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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:31 pm
Name: Davidson History: The famous chichi clan well known for blood thirst psychos Davidson is the second in line to lead the clan. However unlike the other he has somewhat of a sane mind. Nick named the 5O5 for his well know second form a.k.a his bankai form. He once killed 505 hollows with his bankai form. Davidson tended to keep to himself and stay from others, since he was not blood thirsty like the rest of his clan he was banished until he learn the joy of killing. Dislikes: losing people who get in his way, and pineapples Sexual Orientation: straight Reiatsu Color: red and black -Zanpakutou Info- A plain sword with black wraps on it. Zanpakutou Name: Cry until you die Zanpakutou Spirit Description: Black figures one with claws and the other with a sword, both have a very evil smile. And always battle with Davidson telling him to kill everything. Zonpakutou: Plan sword with black ribbons and cloth on it Shikai : Claws Shikai skills/technique : 1) ~300 fist~ Allows him to make 300 punches attacks in a few seconds. 2) ~Tear apart~ the claws grow super long like a sword. Bankai name Reap all life in the world Bankai infoDavidson's Bankai is when his sword turns to claws, which have spikes on them; they are black and made of the strongest steel and some times blood for intimidation. And allows him to use them in the way he knows best, as in the picture the claws are the bankai. His claws become smaller but more lethal making hand to hand combat his element, He also gets chains on him that he can use to trap and grapple his opponents and leave them helpless. Once trapped in his spiked chains he is able to turn them on fire or use the spikes to ripe you into pieces.(if the number rolled is odd the chains get spikes, If rolled an even number the chains turn into fire chains.) Last but not least his wings enable him to play and use wing attacks to knock back his foes or use the wind as blades. His ultimate attack is when he fly high up in the sky and uses his chains to pull him to the ground, after hitting it with his fist an ambush of huge spikes hit his foe (only can use once every 3 days or else hurts himself really bad, also very tired after using this attack most likely last resort.) ~Rest in pieces biggrin ~ Bankai form  Flash step Extra Weapon(s) or Items: Wings (bankai form only) spikes and chains (Bankai only)
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:54 pm
Dark Davidson Shikai skills/technique: 1) ~1'000 claws~ Allows him to make 1'000 stabs in a mere second. 2) ~tear apart~ the claws grow super long like a sword. Bankai name Reap all life in the world Bankai infoHis claws turn black reaping and poisoning anything they touch. the poison doesn't kill you but feeds off your own power making you slower and weaker through out the time you are in battle. He gets chains on him that he can use to trap and grapple his opponents and leave them helpless Heya heya! I will be your judge for today! Your shikai 1 is a huge nono. If I said I could kill you with a flick, you would be very unhappy. Try getting yourself stabbed 1000 times in a second and survive. Its simply over powered. Your bankai is also a little over powered, and similar to my poison haha. There needs to be a time line. Person is pulled a little bit by post one, and by post seven their limbs feel heavy or something like that. Please make the changes <3
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 12:40 pm
This looks awesome! 1,000 punches would be good for a Captain level. Why not make it three hundred for this rank, seven hundred for LT rank, and one thousand for Captain? Now what we have to do is this. - Spelling corrections. You have microsoft word on your computer I'm sure, if not, there is an online spell checker. - A little more detail in your shikai for your first attack. I suggest only being able to use this attack once every seven posts. - First describe what your Bankai looks like, then tell us your weapon, then tell us your abilities. It will make a lot more sense. The bankai in itself is alright, I just need some clarification before I can pass it. Please quote me here when the changes are made <3
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 6:35 pm
Tanya Kageryuu This looks awesome! 1,000 punches would be good for a Captain level. Why not make it three hundred for this rank, seven hundred for LT rank, and one thousand for Captain? Now what we have to do is this. - Spelling corrections. You have microsoft word on your computer I'm sure, if not, there is an online spell checker. - A little more detail in your shikai for your first attack. I suggest only being able to use this attack once every seven posts. - First describe what your Bankai looks like, then tell us your weapon, then tell us your abilities. It will make a lot more sense. The bankai in itself is alright, I just need some clarification before I can pass it. Please quote me here when the changes are made <3 kk done spelling might be the only thing
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 9:57 pm
Dark Davidson "... describe what your Bankai looks like, then tell us your weapon, then tell us your abilities. It will make a lot more sense. The bankai in itself is alright, I just need some clarification before I can pass it. Correct, spelling is still an issue. Again, tell what your bankai looks like. THEN tell us what your weapon is and what it does. It's the same thing as the last time I asked for you to clarify it.
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2012 11:12 pm
Tanya Kageryuu Dark Davidson "... describe what your Bankai looks like, then tell us your weapon, then tell us your abilities. It will make a lot more sense. The bankai in itself is alright, I just need some clarification before I can pass it. Correct, spelling is still an issue. Again, tell what your bankai looks like. THEN tell us what your weapon is and what it does. It's the same thing as the last time I asked for you to clarify it. i have a picture what it looks like the claws and the creepy form. this people is why i spend my free time in a dark coner, this is too powerful it doesn't exsplain much, not enoguh detail. well ******** sorry if i'm just a ******** outcast who thought it might be fun to join an ******** guild for once, just kick me we both know i'll never get it to you likings Sigh
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 12:50 am
Dark Davidson i have a picture what it looks like the claws and the creepy form. this people is why i spend my free time in a dark coner, this is too powerful it doesn't exsplain much, not enoguh detail. well --- sorry if i'm just a -- outcast who thought it might be fun to join an -- guild for once, just kick me we both know i'll never get it to you likings Sigh Im trying to help you Davidson. Refrain from swearing. I told you how it should be done, so then its clear for whoever reads it. What I asked was quite simple. If many people have told you this, then pick up your lip and accept the constructive critasism. I shall give you one more chance Davidson. I try not to be a cruel person, and try to be kind. However if you speak in such a way and wont do what I ask, I will kick you from the guild. Also. You will stop swearing in my guild.
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2012 12:41 pm
Tanya Kageryuu Dark Davidson i have a picture what it looks like the claws and the creepy form. this people is why i spend my free time in a dark coner, this is too powerful it doesn't exsplain much, not enoguh detail. well --- sorry if i'm just a -- outcast who thought it might be fun to join an -- guild for once, just kick me we both know i'll never get it to you likings Sigh Im trying to help you Davidson. Refrain from swearing. I told you how it should be done, so then its clear for whoever reads it. What I asked was quite simple. If many people have told you this, then pick up your lip and accept the constructive critasism. I shall give you one more chance Davidson. I try not to be a cruel person, and try to be kind. However if you speak in such a way and wont do what I ask, I will kick you from the guild. Also. You will stop swearing in my guild. first off i like to say sorry being emo is not good but i feel alaone all the time and forgive me if i spas some times, any way i took this and corrected it in a word document so hopefully it's better sorry about before and i'll try as many times as it takes to get this done biggrin
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Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2012 12:54 pm
Dark Davidson Tanya Kageryuu Dark Davidson i have a picture what it looks like the claws and the creepy form. this people is why i spend my free time in a dark coner, this is too powerful it doesn't exsplain much, not enoguh detail. well --- sorry if i'm just a -- outcast who thought it might be fun to join an -- guild for once, just kick me we both know i'll never get it to you likings Sigh Im trying to help you Davidson. Refrain from swearing. I told you how it should be done, so then its clear for whoever reads it. What I asked was quite simple. If many people have told you this, then pick up your lip and accept the constructive critasism. I shall give you one more chance Davidson. I try not to be a cruel person, and try to be kind. However if you speak in such a way and wont do what I ask, I will kick you from the guild. Also. You will stop swearing in my guild. first off i like to say sorry being emo is not good but i feel alaone all the time and forgive me if i spas some times, any way i took this and corrected it in a word document so hopefully it's better sorry about before and i'll try as many times as it takes to get this done biggrin Very, very good. Look at your profile. I have bolded a few things, and underlined one. Please PM me afterwards <3
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