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 Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:43 am
Name: Leon Galadriel Bawdly
Nickname: Lad
Age: 16
Birthday: December 24
Sign: Capricorn
Gemstone: Ruby
Blood Type: AB
Fav. Food: Grilled Cheese and Avocado Sandwiches, Rice Krispy Treats
Hated Food: Fish Sticks
School: Meadowview
Hobbies:
Natural History - Lad absolutely loves everything about Nature. Evolution fascinates him, the secret, silent life of the trees intrigue him and as for the animals. Well. No matter how weird or downright creepy they are, he loves them. Lad is a frequent visitor to the local Natural History Museum and quite frankly, could run rings around some of the employees when it comes to information about their exhibits and specimens. To date, his favorite exhibit is the Into Jurassic Park one. It had models from the movies and fossils and a Triceratops busting through the front lobby and and and! Oh, the things he learned were so awesome! SO AWESOME!
Whittling - The art of carving wood and bone into things snared Lad’s mind when he was about seven years old and went to see an old man skilled in the art at one of the local art museums. That such dried up and often ugly, dark things could be transformed into delicate, bright little things was fascinating. And nothing would do on the way home, but for Lad to beg his parents to let him try it and learn. Appropriately, they bought him a small, beginners Swiss Army Knife, several bars of Ivory soap and stood careful watch as he learned through trial and error. While he hasn’t quite gotten to the point where he can carve bone or antler, he’s gotten decent at carving branches into little wooden chains. He’s also carved a few pretty little spoons as gifts for his mom. It might take a lifetime to get as good as that old man, but Lad is willing to put in the work.
Nail Art - Male though he may be, Lad has always had a tremendous love of pretty things and well, girly stuff. He wears his hair long and in girly styles, sometimes he’ll wear girly clothes. But he will always, ALWAYS make sure his nails are done up in some pretty color with a neat design. And he will always do these manicures himself. Sure, it might get him some weird looks and nasty remarks, but who cares? It’s fun to paint his nails and doodle neat designs on them! Why, he had Avengers nails for when the movie came out. And just last week, his nails were painted to look like melon slices for summer. Besides, being able to do and enjoying nail art has put him in the lovely position of being able to hang out with some neat girls. Sure, girls might be annoying at times, but they still know all sorts of interesting stuff to talk about and Lad has no compunctions against sitting in delighted silence and listening as he dolls up their hands.
Virtues:
Outgoing - Oh hai thar! Lad would like to be your friend. Untroubled by social anxieties of any kind, Lad wants to just get out there and interact with people. He refuses to be treated oddly due to his love of girly things. Lad will be your friend whether you like it or not.
Love of Learning - In spite of his almost aggressive friendliness, Lad possesses a scholar’s heart. He loves learning for the sake of learning and isn’t afraid to ask questions. It is this love of learning that causes him to go out and try as much stuff as he can at least once. As far as Lad is concerned, God (or Whoever) gave him a brain and the free will to use it. It would be a sin to not try and get as much out of life as humanly possible! Besides, that love often puts Lad in the position of being able to share that learning and ignite a similar fire in like-minded folk.
Ambitious - Lad sees life as a twisting, winding path curving off into the ether. And those curves are the challenges that make having ambitions so very sweet. And Lad does have ambitions. Learning as much as possible, getting into a good college once he’s old enough and then? Who knows, but whatever path he chooses, he’s going to be the best! He throws himself wholeheartedly into everything he does that furthers his life's goals and feels that in doing so, he is becoming a better, more well rounded person. And the best part about ambitions is sharing them and maybe even helping other people find their own set.
Flaws:
One-Track Mind - In the midst of his ambitions, Lad sometimes loses sight of the bigger picture, focusing so hard on one thing that several other, equally important things have passed him by. This isn't such a problem when it comes to schoolwork, or at least it wasn't when his mother was teaching him. But out in the real world, he focuses so hard on his goals and his work that he sometimes neglects friends and family. He's narrowly avoided being held back a grade when he was so busy thinking about one test question, that he missed seeing the essay question that made up half of his final grade.
Impulsive - Sometimes, in the pursuit of learning or simply having a good time, Lad acts before he stops to think or even get permission. Like the time he decided on his own that he was ready to move from soap bars to pieces of wood without checking with his parents. He wound up in the ER with a sliced finger. Or the time he nearly got caught in a flash flood behind his house because he was more interested in getting outside and finding a particular bug than he was in taking the two seconds needed to listen to the weather report. Lad means well and does try to stop and think. But sometimes he has things to do and just can’t take the time!
Arrogant - Thanks to his ability to learn and his familiarity with his museum haunts, Lad’s developed a rather arrogant streak. He can floor adults with his leet knowledge skillz. Lad is DA MAN. Clearly. Unfortunately, no one with any real influence over Lad caught onto this trait in time to n** it, so his arrogance has had time to grow and take root. Lad is just awesome, thank you SO much.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Wide, deep-set and a soft yellow-ish green in color
Hair: A bit past should length and usually done up in a girly style completely with cute accessories. Should be a pretty dark chocolate color with tangerine colored tipping.
Face: Sun-tanned skin with a smattering of dark freckles across his nose. Largish ears, average nose and a slightly squared face. Usually grinning cheerfully.
Clothes: Meadowview uniform. When not in school, he favors outdoorsy clothes with a touch of femininity somewhere about his person. He wears a couple of small hoops in his left ear cartilage and always has his nails painted.
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Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:44 am
Senshi: Sailor Yildun, DMC Senshi of the Behemoth
Challenge: Behold now the Behemoth
Fuku Colour: Black
Main Color: Bright, Magma Orange
Secondary Color: Pale, Icy Blue-White
Fuku: Kaiju inspired with a hint of girlyness
Collar -- CC
Bow -- CC
Bodice -- CC
Sleeves -- CC
Brooch -- CC
Bottoms -- CC
Tiara -- CC
Choker -- CC
Shoes -- CC
Gloves -- CC
Accessories -- CC
Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Behemoth's Swagger
When cast, Yildun is wrapped in an earthy looking (albeit illusory) armored shell for 20-30 seconds. While so armored, his hits pack a little extra punch, subjecting his opponent to mild to moderate bruising depending on where the blow hits. Can be used twice per battle.
Super Sailor Scout Attack: Behemoth's Strike
As above, Yildun becomes wrapped in magical armor, however now it has a slightly more monstrous appearance. He is armored now for approximately 30-40 seconds and his hits have even more force behind them resulting in moderate to severe bruising. His hits are also now accompanied by a small spray/burst of sand/dirt which does nothing really for the attack. Can be used once per battle.
Eternal Sailor Attack: Behemoth's Rage
Yildun's armored shell now resembles a large monster (Magical Mutant Rhino-Hippo) that moves and strikes as he does (think similar to a Jaeger). This can only be cast once and will last for 45 seconds. Moderate to severe bruising are common effects of being struck, but now with the added possibility of being knocked off their feet courtesy of a large-ish burst of pebbly earth that accompanies each blow thrown by Yildun regardless of whether or not said blow lands on its target.
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Posted: Tue Sep 10, 2013 9:22 pm
Hey Kao here to do your critique and help you get a stamp. Sorry for the wait, my work schedules a little awkward right now! Now on to your boy.
Civilian:
His hobbies look just fine to me. I really like them!
His virtues, Love of learning and Ambitious, need a bit of clarification as to why each would make someone admire him and want to be friends with him. I can see how they benefit him, but its not totally clear how they would make other's like him.
His flaws look just fine to me.
Powered:
Just a few clarification, is this armor actual armor or more of an illusion, like a flash of of the leviathan that settles over him in a basic but not physical armor? or actual physical armor?
For eternal, the spray of water occurs with the punch, of any hit? Or is the spray of water thrown even if the blow doesnt land?
Quote me when you're ready for a second look.
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:23 am
Kaori_luv Hey Kao here to do your critique and help you get a stamp. Sorry for the wait, my work schedules a little awkward right now! Now on to your boy.
Civilian:
His hobbies look just fine to me. I really like them!
His virtues, Love of learning and Ambitious, need a bit of clarification as to why each would make someone admire him and want to be friends with him. I can see how they benefit him, but its not totally clear how they would make other's like him.
His flaws look just fine to me.
Powered:
Just a few clarification, is this armor actual armor or more of an illusion, like a flash of of the leviathan that settles over him in a basic but not physical armor? or actual physical armor?
For eternal, the spray of water occurs with the punch, of any hit? Or is the spray of water thrown even if the blow doesnt land?
Quote me when you're ready for a second look.
Okay, hopefully explained things a little better. Also swapped the domain as someone literally just won Leviathan last night. XD
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 9:18 am
Okay, it looks good. I just need to know how many times his first two attacks can be used. And Im curious that since the armor is an illusion it doesnt protect him correct?
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 9:22 am
Kaori_luv Okay, it looks good. I just need to know how many times his first two attacks can be used. And Im curious that since the armor is an illusion it doesnt protect him correct?
Added and correct. All that happens is his punches pack a little extra wallop.
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 9:28 am
Alrighty, have a trial stamp! A gm will be by for the final look!
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Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 9:56 am
Looks good to me! Good luck getting him!
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