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 Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 12:58 pm
Okay, so this is a jutsu for the otobe clan, and looking at it, it's pretty much worthless so I wanted to edit it a little bit.
Original:
Name: Musical Inclination
Description:The user creates an intricate display of vibrations to recreate musical melodies and the illusion of instruments. This is often used as a tool for amusement in the Otobe compound, and allows an Otobe to play without a real instrument, in addition to adding to a bit of flare to any performance they give.
Rank: D
Cp Cost: 15 per post
Attack Turns: N/A
Reflex DC: N/A
Damage: N/A
Requirements: 15 Chakra Control, 10 Ninjutsu Otobe
Training: 2
Stage I: DC: 25 Chakra Control. Simply listen to music, intently however, using one's second self to fully attune to the motion of the sounds waves, and work with one's chakra to think at how to imitate the effect.
Stage II: DC: 25 Ninjutsu Put your work to practice now as you initiate replicating the sound of an instrument, a song, or other work of music.
Special: Allows an Otobe to add their Chakra Control roll to any Music Based Performance.
New:
Name: Musical Inclination
Description:The user creates an intricate display of vibrations to recreate musical melodies and the auditory illusions. This is often used as a tool for amusement in the Otobe compound, and allows an Otobe to play without a real instrument, in addition to adding to a bit of flare to any performance they give. However, the jutsu is not limited to instruments and the Otobe often use this in battle to scare their opponents.
Rank: D
Cp Cost: 15 per post
Attack Turns: 1
Reflex DC: N/A
Damage: N/A
Requirements: 15 Chakra Control, 10 Ninjutsu Otobe
Training: 2
Stage I: DC: 25 Chakra Control. Simply listen to music, intently however, using one's second self to fully attune to the motion of the sounds waves, and work with one's chakra to think at how to imitate the effect.
Stage II: DC: 25 Ninjutsu Put your work to practice now as you initiate replicating the sound of an instrument, a song, or other sound.
Special: Allows an Otobe to add their Chakra Control roll to any Music Based Performance or intimidation check.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 2:42 pm
Shouldn't there be some type of check for when this is used to confuse? Perhaps a will check? I mean not everybody will be confused by this.
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Posted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 6:32 pm
hedpefan Shouldn't there be some type of check for when this is used to confuse? Perhaps a will check? I mean not everybody will be confused by this. Well the check is the intimidation check you would roll anyway, I guess when I mean confuse just like a character being like "Wow what? Yikes" I'll edit it to say scare.
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:51 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 2:10 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:58 pm
I'm going to have to vote no.
Just because the technique does not do what you want it to do does not mean that it is worthless. The original technique is well crafted in theme, and well balanced.
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