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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 4:11 am
Here's where you writers can share your stories and peoms, I'm looking forward to seeing them. Hope to see you post writers.
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 5:32 pm
Hey I'm gonna try this This is a short story I formed from corpse party and messing with cleaverbot.
Ayame eyes snap open. She finds her self on the floor. The last thing she remembers is the thudding on something heaven then pain. She sits up and rubs here head. "God. My head." Her eyes grow side as the horror lays out before her. There are buckets off blood and body parts. Ayame is paralized with fear. Soon she hears noises. The thudding is coming down the hall. Ayame panics. "Where do I hide?! Where?!" She hides under the wooden table. The thudding turns out to be footsteps from this huge guy. He drops something on the table. There's this horrible strike against the table. "AaaaaaaaaaÀAAAAAAAAAAAGH!"
Anybody want a part two. Well too bad there's going to be one anyway hope you like it.
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 7:08 pm
That's pretty good, looknig forward to your next instsallment ^^
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 9:00 pm
"AAAAAAAGH AAAAAAAAH!MY LEG! AAAAAH!" The screaming was stopped when the was a sickening squishing sound. *gurgle* *gurgle* ayame flinched when she heard the squishing. She is choking back tears with her hand over her mouth trying not to make noises. There is a shuffling noise in the hall. The man turns to the door way and leaves quickly going after some thing. A game comes out from under the table. In front of her lays our a scene of horror a body of takeshi origawa. A classmate of a game. *sob* "oh god." His body had a leg missing and his tongue was cut off. Blood had fill his mouth. His stomach was cut open and his guts were taken out. Ayame gagged and start puking nothing but stomach acid. For there was nothing left after the first time she retched. *sob* *HIC* "I have to get out of here!" Panic starts to set in again. Ayame runs through the bomb shelter tunnels under the school. She doesn't stop until she gets to the first floor of the heavenly host elementary school. She drops to here knees and breaks down again. "Why why did this have to happen..." *Hic* ayame heard a takeshi's voice. "Takeshi? Takeshi you are still alive?!" She runs and the voice leads here to the infirmary. "Takeshi?! The door slams shut behind her. She turns around and pulls on it harder and harder. It won't even move a little. "YoU WoN't EsCaPe....." *!!!* she turns around and right in front of her is a black shadow spirit all you can make out is eye and a mouth. I grab her by the throat and some of the black shadow mass gives into her mouth. Ayame kicks and flails till it let's her go. She slames the door open and runs out. she finally stops running when she ends up at the bathroom. She blacks out............... Shishido comes into the girls bathroom. "Hey rae these seem perfectly normal." Rae and shishido come up.to the stalls "hold on shi look.a rope...." shishido approaches the stall with a flash light. She pushes on the bathroom stall door lightly. "Something's blocking it." She pushes on it harder and it swings open revealing the hung body of ayame kagami..... The end.
Well hat was part two he last and final part of ayames story. I started in the middle because it was easier and she ended up dying because I can't remember how to get out of the heavenly host correctly. My story's may be more than one part
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 22, 2013 10:35 pm
Allow me to share a little something. neutral Behind Blue Eyes
"Why must it always be this way? Does she not remember our past?" ~Sargent Surge~
A boy and a girl, about middle school aged, walked towards a suburban area out in Okinawa. Together the two were insuperable and were friends since childhood. They arrived at the girl's house and her happiness drained from her face, ans she began to shudder. "What's wrong Minoko?" the boy asked, a she placed his hand on her shoulder. He looked into her lovely steel blue eyes and seen fear in them, and that's when he noticed marks, form being hit. From afar, the girl looked fine ,but closely, you could see bruises and cuts, as well as scars. "Who did this to you? Was it that step father of yours? I'll make him pay for hurting you." The boy said, angrily. He headed for the porch of Minoko's home and was about to barge in, to locate and harm her step father. She grabbed his arm and buried her face in it. "Don't do it Rico. he's probably drunk by now and is waiting for me. I don't want him to hurt you for sticking up for me. Please just take me to your house. They wouldn't notice that I'm missing ,honest." she blurted out, as she tried not to cry. Rico reluctantly agreed, and picked up the girl's book bag ,and turned around with her in tow, as he heard the screen door open. "Minoko, get in here, now! you best not be with that boy,I swear I'll ring his neck and then beat you for being with him!" Her stepfather called out, in a stupor. "Run, Rico!" She said, as she began to run. he followed behind her. They arrived at the hill before Rico's house and the two sat atop it. "Why does your mother put u with him ,and allow him to hurt you, Minoko, that isn't' right." Rico confessed, as he held Minoko close. She was in tears by then, tears of joy that she was away form harm. " Please let me stay with you for a couple of days, maybe. I really don't want to go back. He hurts me all the time ,after my mom's in a coma from her drug injections and from him hitting her ,for trying to keep me safe." She said ,as she held her arms tightly around Rico. "It's worse what he does afterwards. I'm just too scared to stay there." she added ni as she started to cry. " You can stay, but we have to tell my mom, at least about him hurting you." Rico said as he hugged her, as comfort. She squealed out in joy at his answer, and when she was calm again, they headed fro his home.
That night was stormy, and the two friends enjoyed the company ans safety of Rico's home, with his caring mother, who agreed to keeping Minoko there for the time being. "You're always welcome here ,Minoko. Feel free to come here whenever you don;t feel safe where ever you're at." Rico'smother said, a she gave the girl a hug. They three talked for a bit, then it was off to bed, seeing ti was a school night, and towards the middle of the night, as lightning and thunder began to dance across the sky. Minoko, waking up from a nightmare of the sort, rushed into Rico's room, waking him up. He woke up and turned on a desk lamp. "What's wrong, Minoko?" He asked, as he rubbed his eyes ans looked at the girls frightened expression. "I had a bad dream about back at my home. I don't ant to be alone is all." she replied, as she laid on the other side of Rico's bed, pulling the covers over her. "Alright. you can stay in here, for tonight." He said, with a yawn as he shut the light off, but before he did, he looked at the picture of his father, a fallen soldier first, before shutting the light off. As the light went out, Rico got comfortable next to Minoko ,and fell asleep, as she fell into a deep slumber, like one she seemed to never have before.Well, this is just a background story for one of my characters I've created in the past, hoped you enjoyed.
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Posted: Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:42 am
Alright well by the way thanks Rico for the compliments and yours was nice too. Most of my stories might be about horror or murder cause that just all I'm talented at.
It has been a month since kikyo has been in school. Not since she lost her arm to a gang in the park..... "Kikyo? You're coming to school to day right? You're now gonna bail again?" Shigami stood outside the girl house yelling. Shigami was kikyos only friend and at his school he gets called shinigami a lot cause of how he dresses out side of school and his name. "Y-yea! I'm coming just go on a head with out me. I-i'll be there!" Kikyo is a shy and timid girl who doesn't branch out and gets bullied a lot. ....."kikyo? Kikyo? Shin- shigami where is kikyo today? You said she'd be here." The teacher is american. He moved here to start fresh. His name is Paul Sydney. Every one calls him Mr. Paul. "Maybe the monster isn't coming today like always.." the head bully is otome. Shigami believes she is the whole reason kikyo was at the park that night. "Otome! One more word about her like that and you sitting with me after school!"
That was part one of this story this one with be longer than the last one. I will use colors in some of the stories so you know who's talking.
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 23, 2013 4:33 pm
Thanks for the comment, oh and no worries about the genre type, the actual full version of this doesn't end well.
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Posted: Sat Mar 23, 2013 5:56 pm
Part two!!! "......" otome shuts up discouraged. "She's coming don't worry!" Shigami bites his lower lip. There's a knock at the door. Out in the hall kikyo almost chickened out after being called a monster. She takes a deep breathe and lightly taps her head on the door. "C-can.......can shigami open the door please? I have a lot of homework in my hand." No one but shigami and her family know that her left arm is missing. The police promised not to release any details that would give away here identity. Kikyo is very worried that she'll get bullied even more. Today she finally worked up enough nerve to come to school finally. Shigami get up and opens the door. "Kikyo I thought you almost bailed." shigami takes kikyo's books and homework and takes them to her desk. Kikyo walks in "Oh my god! Your the loser who got their arm cut off and well we all know what happened after that." otome is snickering at her remark. OKAY THATS IT! OTOME! out in the hall now!" otome leaves the classroom.
Part three coming soon!
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 24, 2013 8:34 pm
Excellent work. Your dialogue's pretty well.
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 6:05 am
I'm trying to make its murder again but it might just be a case of bullying or something
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 6:14 am
"sorry about kikyo. Otome will apologize later after I talk to her in the hall." Mr. Paul leaves the room. "that's alright I will talk to here later at the park. I mean we do walk the same path home..."
sorry have to cut part three short got to text voodoo in twenty different languages
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 6:28 am
it's no problem, it's your story after all
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Zen the Keeper of Chrono Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:23 pm
hope you like BL novels(Boys Love, yaoi) I'm sharing this excerpt from oneI"m working on.
Everytime he touches me, I can't help but want to smolder him. ~Tobi~
The light of the full moon shown brightly through the boy's window. Within the areas of which the light reached ,we find two lovers carrassing eachother, trying to play the other's fantasy. "let's stop here Tobi-san, please." Hiro whimpered. "Oh but you're almost at your limit, just a bit more." Tobi whispered into his ear. He liked the other's neck as he rubbed his hands along his waist, thrusting in further and further. Hiro couldn't help but melt to the feel of Tobi's private parts inside of him. "No...aah. Please.. mm.. lets' s-stop." he said in between cries of joy. " You say stop but your body says don't. just relax, Hiro. Relax." Tobi said, yet again in a whisper. He pulled Hiro closer to him, as he continued his thrusts, making the boy wrap his arms tightly around his neck. Hiro could not keep up the fight, they way Tobi touched him in this manner made him melt like ice on a hot day. He blushed deeply, as he wrapped his free body part tightly around his lover, feeling his c**k rub along Tobi's stomache. "Tobi-san." Was all he could say ,as he continued to fall to his touch. Tobi then pulled out, allowing his thick c** shoot out all over Hiro, a she did the same. he then laid on the pillows to the side of him ,and turned to face him. Hiro turned away, blushing in shame at what had happened. Tobi turned Hiro towards him ,and kissed his lips. "Don't be embarassed, you did great." He said to him, before he kissed his lips. Reluctantly and with lust, Hiro kissed the other boy back ,and when the two had finished, Hiro fell asleep atop of Tobi's chest.Wel lthis is my first time writing a yaoi excerpt, hope you yaoi fanatics liked it ^^. Feel free to comment.
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 4:26 pm
At lunch time kikyo sat alone like usual because shigami had a job at the market. Otome was staring at kikyo from across the room. *oh every one just loooves kikyo. She's sooo innocent.* she gets up and goes over to kikyo. "hey kikyo how'd it feel huh to know that only your mom and dad and shiningami only care about you? To know that everyone else didn't even care about what happened to you?" "that's only because the police didn't let out any details of who got attacked. And don't call shigami that he doesn't like that name." kikyo said quietly continuing to eat her lunch. "what was that?"she back hands kikyo to the ground. " who the hell have you the right to speak you ******** little one armed monster freak! Tell anyone what I did or said or there will be another arm missing. That goes for all of you. I have connections so don't get any ideas!" kikyo froze in fear from getting up.
Part five coming soon.
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Posted: Tue Mar 26, 2013 11:05 am
"y-y-you... you..." the door slowly starts to slide open. Otome runs over to kikyo and starts to pull her up off the ground. Mr. Paul comes in "oh my gosh! Kikyo are you alright?!" otome finally gets kikyo to her feet "oh she tripped and fell." "thank you for doing something good for once, otome."
Part six will come sometime.
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