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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:39 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:02 pm
That was terrible my *****. And you have the nerve to wear a pure hip-hop tee when it's the most diluted form of hip-hop I've ever heard. You shoehorned in every other rhyme. You made cheesy pop kid references like chutes and ladders and pokemon emotion_puke Plus the beat and your voice sounds like you should be the 4th member of the band on the Free Credit Report. Com commercials. That being said you get a passing grade: D- Only because your girl's cute, congrats.
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:13 am
I felt it, and realized it's a joke song/video.
In the type of genre you were going for, it was actually pretty well put together, video and song.
Honestly, only problem I actually had was your voice, but then quickly got over it. Besides, that's something you can't help either way.
I make "nerdy" references all the time myself, just kinda subtle so I guess I don't really get people to point them out as much. Example :
"Your lines'll never zap, dose (Zapdos) rhymes are not on victory's road".
"The same niggas pretending to be hard at heart and all of that s**t?
...were the same niggas trying to get charizard holographics."
"I've crushed psychos twice the height of M.Bison, I'm thrice as nice as your christ is."
I say keep doing your thing. You could get a fun-loving fanbase if you keep it up, or just those who like simple humor and fun-rap rather than something that is always serious.
Any other songs?
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:01 am
Lyr Asyst I felt it, and realized it's a joke song/video.
In the type of genre you were going for, it was actually pretty well put together, video and song.
Honestly, only problem I actually had was your voice, but then quickly got over it. Besides, that's something you can't help either way.
I make "nerdy" references all the time myself, just kinda subtle so I guess I don't really get people to point them out as much. Example :
"Your lines'll never zap, dose (Zapdos) rhymes are not on victory's road".
"The same niggas pretending to be hard at heart and all of that s**t?
...were the same niggas trying to get charizard holographics."
"I've crushed psychos twice the height of M.Bison, I'm thrice as nice as your christ is."
I say keep doing your thing. You could get a fun-loving fanbase if you keep it up, or just those who like simple humor and fun-rap rather than something that is always serious.
Any other songs? I did that with my voice on purpose haha, so i probs have to work on that sound on purpose. haha , but yeah i just dropped the single of my mixtape. A little more serious kinda thing. here it is
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Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2012 11:10 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:16 pm
Yo that video was pretty cool my friend smile maybe we should do a track together, but keep on going man. That first comment was pretty dang cruel lol, dont take it harshly, he might be a troll lol. but keep doing what your doing!! biggrin good job man smile
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2013 1:11 pm
I really liked the video. I liked the part where you first poked her and when you pretended to be a mannequin (Gotta try that), and that your character was bothering the same girl throughout. That said, if it wasn't for the video I wouldn't have listened to the whole audio. Guess I'm a troll too.
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