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Full Name: Setsuna Wantabe

Alias/Title: Snake Katena

Nickname: King Cobra

Gender: Male

Date of Birth: March 5

Actual Age: 15,000

Appearance Age: 21

Height: 6'2

Weight: 189

Eye Color: Blue

Hair Color: Black

Nationality: Japen

Reiatsu Color: Vemon Purple

Zodiac Sign: Snake

Affiliation: Katena


Hobbies: Haven't found one yet

Likes: Haven't found one yet

Dislikes:
Weak Opponents

Personality:
Setsuna is very serious man. He is most cold hearted Zodiac, and he won't give mercy to any of his opponents. He wants things to be done quick without problems. He usually never makes jokes, and the only time you will see him smile is during a battle with a worthy opponent. He doesn't like to talk to the Zodiacs unless it's important. He keeps his secrets to himself, and will occasionally leave on his own. He also in a search for a opponent that will give him the ultimate challenge.
Sexual Preference:
Heterosexual

Family: None


Background: Setsuna tried to make friends, but nobody would even come close to him. Most people were scared of him. He was always consider a sneaky and a cheater. Nobody trusted him, including the other Katens, especially the Horse Katena. Even though no one trusted him, he tried his best to protect the humans. Setsuna believed in cheating when he fought. He thought that a win was win, it doesn't matter how you won, and if you didn't like it, oh well. Setsuna was a skilled fighter, but he thought that cheating would be easier. He would throw dirt in your eyes, low blow you, and anything else tgat would give him a advantage over his opponents. When the Katens formed the Gotei 13, Setsuna created a human form to protect the humans without them knowing it was him. He knew that nobody would trusted him or wanted him to protect them.

On the day the Shingami attacked, Setsuna used his cheating style Torrey and beat them, but it was shut down by a man with great power. The man completely dominated Setsuna. During the battle, Setsuna realized that cheating wasn't going to get him anywhere. If he wanted to be stronger, he would need to focus on his skill.

The day he was awaken, he looked more cold hearted. Setsuna forgot everything in his past except for the guy who defeated him. He wanted to fight a man with the same power and defeat them, but without cheating. Setsuna vowed to never cheat again. Setsuna follows the other Katens in their battle, and he will not stop until they take back what's theirs.

Zanpakutō Name: Hebi (Snake)

Zanpakutō Type: Vemon

Sealed Zanpakutō:
Seal




Zanpakutō Spirit:
Spirit




Shikai Incantation: "Hebi, Come and spread your Vemon"

Release Appearance:
Release



Description: The Zanpakutō turns into 9 pieces of steel held together by a rope. It is able to extend 5 feet and coil on the opponents body.


Abilities: Snake Hug: The sword coils on the opponent body and squeezes hard so the opponent can't breath for 1 post.






Bankai Name: Kobura (Cobra)

Bankai Incantation: "Kobura, lend me your power and allow me to spread your Vemon to our enemies"

Release Appearance:
Bankai Release




Description: Now all Setsuna has as weapon are the two snake tails on his suit. The two tails can both extend 5 feet and they both have venom on their tip


Abilities: Venom Shower: The tip of the two tails can spit venom out, but it is limited. Setsuna can use this ability 5 times. After the 5th time, Setsuna venom runs out and he has to wait 8 post to get it back. (Range: 5 feet)





Kōchaku Name: Baron

Kōchaku Incantation: "It's time for me to show you my true form. Baron, arise and spread your venom!"

Release Appearance:
Baron



Abilities:


Venom Spit: Spits venom the size as soccer balls. If hit with the venom ball, the opponent will have a hard time seeing ( 2 post)

Venom Claw: Venom forms around his claws for 2 post. Once the opponent gets scratch, he becomes badly poisoned (2 post). The poison makes it hard for the opponent to move.

Venom Armor: Venom covers his body for
2 post. Can block 2 Hadō, 2 Bakudō ,and 1 Bankai attack (2 post)

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Hadō:

31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefaell)
54. Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames)
58. Tenran (闐嵐, Swelling Storm)
63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear)
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall)
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin)
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) ·

Bakudō:
1. Sai (塞 lit. Restrain)
4. Hainawa (這縄 lit. Crawling Rope)
6. Shibireyubi (しびれ指 lit. Numbing Finger)
8. Seki (斥 lit. Repulse)
8. Geki (撃 lit. Strike)
12. Hakufuku (白伏 lit. White Crawl)
15. Inemuri (威眠 lit. Forced Slumber)
30. Shitotsu Santen (嘴突三閃 lit. Beak-Piercing Triple Beam)
46. Tanma Otoshi (タンマ落とし lit. Time-Out Drop)
50. Kishikan (既視感 lit. Deja Vu)
58. Kukushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀 lit. Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows)
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢 lit. Six Rods Prison of Light)
79. Kuyō Shibari (九曜縛 lit. Nine Sunlight Traps)
81. Dankū (斷空 lit. Splitting Void)
87. Tsumi (罪 lit. Sin)
89. Tengoku no Mon (天国の門 lit. Heavenly Gate)
99. Bankin (卍禁 lit. Great Seal)
Other: Celestial Portal

Okay then, I'm going to do general things first this time around, so let's get started. Your first Shikai ability needs a cool down as do all of the moves of your Kochaku form. Additionally, you can only have three techniques in your Kochaku form. As such, you'll have to remove one.

This next bit is more of a personal request, but you have a large number of pictures, the majority of which are huge. Please reduce their size or put them in hypertext using BBC Code to make navigation easier.


Hobbies and Likes are free to be empty, but remember these are beings that have been around for a very long time. Although they've been sealed for most of it, they could have formed hobbies either recently or before they were sealed, the same for likes and dislikes.


For your bio, lengthen it just a bit, it's barely under the passing rate.


As mentioned above, it needs a cool down.


You are allowed up to four more Shikai techniques.


Needs a cool down between each shot and a range.


You are allowed two more Bankai techniques.


All of your Kochaku, as mentioned above, need cool downs and for some of them ranges. Additionally, you have too many Kochaku, please remove one.

Quote me when you're finished.

A post limit in which the technique(s) used cannot be used again, until the post time period is over. The post cool down is always given in the user's posts.

Are you the Monkey or Snake Katena?


This needs a range.


Also needs a range.


What does the poison do? How long does the poison last on his claws?


How strong of an attack can this block?

This needs a last time in posts.


Please state up to what number Kido you can block. I'd also downtone the strength of the attack it can block. Maybe a few Shikai abilities?

Put something like, can block up to 3 Shikai attacks, or 1 Bankai attack...or something of the like.

Alright, it just needs a cooldown time in posts, and then you're good to go.