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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 7:42 pm


Basic Identity
Name: Vincent Kageman ((Often called Vince by those he's close with.))
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Picture: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Physical Attributes
Height: 6'
Weight: 210
Hair Color: Dirty blonde, golden blonde if he's been in the sun a lot
Eye Color: golden brown
Scars/Tattoos: He has no prominant scars and no tattoos.

Mental Traits
Personality: Vincent is usually very laid back, unless those who are close to him are threatend. Then anyone or anything that he has no particular attatchment is in danger of dying.
Fears (What scares you most): His greatest fear is not being able to protect those closest to him.
Strengths: He his stronger, faster, and has better stamina and senses then most humans, and is very skilled with a sword.
Weaknesses (What you're physically or mentally unable to cope with): The sound of young children crying is impossible for him to deal with. If he hears it, he can't help but to find them and try to help them. The reason behind it is because his younger brother was killed infront of him, and all he could do was run and listen to his cries.
Likes: His friends, pretty girls around his age, dogs, and killing anything that threatens those close to him.
Dislikes: Children crying, stupid people, and cats.
Disorders: Moderate ADHD as well as some OCD tendancies.

Genetic Enhancements
Experimental Design (what were they aiming to do?): He had been brought the the hospital for a gun shot wound that should have been fatal. After they managed to save him, they decided he was perfect for their experiment. The doctors wanted to create the perfect soldier. They enhanced his DNA, supercharging all of his survival and combat traits and enhanced his mental capacity so that he could put a barrier around his mind to keep him from being controlled.
Flaws: The experiment went perfectly except for the fact that the subject is only able to access his enhanced abilities if in a life threatening situation except for the mind barrier.
Physical Changes: He is stronger and faster than most humans, has better reflexis and senses and stamina as well.
Mental Changes: He can put a mental barrier up against attacks against his mind. Though he can be convinced to take it down, but it is unlikely that will happen.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 7:55 pm


I'm actually gonna have to say no on this one, for two reasons.

One- we've already got a werewolf character. I know, I know, you said "but he's not a werewolf!" That's nice. The other guy isn't a werewolf either, he just so happens to have a shitton of wolf DNA which somehow is capable of overriding his regular DNA at will. Which sounds an awful lot like what this guy does. I'm not a fan of duplicate powers, and while most I'd allow, this one in particular irks me. Mostly because I honestly don't think it should be a thing in the first place, but also because if I let you have one too, all the new kids joining up will want to be freakin' werewolves. This isn't a werewolf RP, it's a zombie RP. No offense meant, of course.

And two- I've got a slight problem with the actual reason you had for pumping him full of wolf genes. To make a perfect soldier, they're going to tangle someone's DNA like a ball of yarn and stuff a bunch of wolf-s**t in there... I'm not seeing it. Sure, wolves are faster than people. And they have better hearing and smell. But they're not stronger, not by a long shot. So that's a bit flawed. And they're also wild animals. Not loyal at all. Another flaw. I mean, sure, they're 'loyal' to the pack. But not really. There's constantly in-fighting between wolf-packs, for leadership struggles or even because the wolves don't like each other. People sometimes act like people are the only ones that do that, but we're not.

So, yeah. In all honesty, if I were you I'd probably just scratch this whole character and go with something else. Sorry dude. I hate to say it like this, but this profile is not accepted.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 8:08 pm


Fair enough. I completely understand. I'll get started editing.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 8:43 pm


Thanks for getting it. A lot of people would b***h. You're cool. Sorry again about the whole thing. I know it sucks, I hate it when my own characters don't make the cut...

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Zaborak the wolf

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 9:42 pm


It's all good. So does that mean I'm good to go now?
PostPosted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:08 pm


Yeah, that looks fine to me. Welcome aboard, man.

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