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 Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:29 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:47 pm
i'm going to need to you go more in depth with your descriptions, since i have no goddamn clue of how twelve viking berserkers, or whatnot, look.
so, i'm just going to need you to describe your shikai and bankai, how they look like to those who have no idea what they're supposed to be imagining, such as myself.
welp, since you're trying out for squad eleven lieutenant, i can't really ask for abilities, since their weapons are melee type.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 3:16 pm
Also, Under abilities, you should list certain areas where your character has a high level of strength. Since this would be the Division Eleven Vice Captain, one of the strength's should be Zanjutsu, right? Speed even, in combat.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 3:43 pm
Except his Zanpaku-to isn't really a katana or katana like, so wouldn't Zanjutsu be a bit...counter-productive to his fighting style? Also, he's 6"10 and 270 pounds, that doesn't really translate to "Speed" or "Agility".
I mean, yeah, there are exceptions to that, he's just not one of them. He'll swing his sword fast and hard, but he's not going to win any hundred meter dashes.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 3:46 pm
I added something though.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 4:08 pm
Iamheretorp I added something though.
Just the same, what you added is a nice start.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2012 4:32 pm
So you're trying out to be my lieutenant, eh? Good squad. I have skill at speed and sword wielding. My spiritual pressure is incredibly high. My zanpaku-to is a dragon, for God's sake. Where's your strength? Also, I need more shikai and bankai descriptions!
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