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 Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 3:38 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:41 am
I finally got around to reading it and I must say, I like it a lot. It's really interesting and I would love to read any updates you put on here. I didn't see any typos or anything so you're good there. As for the writing, it is excellent. I really enjoyed reading. Keep it up! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:23 pm
It's interesting. However, it needs a lot more description and feeling. It seems to move fast as well.
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 5:14 pm
It's hasa a wonderful plot so far. It leaves we wanting to read more! Like what snowblazer said, I think it is going by a little too fast. But other than that, it's wonderful! c:
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2012 6:53 pm
It's nice but I agree with Snowblazer.
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 1:45 pm
Girl on Fire 12 I finally got around to reading it and I must say, I like it a lot. It's really interesting and I would love to read any updates you put on here. I didn't see any typos or anything so you're good there. As for the writing, it is excellent. I really enjoyed reading. Keep it up! biggrin Ty
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:56 pm
I'm going to miss youuuuuuu crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 3:01 pm
Girl on Fire 12 I'm going to miss youuuuuuu crying crying crying crying crying crying crying I'll miss you too. crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 3:07 pm
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