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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 6:48 pm
This will be used to settle a master of swordsplay dispute between Yummybiscuits and Slevin Corpse. Simple as that.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2012 6:52 pm
Rules are as follows:
x Only Yummybiscuits and Slevin Corpse may post. x This fight will be decided simply, and quickly. There will be ten posts from each fighter. Afterwards, there will be a vote between active members. x Shikai and Bankai are not allowed. x This is for fun, and to settle a dispute.
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:54 pm
Why is this ooc? My time is free now, i can battle you in my training ground or perhaps a simple dojo... Also shouldnt the captains have their own like place thread where they can post new threads for the barracks, training, office stuff like that?
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:07 pm
Slevin Corpse Why is this ooc? My time is free now, i can battle you in my training ground or perhaps a simple dojo... Also shouldnt the captains have their own like place thread where they can post new threads for the barracks, training, office stuff like that? This is OoC because your character just took place in a fight, and mine is still busy in character. Post, and it shall begin the bout.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:28 am
Marrock Corpse, the Captain Commander of squad one, had accepted a small test of skill from the kenpachi of squad eleven just to see who’s swordsman ship was better, wether he won or lost this experience would not go to waste. The Commander stood before the other, several meters away in light battle gear: Vambrace, greaves and a bulky looking vest that was well hidden behind the sash he formed out of the first division haori, of course the symbol was visible on the backside and the integrity wasn’t messed up. His greaves and vambrace held the same design, ebony steel with a white outlining. They were made for defense and weight; they also added a small amount to the strength considering how heavy they were, enough to slow a captain down, let alone the Captain Commander. The greaves held the same purpose to protect the shins while at the same time slowing him to a almost half of what he would be without them. His vest was the heaviest of the set, while it provided great protection to the centerline, it also made him a turtle, great defense but slow speed while his attack was well enough on its own to be left alone.
He stepped around the dojo, his short sword at the ready sheathed to his right hip. His eyes were roaming around, the walls were wooden, the doors were the old style that slid and were usually made of a mixture of wood and paper. The walls were covered in bamboo swords, practice weapons held up by wooden racks, along with training dummies moved against the walls and mainly to the back centre of the dojo. Four pillars held the room up and create a small arena type setting; while the pillars were wooden they also had heavy padding to withstand actual sword blows and to prevent the wooden from cracking. The width of the room was about ten yards apart and the length was thirty yards, plenty of room to move around in and jump back if needed, an all around good place to fight without letting the enemy run. His clothing, beyond the light armor, was the traditional shinigami outfit, the sleeves and pants legs made tight by his armor and his chest unusually bulky from the vest. His sandals had been replaced by combat boots, steel frame, plated and toed, they were somewhat heavy but nothing hindering the were simply made to fend off attacks with the underside or stop heavy stuff from hurting your toe’s as combat boots were made to do.
The Warrior was pacing back to back, standing only about three yards away from his opponent, that’s when he stopped. His eyes focused, and narrowed all at once, while his stance suddenly turned statuesque, motion less, like a calm stream. His unsealed sword was that resembling a western combat knife. It had a Bowie design, with the blade being a 12 inch strip of sharp, masterfully made, deadly chunk of metal. The handle fit into his hand perfectly and even went easily into every strike. The back end was jagged and sharp, like a saw or shark teeth. The sleek and graceful design complimented the warrior, he assumed was meant to make the first move, so he obliged with a skip in his step. The rhythmic patter of his footsteps led up to his attack, his body was turned with his left shoulder, and blade in his left hand, turned toward the opponent. He took quick choppy steps that closed the gap, his eyes focusing on the general area to watch for the incoming strike, a few more steps passed and he was within a good yards, using the ease of movement and light weight design of his knife he moved in like a shark, his blade splits the oxygen.
He didn’t hesitate, he didn’t wait to react, he leaped in like a cobra to be felt before being seen through his skill he brought his blade upwards for a diagonal slice, one that would be straight across the chest, while the single handed blade was apart of him, he moved it like it was his own hand and if that attack had been blocked, or if it struck he was slice downwards for the same direction of attack. He had the knowledge to not leave room for error, this was a dance that required grace and skill, stepping on someone’s toes was fatal. If the two slashes didn’t work, he would quickly and unless stopped by having to block or dodge, he would again dash towards the direction he was already heading, to the right and while just a foot behind him reach for his wrist with his right hand. Assuming he was right handed with his blade, he would use his right hand to stop that wrist and that attack from commencing and then with his left, his bladed hand quickly thrust the combat knife into the others kidney region, then turning and pulling the blade out if it connected.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 3:00 pm
[ Location ] [ With ] Kenkaku stood, almost stoically, with his blade still sheathed. He breathed in, and seethed out, the anger and rage of a swordsman. Unlike most rage, where a man finds himself unaccountable for his actions, Kenkaku also gave off an aura of calm. Controlled rage, as it was called. Used to empower a person, with a sort of righteousness. Kenkaku kept his eyes open, forever tracking the movement of his opponent. He had sent a challenge to the captain, his only superior, after hearing of the man's boasts. He was better, even than Kenkaku of the Eleventh Division. Kenkaku was to cocky of a person to let that sort of s**t slide, simple as that.
Kenkaku gently raised his right hand, and tugged on the ripped edge of his jacket. Nothing he wore look remotely like the uniform of the Death Gods. A torn up, and multiple-times-sewn-up, jacket. His pants were different too, simple loose fitting jeans, tied with a belt of leather. He didn't wear shoes at all, and neither did he wear socks. This was comfort. A true warrior would forgo such things as armor, certain types of clothing, and even shoes if it meant comfort. Much like the samurai of old, protection came second to comfort. If armor slowed you down or meant you couldn't stretch your arm out, it was bad armor. You might as well wear nothing compared to how armor could hinder a person. So, Kenkaku wore his jacket with the zipper half down, showing a slightly scared torso, lined with dense muscle. His frame was wiry, thin, almost emaciated. Kenkaku's lips curved into a smirk as Marrock began to move in for an attack.
Choppy steps. That meant the steps were measured for each length. With their speed, Marrock was definitely slowed by his armor. That was the mans first mistake. Slowness in a battle of blades meant you were gonna get hit. Hit, and ******** up. Kenkaku had a tendency to really ******** a person up simply on their speed. Masters of the blade had been felled by this man, Kenkaku, based simply on their speed. Either they were to fast, or to slow. Marrock had taken the latter handicap.
The man came into striking range. Kenny's long blade would be his handicap at this point. That left a single option, as Kenkaku saw the twitch of muscle in Marrock's neck, showing his attack preemptively. Kenkaku flipped the hold on his zanpakuto, holding it's sheathed form so that if drawn, the blade would be set along Kenkaku's forearm. Kenaku had long been left handed, so this provided a perfect defense for Marrock's right sided attack. He tugged on the hilt, pulling it a few inches from it's sheath. Marrock's blade struck the edge of Kenkaku's partially drawn blade, deflecting the attack with a solid defense. Marrock moved in for another attack, and Kenkaku once again saw the twitch of muscle. Kenkaku had a moment to react, and did so accordingly. He fully unsheathed his blade, and slashed upwards, sending his blade into Marrock's own. Yet another deflection. Kenkaku hardly felt the power in the strikes, as was his own strength.
Kenkaku, now with his blade fully drawn, went for his own attack. His teeth grit together, as his eyes burned. Kenkaku flipped the hold on the blade, using the time Marrock headed in for his own secondary attack to use the flip itself to set up another attack. Momentum was a powerful thing, useful especially in close combat. Marrock, by now, was very near with his dash. The flip set Kenkaku up with his own attack, where he slashed down towards Marrock's left shoulder. Kenkaku's attack was enhanced enough by his own momentum to have an amazing speed. Marrock's dash should bring the man directly into the range of attack Kenkaku needed for his own blade, while still having not moved himself. It would be difficult for Marrock to enact a dodge, with his own movement.
Kenkaku had yet to finish yet, however. He took two steps back, throwing the weight of his lower body back before the weight of his upper. This created an enticing target towards Marrock, should he already be moving for another attack. Kenkaku was much faster than Marrock at this time, so he was able to pull his body back before any strike occured. If an attack would follow this movement, Kenkaku's dodge left an open spot in the captain commander's movement. Kenkaku's blade, now held near his side, would rise up in a short and powerful slash. It was aimed specifically at Marrock's right armpit. In this area, multiple tendons and veins would be unprotected, and more than ready to be sliced apart. Even a grazing slice could render Marrock's arm inoperable.
that was simply how Kenkaku attacked in battle. Whittling away at defense and offense, until the person was left unable to fight. Even the weaker swordsmen would get this treatment. The battle would be a battle of wounds, and who's skill was able to push past any wounds recieved. So far, Kenkaku had proved himself more skillful with a mixture of power and accuracy. The battle would be finished soon, and then the decision of the better swordsman would occur. Kenny knew he would win.
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2012 7:14 pm
 ☯ Marrock ∞ Corpse ☯ ▸ "Pain is meant to be endured...not shown" ◂ ♞ † ♚ †♞ xx Marrock was rushing in, with no fear or ignorance of his own ability, the first slice he used was slow, light power and was meant merely as a test of skill: He was disappointed. The Kenpachi brought his sword up to block with the blade collar of his sword, that few inches of sword from out of the sheath, the two clashed together and was met with little force, he wasn’t thrown off balance it was basically an inwards defense then with Marrock’s second slash downward, the blade was fully out of the sheath and connected into the mid second of marrock’s combat knife. He felt no strength behind any of kenkaku’s blow’s, the blades deflected from one another, this man thought the Captain Commander was slow, that the armor slowed him down so much that he couldn’t fight a fast opponent but there were ways around this, but most importantly he wore this armor for the sake of his opponent, to keep them from dying to quickly: As the world always seemed to slow in his eyes, this man was no different.
He felt the cockiness in the other’s movements, just from the clashing of a blade he could feel this man’s ignorance, it showed how much he knew and that was nothing. “Oh look at that, a woman that doesn’t know any better. What’re the odds?” Marrock thought’s concerning the other’s thoughts of victory, it was all too simple to beat such a low level of skill and his speed was nothing to write home about. Like a great chess player he would calculate the moves, the moves needed to win, and substitute for the opponents actions: this was no different and the man’s brash way of fighting gave him so, so, so many options to choose from. His first attack was a downward slash to the left shoulder, he saw this a mile away, his eyes dilated, the world came to a crawl as he was standing off to the right of the man. He stepped forward to the right swinging his arm up like a blade to connect with man’s sword, armor wasn’t always as bad as the other made it out to be, he knew his own speed and it was easily on par with the armor less swordsman.
His blade was in his left hand, the others sword was against the vambrace on his arm neither giving way of force unless his arms swing used just enough force to stop the blade but not send it too far away, he had a plane and according to the other man’s fighting style it fit perfectly. The Captain Commander stepped off to the right as soon as his arm and the others blade clashed. Then on his right heel he spun just before the man would try and jump back and when he did he felt the solid wall that was the man’s vest and shoulders, before giving the man time to react and exactly as he spun around him he drove his blade towards the man’s spleen, but a few inches to the right, pretty much in the stomach. The attack was almost simultaneous with his spin, which was almost split seconds after deflecting his first attack. Considering the man was going to step back if Marrock tried to attack, this seemed a fitting attack to step back into. These movements all happened within several precise movements, the other not knowing how much his armor weighed, how fast he truly was with it, or even the real force he could put behind his attacks or the speed at which he would attack: Kenkaku made too many assumption’s, not knowing your enemy but knowing your self was only one half the key to victory.
| Location: Location | Zanpakuto State: Dormant | | Thought: Thought |
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:01 am
[ Location ] [ With ] Kenkaku almost felt the man's movement. There is a certain battle-sense a man forms after fighting as much as Kenkaku had. This sense served a man much better than sight ever could. This sense gave Kenkaku a single moment that he could react within. Marrock's speed was still hindered by the armor, as his Shunpo showed. Kenkaku had battled many faster opponents, and Marrock obviously thought himself fast. The armor was still a handicap. Kenkaku had a certain level of speed that most swordsmen lacked. Marrock hadn't the chance to understand it. As Marrock moved, Kenkaku used his stepping motion, and the weight he threw back, to change direction in the middle of his step. The spin Marrock performed would be a deciding factor in the battle, it seemed. Kenkaku's change of direction brought Marrock's blade a few inches away from Kenkaku, effectively creating a dodge.
Marrock, at this point, had left certain points of his body open. With the attack coming from his right side, it entirely left Marrock's right side and portions of his lower body wide open. Kenny's left handed style, as of this moment, would be in the perfect position to enact a counter strike. Marrock's armor would, once again, come into effect here. Even if the man had a certain level of speed above Kenkaku's, the armor set Kenkaku above Marrock. As far as things go, Kenkaku's strikes would be quicker than Marrock's dodges. That's simple physics.
Kenkaku's sense took note of each open area. A warrior's sense brought each thing into mind, within the space of an instant. The open side of Marrock, covered by armor. The cleft of Marrock's neck, where multiple veins would be present. The portion of Marrock's thigh where tendon's would be located. And finally, the less present idea of striking the now open calves of both legs, rendering Marrock useless in battle. With no hesitation, Kenny went for his choice.
Kenkaku's change in direction had caused him to flip to face Marrock's body, with is own torso in the perfect position to strike. Kenkaku's arm had been pulled up slightly in the movement to attack previously, setting it also in a good-off position. Kenny's blade lanced forwards, with the speed of a basilisk, the blind snake. The quick stab was aimed for Marrock's open thigh, where the musculature would be a prime target for dissecting Marrock's ability to do battle. The blade was nothing more than a shining sparkle, even to the high-speed eyes of Marrock. The strike was quick and deep enough to cause massive amounts of damage. Kenkaku's blade withdrew, quick enough to enact some sort of block or parry should it arrive.
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 2:12 am
 ☯ Slevin ∞ Corpse ☯ ▸ "Pain is meant to be endured...not shown" ◂ ♞ † ♚ †♞ xx There was a point in battle when he felt the need to take off these weights, to release his mind off every thought that hindered him, slowed him and simply free himself from the burdens of the world: If only life were that easy. He wore the armor to remind him of who he was, his past and why he kept fighting, even if the opponent was faster, stronger, and more skilled in every aspect but he kept fighting and he was still standing today. The armor was dual sided; it provided protection, that even though the world may weigh heavy on his shoulders that there will always be something to help him through it: Namely his Will of Fire. The moment he felt his blade miss, the second he saw the others body step out of the way to miss the strike he brought his arm back, the blade in hand, readying himself into a quick stance. The right arm was brought up flat palmed behind his blade, with his elbow up and muscle’s tense he was ready to strike or move like Hermes the Greek messenger god. His armor kept him from leaving open spots in his defense; with the slightest of movements he could bring any armored piece to the aid of any indefensible area on his body.
He emptied his mind, to be faster than an opponent was impossible at this moment, he was losing options but the one most prevalent in his mind was a defiant battle cry that wouldn’t allow him to stop fighting. His breaths slowed, his heart pumped like a machine, the adrenaline flowed, something he’s learned to control throughout the course of hundreds of years of battle, the world could slow for him to a crawl but seeing the attack was not the problem hear, keeping up was. His eyes shut, there was a blind samurai whom challenged him many years ago, he learned a lot from that encounter and perfected the art of fighting blind many decades ago. The world became sound, the air was his ears and suddenly the other wasn’t so fast, not as he believed. Using the sense of touch; He felt every little vibration in the ground beneath his feet, the creaking of wood as they fought. He used his hearing to ‘see’ the air being sliced open by kenkaku’s blade, the others clothing ruffling within his own movements, his breathes, his heart beating like a drum. Then finally he could draw off the smell of the room, the change in the heat as someone would exercise they grew hotter in body tempters and it clashed with the rooms.
The world was drowned in darkness, with the Kenpachi’s movements the only thing in his mind, all other distractions was blocked out with an iron curtain. He aimed low, his mind instantly running through every unarmored spot on his body he found the thigh to be the most dangerous, but it was too simple to stop. He twisted, with little time to react, and brought his knee up to deflect the blade clear off the side. He would aim the thick metal plating of his greave’s to hit the blade perfectly and send it veering off past his hip. He could have easily at this point, use his own weapon to strike down towards the arm, the elbow, the shoulder, neck, it was all but to easy and he chose not to, when saying the least. He used a simple Shunpo back at least three yards. The warrior dropped to his butt, crossing his legs as he centered himself opening his eyes, he began slipping off the vambraces, pulling them off first then tossing them to the ground a few feet away. The single chunk of armor dented the ground, cracking straight through to hit the concrete beneath the floor board, even leaving a small crater in its wake. “Now its time to finish this…”
Next came the left vambrace, he kept them in a pile, tossing it next to the other armor piece with the same result, a large thump and a small denting in the floor panel. These were the lightest set of armor he wears, the vambrace that is. He unstrapped the right greave, holding it up he tossed it to the right side, this time it was nearly double, it flattened the ground breaking straight through the wooden planks and busting several others on its own. He took off the left greave and found his legs were free from the grasp of skeletons, the weight of the world and his past disappearing like the air from his lungs. It hit with a thud and sent a cloud of dust spiraling around the set of greaves, which left only one piece to remain. He untied his Commander haori, placing the weighted sash, though severely less than the armor, neatly on the floor, even folding it first. His vest, chest piece, the weighted chest piece was all that remained, he lifted the heavy thing with a small “Umph” a testimonial to its great weight, it was the heaviest of the five armor pieces, nearly quadruple the greaves and eight times the vambraces. He held it up for a moment, and then set it down next to his sash, simply by setting it down the floor was cracking from its pressure, and the Captain Commander scooped up the haori placing it back on his shoulders: It may have been the only thing keeping him from floating off into space.
There was an inner piece about him now, his body flourished with spirit pressure, his muscles grew, and his mind was sharper than ever. His chest rose, his haori lifted as his body tightened just from taking off the weights he felt faster than ever and even somewhat stronger. The weight of a freeman was weightless, any doubts he had, any distress, any anguish that plagued him was beyond erased. His problems were solved within moments, his arms moved in such a slow motion it was looking odd, but looking closer those hands faded away, his hands were beyond blurs as he moved them in small circles. He picked up his blade, the short sword or long combat knife, became an instrument, the instrument that would begin a symphony of destruction. His legs parted slowly then faded, their solid form was one foot in front of the other, the right foot planted forward for strength, the left behind for stability, his right hand pushed forward with the combat knife securely in his right hand, the left was stationed at his stomach flat open like still waters.
He was right handed, he wasn’t even using his dominate hand through out the short life or their fight, but then again he was also wearing weights and using about fifty percent output in most attacks, but this is where the fight began and also where it ended. There was an enormous amount of controlled spirit pressure resonating off of his body, pulsing like a living spirit, he was finally putting spirit energy through is weapon and his movements not that they needed them at all. He dashed forward with the speed of a winged footed messenger, the opponent was his objective, straight forward was simple enough, but he wanted to drag out this feeling of euphoria in his speed, he so rarely took off his weights. The warrior was dashing forward, watching kenkaku as if the world was on pause, and spun around him simply running past him, but at a speed the eye cannot perceive, a speed the senses were dulled by, and found himself standing behind the swordsman his blade up and striking down toward the back of his left shoulder.
It was not over yet, whether it hit or missed, was dodged or blocked, the blitz followed up by dashing to the left then right, then down in a diamond pattern, after images appearing before he was even heard, before the floor cracked beneath his strength of heel, before the eye could comprehend his quickness. He attack from the right this time, aiming for the arm, then all at once disappearing, riding the wind he was to the left of the man’s body, slashing towards the same place; the bicep. He moved from sight once more attacking the back, a barrage of stabs, at least a dozen aimed for the sides of the spine missing that vital piece just by inches. If they hit or missed he would continue on before this boost ended, and again out of no where he would appear for only a split second to attack, aiming for different places each round. His after images were surrounding the swordsman, staying for several seconds before fading into another position or attack pose. He didn’t follow a pattern or path, but attack the main eight directions attacking the arms, back chest wrists, hands, joints, legs, knee caps and of course the back. The final move before his enormous boost ended caused him to disappear this time appearing over head; jumping above him, the Commander spinning like a saw at least a dozen times in less than two seconds and dropping the back of his heel, which was a metal framed combat boot, towards the top of his head, if it hit the other would be sent down to the floor, face first. After this last move he would blitz back to the center of the arena, his sword in hand, his back straight, legs parted to the shoulders, not a beat of sweat or look of concern, but his blade was at the ready as he would be: like a Commander needed to be. | Location: Location | Zanpakuto State: Dormant | | Thought: Thought |
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 4:05 am
[ Location ] [ With ] Kenkaku took a step back as the Commander enacted a block. That definitely took some skill to pull off, he had to admit. Didn't mean s**t though. Kenkaku had gotten close, just as Marrock had gotten close a mere instant before. Marrock did the same as Kenkaku, and retreated at this point. In a battle of blades, it was rare to to retreat when your blade was shorter. Kenkaku's eyebrow rose in wonder as the man appeared a few yards away. When your blade was shorter, it was normal to try and get within the guard of an opponent, turning a previous advantage of reach into a fatal disadvantage. Kenkaku had expected that much from the man, but knew how to deftly defend that sort of attack strategy. But, MArrock showed something else. He began removing the armor, throwing it around the training room, and ******** up the floor. Kenkaku took note of where the pile of junk was as it accumulated. IT could mess him up later. " Look's lik' yer finally gonna fight lik' a real warrior. Armor's fer pussies. " Kenkaku spat out, jabbing an insult towards the man.
At this moment, Kenkaku knew he could arrive at Marrock's position in a mere instant, and slice him down then. Taking the time to remove his armor in the middle of a duel was foolish. " Takin' it off tho', that's ********' dumb. Yer leavin' yerself wide open. " Kenkaku said, slashing his blade across the air in front of him. It was ******** stupid! A true warrior, a TRUE swordsman, never left himself open. Even if his guard was constantly up, leaving oneself open was the most retarded thing in the world to do. Especially against an opponent such as Kenkaku.
Kenkaku, the Kenpachi, was one of the only captains who could defeat an opponent without using kido, hoho, or any other fancy shinigami s**t. He had his blade. No other captain could compare when they had only a weapon in their hand.Most captain's trained their kido, their hoho, and many other things besides just using their blades. Kenny knew of all people, that Marrock trained more with his blade's abilities than the blade itself. The renowned Eight Gates were his ace in the hole, you could say. But, when he was left with only the blade in his hand, and nothing else, where did that leave him? Kenny, on the other hand, trained more with his blade than anything else. The malignant lack of control with his reiatsu, with anything other than the use of his blade, could more than prove that Kenny had his niche. This left Kenny on an entirely different level of skill than any other Shinigami in the entire Gotei. He had his blade. And so far, he had hardly put any effort into this battle. It was too fun to extend a battle.
Kenkaku wouldn't attack though. It was dishonorable. In a duel, even if you did some retarded s**t like this, you waited until your opponent could defend himself. If you don't, then you can't say you beat them. The entire joy, the excitement stemming from the battle-lust was gone. There was no way to recover that. You're a coward otherwise.
The man completed the ritual of armor removal. Kenkaku still held his blade, looking towards the man with burning eyes. There was no surprise that the man began releasing his reiatsu. It was like drowning in an ocean. The power this man held was massive. He had earned his Captain Commander seat, that was sure. But any commander wasn't perfect. Kenny tightened his core, and breathed out a deep breath. He felt inside of him, for the inner kernel of power. The core of his being in truth. The energy within him unhinged, and began to leak forth. Unlike the Commanders, Kenkaku had very little control over his reishi. For that reason, he usually locked it within him, deep in the core of his body. When it was released, it was like a plague. A purple hue tainted the air, as the uncontroled aspect of Kenkaku's power broke forth like water behind a broken dam. Tendrils lashed out, smacking into the ground and breaking portions of the floor. Kenkaku's power pushed against the Commanders, matching in intensity. While Kenkaku had near the same amount of energy within his well of power, Marrock had an exponentially larger amount of control. The pulsating light around Marrock was the perfect contrast to the smashing tendrils around Kenkaku's being.
Marrock went in for the attack. Marrock's ability to see speed was matched with Kenkaku's sense of space around him. The uncanny ability of a battle hardened warrior to know exactly what was occurring around a three hundred and sixty degree formation. It was a mixture of reishi sensing, sight, hearing, touch, and an illogical sixth sense. No other captain could say they had this claim to fame.
As Marrock moved, Kenkaku felt a thrill of excitement. A shrill shriek running through his brain screaming it was time for action. The battle-lust was something only the best warriors could claim to have felt. The pure desire to wound, become wounded, and just fight. Do battle, holding a sharp piece of steel in your hands, and simply feeling that thrill. The power of your body your only companion. This is what Kenkaku felt at this exact moment. The power of himself against the power of his opponent. It would all be decided by what they could do with differing lengths of steel.
Kenkaku's reaction was more than simple. There was one folly move to Marrock's omni directional attack. Two folly's, truly. Not only was the attack like clockwork, predictable, but each slash, stab, or slice was roughly in the same level. This attack wouldn't even require a deft block, only a simple dodge. Marrock's speed would work against him now, where his incredibly fast attack would mean the dodge Kenkaku enacted wouldn't need to be changed in mid action, nor would it change the course of the attack! Marrock's skill was proving to be just daft, stupid, ******** retarded really.
Kenkaku extended his left foot across the wooden floor, and bent his right knee. this dropped his body down to a low level. Kenny was flexible, as befitted a swordsman. His head was below where his waist would be, creating a fine tuned dodge to the first portion of Marrock's attack. However, Kenkaku was expecting more than this. It was mundane of a Commander to try only a single attack. Kenkaku waited, until he saw Marrock jump up. There would be another attack coming. It proved to be a drop kick of some sort. No, ax kick. Marrock's steel toed boot dropped ominously towards Kenny's head. That was sort of dumb. Even if the shoe was metal framed, the bottom was simple rubber. Kenkaku would use that against the man. Kenny rose up, his speed blinding as his right leg forced his body from the crouched position. His blade, which had before been held nonchalantly, was grasped with a burning rage, as he lifted for a block. Kenkaku shoved his hand forwards, bringing the blade at a certain point. Marrock's shoe would have impacted on the floor in front of Kenkaku, for his dodge. However, now the bladed edge of Kenkaku's blade would bite deep into the rubber bottom of MArrock's shoe, tearing through the simple rubber, and completely severing the foot at about mid level. Marrock had really ******** up at this point.
Kenkaku felt a splash of blood against his face, and a strangled cry from his opponent. Kenny pushed back, before shunpoing, to appear a few yards away from Marrock. He looked to the bleeding stump of Marrock's foot, and then to the Captain Commander. Without a foot, a swordsman was left pretty much defenseless. You could keep fighting without a hand, without an arm, without a chunk from your chest. Multiple slices, stabs, scars in the making could litter your body, and you could keep going. Kenny had experienced that. But without a foot, you had no way to move. A swordfight involved mobility as a defense, it was as simple as that. That's not even considering blood loss. Marrock, at this point, was done. " Ya' lost, ********. " Kenkaku said, looking down at the Commander with a rage in his eyes. " Ya' woulda beat me if we had kido. If we woulda' had our shikai and bankai, I'd be the one layin' on the floor. " Kenkaku thumbed his nose, feeling the power in his own muscles. " But we don't. We got the blades in our hands. Tha' s**t we held when we firs' walked inta' the academy. When we had nothin' else 'xcept fer the sword. Ya' know what I did? I ********' kept with the sword. I didn't learn any of that kido s**t, I didn't go to be a speedster, and I didn't want to be the guy who punched everything. I kept with tha' sword. Thas why I'm the Kenpachi, and yer tha commander. " Kenkaku smirked, before spitting on the ground. " I won, ********. "
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 4:08 am
By my opinion, this fight is over. Marrock has walked into the block of Kenkaku, and would be unable to dodge. If a dodge was to be done, it would at that point be considered an auto-dodge.
If there is dissatisfaction with the loser, there can still be a vote as to if this move is legal or not.
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:05 pm
So, you auto-hitted a couple times, never giving the other a chance to dodge. Further more, you continued to say that his foot was cut off, when his charcter could have doged. Technically speakign, it wouldn't be an aout-dodge. Anyther thing, if the entire shoe is metal framed, that would mean that the bottom of the shoe is as well, wouldn't it. I've been reading over this entire fight, and you sir, have done a number of things that could be considered auto hitting. ontop of all of that, you proceed to control his character, saying 'a strangled cry from his opponent'.
All of these things considered, you would have been declared disqualified. This move is not legal, and your last post should either be editted to fix the error, or you admit to your faults and forfiet.
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:20 pm
Okay, first off, I do agree with Zenith. You have been auto-hitting, and that is not the competition of this battle. The competition of this battle is to see who is the better swordsman, not to see who can auto-hit more. And, I will say, the constant cussing when it is clearly not necessary in describing details, it is just plain distasteful. You seem to refuse to carry on the battle longer, WITHOUT auto-hitting, because you fear he will win. But this is simply my opinion. And, if I might add, you have a few grammatical errors, which made me a bit angry. But hey, if you want to cuss instead of write details, auto-hit because you are afraid to actually fight, and not to mention the fact that you were controlling your opponents character speech. If that were allowed, Marrok Corpse could have easily made your character proclaim himself the loser and proceeded to act with his character to impale yours, without giving you a chance to move. Think before you reply.
So, if you wish to continue with the "Vote" instead of continuing the battle, which I have been following ever since you two started, I would have to vote Marrok the winner.
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:25 pm
Well first off, it seems youve been auto hitting, controlling my speech, and declaring yourself the winner: Which is false. Also going off what ive read your grammer does suck and i needed help just understanding half the stuff you did. So i vote for Marrock Corpse to be the Winner.
Krillin? Krillin.
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YummyBiscuits Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 12:29 pm
Zenith -Demon of Chaos- So, you auto-hitted a couple times, never giving the other a chance to dodge. Further more, you continued to say that his foot was cut off, when his charcter could have doged. Technically speakign, it wouldn't be an aout-dodge. Anyther thing, if the entire shoe is metal framed, that would mean that the bottom of the shoe is as well, wouldn't it. I've been reading over this entire fight, and you sir, have done a number of things that could be considered auto hitting. ontop of all of that, you proceed to control his character, saying 'a strangled cry from his opponent'. All of these things considered, you would have been declared disqualified. This move is not legal, and your last post should either be editted to fix the error, or you admit to your faults and forfiet. I've got a problem or two with this. Firstly, Slevin said something about you being his brother. That's an obvious bias in his favor. Secondly, there has been no auto-hitting. Try to tell me that " Spinning multiple times in midair " won't create an amount of momentum that would be impossible to get out of. Physics apply to Bleach as much as they do the real world. There is science in here. Spinning Dozen's of times in midair would create a certain amount of momentum. A huge amount, actually. Why do you think Gymnasts have fractures in their feet? Marrock also possesses a large amount of strength, considering his character. He has dedicated himself to this attack. The energy required to stop this attack in midair is monumental. That would when it would be considered unfair to dodge. If Slevin had Marrock stop this attack through a dodge, it WOULD be considered an Auto-dodge. An Auto-hit is not considered an auto-hit if the opponent's block or dodge would also be considered an auto-dodge of auto-block. That's simple roleplay etiquette. Thirdly, I have never seen a shoe that has both the toe, heel, and bottom with metal. As Slevin said in his first post, it's a steel-toed boot. That means steel is in the toe area. Nowhere else. There is no such thing as combat boots with the entire thing made of steel. Not only would that limit mobility because of weight, but the entire thing would be so uncomfortable losing a foot would be a god-send. And a side-note here, even if the entire thing was made of metal, how many times have you seen people in Bleach cutting s**t apart? Kenpachi Zaraki cut through a building with hardly any effort. If you say Marrock's attack, spinning dozen's of times in midair before throwing all of that collected momentum as well as his own strength, down on the sharpened edge of a ******** Katana won't cut through some metal, you need to do some research on what simple human made katana could do, let alone the durabale and much-sharper Zanpakuto blade. And another side note, had this attack not cut through the steel through some sort of weird means, then the foot would still be broken. Metal only goes so far when protecting a person from concussive force. The broken foot and the cut foot would have much the same problem. Fourthly, Slevin, multiple times, has come close to god-moding. Even if Marrock would be the Head-Captain, his speed wouldn't be on that much greater of a level than Kenkaku's own. His language throughout his posts makes it appear is if Kenkaku is a ******** baby next to Usain Bolt. Fifthly, Slevin has controled my character slightly as well. That is simply how the two of us roleplay, it seems, and how I was taught from day one. I can quote him as saying that Kenkaku walked into Marrock when th commander used Shunpo to move behind him. Is that any worse than saying a strangled cry came out? Not in my book. And finally, Look to the rules please. It says until the fight has either finished, or otherwise been declared, there will be no other posts. Slevin has yet to complain, or bring issue to the fight. Please follow the rules of the thread. I thought about this for about an hour. I went and opened my physics book, read some s**t, and asked quite a few people what they thought. A member of this guild, o Asura o, agrees that this is not considered an Auto-hit. My teacher considers this legal. On of the people I roleplay with every now and then said " Good job man, you got that. " So really, try to tell me I'm wrong.
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