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 Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 8:22 pm
Came up with this prompt for my DND guild (Link for it is Here)here is the challenge: Prompt- Your character is a Bard (doesnt actually have to be one to write this), and s/he is writing a song/story/poem about a hero from a Generation before his/her time The Writing must be within certain bounds pending on the style you do Poem/Song- 15-20 lines minimum with some form of either a beat or rhyming Story- minimum of 1000 words, must include a short back story of the hero from the generation before, and why s/he was a hero, if s/he had a friend, use details, and make it something fun to read, it does not have to be a tragic story or even a serious one, just have fun with it!! Also- the hero must be of a GOOD background, it cannot be anyform of Evil!
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 1:06 pm
Done, there are 25 Let see if I got this right... Character: William Di Marko (Mage/Bard Violinist, also composer) Scenery: The sun rised brightly at fortuna city, where people usually gather to worship their lord sparda. The citizens always pass through the cathedral to pray at the demon's statue and begone back to each one's lives. There's a garden with a beautiful fountain that displays at the center of it just as you exit the chapel. In which a person seems to have found the perfect stage. 1.-"Ladies an gentlemen, a moment please for this humble bard has come with a single plea.
2.- Listen and judge by yourself if this bards words are delusion or truth.
3.- Here is fortuna, a city of might in which one day almost found its demise
4.- The great lord sparda, a once savior had come in the place of the judge
casting his helfire upon demon and man, no one had a place to hide.
5.- Dut then, from the dark a hero emerges, wielding a red coat as if stained in blood.
6.- He was not a hero, he was not a villian, he just wanted some fun.
7.- And between the crowd, that, was in great despair, he found what he had been seek.
8.- It is said that our lord was once with a human being.
9.- And the woman brought to this world the lords offsprings of judgment and hope.
10.- One was lost, but for our fortune, the one who carried hope was not.
11.- He grew up to be a head hunter, whose name makes the demons tremble until now.
12.- Making his way trough the demon crowds, this "saviour" bestow us his aid.
13.- Bursting and slicing each foe, angels and demons with a single blow.
14.- It was short in time, but for us mortals was eternal, to see the misterious saviour confront the demons just to look after the greatest of all, sparda.
15.- The fight was fierce and the earth thrembled with utmost despair, but when everything was lost, another hero emerged.
16.- From within the idol was another man, or was it a demon, who had rescued a young maiden.
17.- Was it fate? was this a joke? was this the moment a new legend its born
coincidence or not, we just witnessed that day.
18.- All this fight, all despair could not keep the two lovers appart.
19.- A young maiden and a demon, just as the old tale we worship. It was then, when I saw, the eyes of the red coated saviour.
20.- There was no mistake, for his power was beyond that idols.
It was clear to me, Sparda saved us that day.
21.- With the false idol gone, the darknight made his way back home, leaving the demon and the maiden to be part of their own story, as the dark night disappeared in the shadows, no to be found.
22.- The years have passed and fortuna is once again the beauty and mighty city that it once was.
23.- But it is said that evil is still lurking in every corner, waiting to rise once again.
24.- But their shiver and fear that what they cant see, that what they cant hear, he who'll inevitable come.
25.- As the final hour approaches and all hope is lost, fear not my people for the dark night will come. "So, right, not a very original post but I just wanted to see if I got the rulling right? The lore was obviously taken from DMC4.
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:02 pm
Nebbia d Argento Let see if I got this right... Character: William Di Marko (Mage/Bard Violinist, also composer) Scenery: The sun rised brightly at fortuna city, where people usually gather to worship their lord sparda. The citizens always pass through the cathedral to pray at the demon's statue and begone back to each one's lives. There's a garden with a beautiful fountain that displays at the center of it just as you exit the chapel. In which a person seems to have found the perfect stage. "Ladies an gentlemen, a moment please for this humble bard has come with a single plea.
Listen and judge by yourself if this bards words are delusion or truth.
Here is fortuna, a city of might in which one day almost found its demise
The great lord sparda, a once savior had come in the place of the judge
casting his helfire upon demon and man, no one had a place to hide.
Dut then, from the dark a hero emerges, wielding a red coat as if stained in blood.
He was not a hero, he was not a villian, he just wanted some fun.
And between the crowd, that, was in great despair, he found what he had been seek.
It is said that our lord was once with a human being. And the woman brought to this world the lords offsprings of judgment and hope.
One was lost, but for our fortune, the one who carried hope was not.
He grew up to be a head hunter, whose name makes the demons tremble until now.
Making his way trough the demon crowds, this "saviour" bestow us his aid.
Bursting and slicing each foe, angels and demons with a single blow.
It was short in time, but for us mortals was eternal, to see the misterious saviour confront the demons just to look after the greatest of all, sparda.
the fight was fierce and the earth thrembled with utmost despair, but when everything was lost, another hero emerged.
From within the idol was another man, or was it a demon, who had rescued a young maiden.
Was it fate? was this a joke? was this the moment a new legend its born
coincidence or not, we just witnessed that day. All this fight, all despair could not keep the two lovers appart. A young maiden and a demon, just as the old tale we worship. It was then, when I saw, the eyes of the red coated saviour.
There was no mistake, for his power was beyond that idols.
It was clear to me, Sparda saved us that day.
With the false idol gone, the darknight made his way back home, leaving the demon and the maiden to be part of their own story, as the dark night disappeared in the shadows, no to be found.
The years have passed and fortuna is once again the beauty and mighty city that it once was.
But it is said that evil is still lurking in every corner, waiting to rise once again.
But their shiver and fear that what they cant see, that what they cant hear, he who'll inevitable come. As the final hour approaches and all hope is lost, fear not my people for the dark night will come. "So, right, not a very original post but I just wanted to see if I got the rulling right? The lore was obviously taken from DMC4. Seems good, but next time can you number your lines so It's a bit easier to tell where each one is? because as of right now the way it reads, it has 27 lines, if i am wrong, please correct me
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:38 pm
Nebbia d Argento Done, there are 25 Let see if I got this right... Character: William Di Marko (Mage/Bard Violinist, also composer) Scenery: The sun rised brightly at fortuna city, where people usually gather to worship their lord sparda. The citizens always pass through the cathedral to pray at the demon's statue and begone back to each one's lives. There's a garden with a beautiful fountain that displays at the center of it just as you exit the chapel. In which a person seems to have found the perfect stage. 1.-"Ladies an gentlemen, a moment please for this humble bard has come with a single plea.
2.- Listen and judge by yourself if this bards words are delusion or truth.
3.- Here is fortuna, a city of might in which one day almost found its demise
3.- The great lord sparda, a once savior had come in the place of the judge
casting his helfire upon demon and man, no one had a place to hide.
5.- Dut then, from the dark a hero emerges, wielding a red coat as if stained in blood.
6.- He was not a hero, he was not a villian, he just wanted some fun.
7.- And between the crowd, that, was in great despair, he found what he had been seek.
8.- It is said that our lord was once with a human being.
9.- And the woman brought to this world the lords offsprings of judgment and hope.
10.- One was lost, but for our fortune, the one who carried hope was not.
11.- He grew up to be a head hunter, whose name makes the demons tremble until now.
12.- Making his way trough the demon crowds, this "saviour" bestow us his aid.
13.- Bursting and slicing each foe, angels and demons with a single blow.
14.- It was short in time, but for us mortals was eternal, to see the misterious saviour confront the demons just to look after the greatest of all, sparda.
15.- The fight was fierce and the earth thrembled with utmost despair, but when everything was lost, another hero emerged.
16.- From within the idol was another man, or was it a demon, who had rescued a young maiden.
17.- Was it fate? was this a joke? was this the moment a new legend its born
coincidence or not, we just witnessed that day.
18.- All this fight, all despair could not keep the two lovers appart.
19.- A young maiden and a demon, just as the old tale we worship. It was then, when I saw, the eyes of the red coated saviour.
20.- There was no mistake, for his power was beyond that idols.
It was clear to me, Sparda saved us that day.
21.- With the false idol gone, the darknight made his way back home, leaving the demon and the maiden to be part of their own story, as the dark night disappeared in the shadows, no to be found.
22.- The years have passed and fortuna is once again the beauty and mighty city that it once was.
23.- But it is said that evil is still lurking in every corner, waiting to rise once again.
24.- But their shiver and fear that what they cant see, that what they cant hear, he who'll inevitable come.
25.- As the final hour approaches and all hope is lost, fear not my people for the dark night will come. "So, right, not a very original post but I just wanted to see if I got the rulling right? The lore was obviously taken from DMC4. It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:40 pm
Ravyn94 It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on FiM? What's that?
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:42 pm
Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on FiM? What's that? Friendship is Magic
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:45 pm
Ravyn94 Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on FiM? What's that? Friendship is Magic MLP? mm sorry, never seen the series sweatdrop May I ask what gave you that idea tho?It kinda caught my curiosity. mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:50 pm
Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on FiM? What's that? Friendship is Magic MLP? mm sorry, never seen the series sweatdrop May I ask what gave you that idea tho?It kinda caught my curiosity. mrgreen It's a cross-over fanfic of some of the MLP cast and the first Final Fantasy Game (since it's the most open game in the entire series) so far, I am just barely done with the first chapter, I have a bit more to put into it before i am 100% ready to say It's Done! I also have a really great editor helping me out withit
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2013 4:59 pm
Ravyn94 Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 Nebbia d Argento Ravyn94 It's good, though you still have 26 lines (you said 1,2,3,3,5) Since youre the first post in this challenge, congrats! try to get some others to join please? also, are you a fan of FiM? if you are, i have something that may interest you i am working on FiM? What's that? Friendship is Magic MLP? mm sorry, never seen the series sweatdrop May I ask what gave you that idea tho?It kinda caught my curiosity. mrgreen It's a cross-over fanfic of some of the MLP cast and the first Final Fantasy Game (since it's the most open game in the entire series) so far, I am just barely done with the first chapter, I have a bit more to put into it before i am 100% ready to say It's Done! I also have a really great editor helping me out withit Should we take thsi discussion to another forum? I mean, so this remains as the challenge forum. But it's kinda interesting to hear. I mean I once thought that kingdom hearts was ridiculous because of Disney X FF cross over. But it ended up being one of my fav games. So, I dont see why I shouldn't take a peek if that's okay with ya?
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