you want me to take one away, or add one, or change one? What is it exactly that I should have to change about my character?
PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:17 pm


Well basically, there are two (twins) who are very similar. And then now your character. I don't expect you to magically change the elements. I'm just saying there are too many similar witches here. Maybe change up the weaknesses or make her prominently stronger in one of the elements than she is from the rest. We just don't want the powers of the campers being too similar to each other.

What did you change about your character after it was approved? Maybe we can work with it from there.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:32 pm


Rosie Mutiny
Well basically, there are two (twins) who are very similar. And then now your character. I don't expect you to magically change the elements. I'm just saying there are too many similar witches here. Maybe change up the weaknesses or make her prominently stronger in one of the elements than she is from the rest. We just don't want the powers of the campers being too similar to each other.

What did you change about your character after it was approved? Maybe we can work with it from there.


She was an angel before I changed her, but I thought there would be a few of those already so I went for something I thought might be a little different. I'm not sure how I could change up her weaknesses, but I can make her prominently stronger in one element. I did want to ask about one thing that came to mind though, would you consider lightning to be an element, and if so could I add that in? I thought I should ask in case it's too much.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:37 pm


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Well basically, there are two (twins) who are very similar. And then now your character. I don't expect you to magically change the elements. I'm just saying there are too many similar witches here. Maybe change up the weaknesses or make her prominently stronger in one of the elements than she is from the rest. We just don't want the powers of the campers being too similar to each other.

What did you change about your character after it was approved? Maybe we can work with it from there.


She was an angel before I changed her, but I thought there would be a few of those already so I went for something I thought might be a little different. I could probably do both, changing her physical weakness and make her prominently stronger in one element. I did want to ask about one thing that came to mind though, would you consider lightning to be an element, and if so could I add that in? I thought I should ask in case it's too much.



We could sub out fire for lightening in that case, that'd be pretty exclusive to your character. want to make lightning her stronger of the elements? And even switch up the names if you wanted like "Nature" instead of "Earth". She would have that unique ability then, and would solve the issues we're having.
Then just change that up, tweak the weaknesses and tag one of the captains and we'll reapprove c:

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:44 pm


Rosie Mutiny
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Well basically, there are two (twins) who are very similar. And then now your character. I don't expect you to magically change the elements. I'm just saying there are too many similar witches here. Maybe change up the weaknesses or make her prominently stronger in one of the elements than she is from the rest. We just don't want the powers of the campers being too similar to each other.

What did you change about your character after it was approved? Maybe we can work with it from there.


She was an angel before I changed her, but I thought there would be a few of those already so I went for something I thought might be a little different. I could probably do both, changing her physical weakness and make her prominently stronger in one element. I did want to ask about one thing that came to mind though, would you consider lightning to be an element, and if so could I add that in? I thought I should ask in case it's too much.



We could sub out fire for lightening in that case, that'd be pretty exclusive to your character. want to make lightning her stronger of the elements? And even switch up the names if you wanted like "Nature" instead of "Earth". She would have that unique ability then, and would solve the issues we're having.
Then just change that up, tweak the weaknesses and tag one of the captains and we'll reapprove c:


Okay how's that?
PostPosted: Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:52 pm


All set!

Rosie Mutiny

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