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[Shinigami] Tony Runkai Divison 10 captain

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shikamaru xxx temari

PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:15 pm



Player Name: Shikamaru xxx temari
Character Name: Runkai Tony
Position: Captain
Character Age(Appearance Age): User Image
Date of Birth: 12-4
Height: 5'2
Weight: 78 lb
Eye Color: red
Hair Color: red
Parentage: Of the Runkai family
Siblings/Children: None
Sexuality: Straight
Descriptive Markings: Tony has a X scar going down his back and another large scar on his chest

Personality: Tony is a very laid back person who is very easy to get along with but when Tony is in a fight he is very cautious of his team and friends making sure they aren't harmed
Character Strengths: When with freinds Tony takes it on himself to protect his friends at all costs
Character Weaknesses: Tony is a very heavy drinker and some times gets into a fight when drunk is terrible at fighting when drunk

Likes: Sake , girl's , being around friend's , some times being alone
Dislikes: Fighting , Espada's ,and sun light
Favorite Food: Pizza

Zanpakuto Name: Shinkimaru
Sealed Description: The swords in the picture above
Spirit Form Description: User Image
Shi-Kai: Tony's shikai changes his swords into one sword and his hair grows longer
Ban-Kai:

Kido: none
Bakudou: 1-8
Hado: 1-18
Path Specialty: Hado

Abilities/Special Training: shunpo ,and hand to hand combat

Biography: Tony was the top student in his class when he went to the soul academy . One day when he was on a hollow elimenating run he was slashed across the chest leaving a huge scar across his chest . later in life tony became the Lt of squad 10 and was on a special mission with his captain. After they completed the captain became very sick and died from a unknown heart disease . Tony was devestated that his catain died since he was very close with the captain . Tony was later promoted to the captain position and watches out for the members of his divison and his friends.
Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4oacmRI_Dw

Roleplay Example:
Tony stared at his opponet with sheer disapointment " Your my opponet this is embarressing" he said with a little laugh " How am i suppose to get stronger when i'm fighting a low class like you " he said looking at the sky then quickly drawing one sword then throwing it at his opponets head hitting his mark " Didn't even need shikai to finish you off " he said then went to gab his sword he then pulled his sword out of his opponets head and left the battle ground
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:48 pm


    we already have a division eleven captain.

hoenest
Crew

Darling


shikamaru xxx temari

PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:52 pm


ok i'll change it
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:55 pm


shikamaru xxx temari
ok i'll change it

    of course.
    don't hesitate to quote me when you have completed your profile.

hoenest
Crew

Darling


shikamaru xxx temari

PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 4:59 pm


tanqela
shikamaru xxx temari
ok i'll change it

    of course.
    don't hesitate to quote me when you have completed your profile.

Finished
PostPosted: Thu Dec 06, 2012 5:24 pm


shikamaru xxx temari


    i'm sorry, but this profile does not deserve the rank of captain.

    let me list why (since i like to make lists):

    x where is the description of his attacks? he needs attacks, does he not? how does he defend himself? how does he attack? what are his set moves?

    x there is no imagination in this profile whatsoever, it seems like it was created in under ten minutes.

    x grammar is terrible. 'nough said.

    x i am not impressed. there is little to basically no description of your character whatsoever.

    x your roleplay example is not worthy of a captain spot. we require our higher ups to be at the least semi-literate.

    x it's opponent, not opponet.

    x the pictures stretch my page, and make the profile seem unproffesional to me.

    x IT LACKS CHARACTER DESCRIPTION. in this guild, we are quite a**l about descriptions. details in writing make us swoon.

    x ohmygod, your biography. emotion_facepalm

    x sad thing is i am probably the easiest grader amongst the crew members.

    x please refer to these to see how we like our captains' profiles to be.

    x get offended or not, this profile is not at all exemplary.

hoenest
Crew

Darling

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