|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:27 pm
We have open positions so please apply here Cero (0):
Primera (1): Dein-zu
Segunda (2):
Tercera (3): Memories of Xemnas 1
Cuarto (4):
Quinto (5):
Sexto (6):
Septimo (7):
Octavo -8-:
Noveno (9):
Diez (10):
Privaron Cero (0):
Privaron Primera (1):
Privaron Segunda (2):
Privaron Tercera (3):
Privaron Cuarto (4):
Privaron Quinto (5):
Privaron Sexto (6):
Privaron Septimo (7):
Privaron Octavo -8-:
Privaron Noveno (9):
Privaron Diez (10): [b]Gaia name:[/b]
[b]RPC Name:[/b]
[b]Link to profile:[/b]
[b]Desired Number:[/b]
[b]RP Sample:[/b]
((Must be 3-4 paragraphs))
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 3:23 pm
Gaia name: Kamino Nabarre RPC Name: Pietro Link to profile: Desired Number: 0 RP Sample: Standing in the wasteland once known as the human world Pietro looked out to the endless wasteland that was before him.He wore a white long sleeved shirt,a black vest over,black pants, Shoes and a Black hat with an orange strip finished off his attire.He had his blade in a red bag he had over his shoulder and kept his hollow hole and number hidden incase he ran into any shinigami.He walked through the ruins of what use to be Karakura and kept a stone cold gaze on everything in the area flashes of a battle long since forgotten.
Blood spatters on the walls of buildings bring more flash backs of a young Pietro and several other Arrancars who had invadedthe human world and fought a large scale battle against the Shinigami of the old Sereitei. Pietro was young foolish in those times he was the quinta Espada and had no real aspect of what death should be yet.In the throws of the battles Pietro's blade had already tallied up a death toll in the hundreds as he jumped back a young girl appeared next to him she looked thirteen and didn't really seem like the type to be in a war like this.She was the Tercera Espada Julia Esperanza and she had also marked up a death toll much higher than her lowers "Pietro..." She said calmly and lowly as she watched for any new shinigami who thought themselves strong enough.Pietro was doing the same but glanced at her smirking "Yes Julia-chan?" He said his voice sounding younger as if he was a teenager he sounded cocky and brave some would say foolish but in this case Julia was only here to deliver a message "Weve been asked to assemble in the park..." Finally what she had been awaiting came.Several shinigami of low rank who thought they could take on two Espadas Each one was surrounded by three Shinigami each SHinigami was atleast lieutenant level and they all had a grudge against the Espada's. It was one of the weaker Shinigami who attacked first slashing vertically at Pietro's chest his blade was easily blocked and he was slashed back Pietro's blade easily slicing through the boys spine and cutting him in half using the blood that gushed from the now dead Shinigami Julia pounced slicing the Jugular veins of two of the shinigami while Pietro Finished off the last three cutting off their heads to make their blood gush out all over. The Tercera couldn't help but scoff "its cause of you they keep sending stronger and stronger forces....cutting off the heads of their men Doesn't seem like a bit much?" Her question was answered with a insane laughter and smirk a small amount of blood on his cheek that he quickly licked off "if this makes them mad then what I did to the captain commanders granddaughter must have really pissed them off" his cocky behavior and simple mind to battle very noticeable. The flash of Memories end soon after that and Pietro kept moving it was easily noticed how far he had come from back then.
Walking up to an old ruined park Pietro walked up to infront of a swing set and soon the flash backs started again.Tercera Espada Julia Esperanza Sonidoed into the park and sat in the left swing sighing she was the first to the meeting area and was happy for some peace for once.She had on a cloak but had it on her back as she had both her hands on the chains that connected the swing to the frame.A hand held a juice box up to her it was Pietro who already had his own in hand "you okay?" He asked as he sat down in the swing next to her sipping his juice slowly.She smiled and took the juice box puncturing it with the straw she sipped a little but then answering her lower "yeah...its just been awhile since we had some peace around here..." she looked over at him "we've been fighting for so long its nice to be able to relax" she said to him as he thought "yeah" was all he could really think of saying.Julia smiled lightly and looked at the space "so...what are you thinking of doing after this battle is over?" Pietro though for a moment and shrugged "don't know...sleep?" he said smiling as he and her sat there "I'm going to go back to my old home in Hueco Mundo...I want to see if anyone is still alive there" she said as she smiled "maybe I'll join you" he said smilling aswell.Hours passed and soon the two were surrounded by Shinigami a captain appearing infront of them the leader of the shinigami who had their Leader the cero Espada and the others captured tied up with special chains and beaten badly "By order of the serietei and the Gotei 13 we command you to surrender and face your exicution!" He exclaimed to the two both were now standing and really they thought they could take them "I count 50...maybe more" Julia placed her hand on her blade and glanced at Pietro "yeah I think we can take them...if we use our ressurecion" He said as he placed his hand on his aswell and almost instantly the two released their Ressurecions "Shine brightly Sol!" "show them no mercy Justification!". Soon the two were covered in a white smoke Pietro showing two guns in hand and his mask piece now a sight around his eye and Julia holding a scythe she had missed shaped horns and bone body armor.The two rushed the shinigami's Pietro firing and killing some with shots to the head while Julia hacked away at the ones on the floor. she soon reached the captain and slashed at him but he dodged her slashes and hacks easily.He Flash stepped away from her and lifted his hand to the air "End them" he ordered as chains went flying at Julia and Pietro before either could react they were pierced by the chains Pietro in the arms and legs while Julia...was not so lucky she was pierce straight through the chest nand many through the rest of her body.Spitting up blood she knew that she and the others were going to die there but didn't want to die in vain.Turning to Pietro who looked at her wide eye she mouthed the words "be strong" to him before sending him to Hueco Mundo through a garganta she opened before they were killed.
The flash back ended and Pietro just stood there his eyes covered by the shadow made by his fedora he turned to the shinigami who had surrounded him while he reminised. "Great more of a hassle" he glanced down at the blood stain from where Julia had once stood and then looked up at the Shinigami their were seven in total each one was captains level but by their scent they were just made captains. He stared up at them and kept a calm face "who's first" he asked as he then heard the sound of a battle cry go out the seven shinigami leaped down at him blades all in different positions.He moved quickly but to him everything was black and in slow motion he pulled his blade out from its bag and first smoothly cut the Jugular of the Shinigami infront of him he then sliced the wrist of two shinigami who ad left them wide open he cut the head off of three other shinigami and finally ended it by stabbing the last one his blade slowly going through he wanted to make it as painful as possible for the man he moved close to the dying shinigami's ear and said softly "that's for my friends you people murdered" he whispered to him before pulling his blade out and putting it away.He walked away to a hill side where he had made a memorial for Julia her blade stabbed into the gravestone "rest in peace my friend and I hope that when I die we can go to Las Noches together" he said as he looked out at the sunset and the destroyed Karakura on the horizon.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:29 pm
Approved for Segunda position, is that okay with you. I seen some errors with your grammar, and punctuation. But over all it wasn't a bad RP sample, and it showed a decent story. I would only say facing 7 Captains and killing them that easily made it seem almost like you were trying to make a statement of your character being God like. I think you would fit well as a Segunda or lower position.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:10 pm
Gaia name: Memories of Xemnas 1
RPC Name: Usikule Blackbolt
Link to profile:
Desired Number: 1
RP Sample: Usikule sits on top of a pillar on the outside of Hueco Mundo. His hair and coat slowly blows in the wind and the moon lights up the sky and this empty desert. Usikule stands up as squints his eyes to see a trespasser. He gave a light grin," Time to get rid of the vermin". Usikule disappears from sight using Sonido to approach the trespasser. Usikule appeared sitting on a tree that was near the trespasser." You there what is you and why have you come to Hueco Mundo?". The trespasser turned around and he looked like a captain from The Gotei Thirteen. He wore a captain outfit and did not hesitate to unsheath his sword. Usikule smiled at him and his intention to kill. The trespasser answered," My name is Vexel Matsukoto and I am Captain of the 12th Division and I can beat you so don't you dare try to come at me". Usikule jumped down from the tree and walked up to him. he put his finger on the tip of his sword and slowly moved it away from his face.
" Now i will ask you again what are you doing here?". Usikule asked again. Vexel jumped back,"That is non of your business. Bakudo no. 63 Sajo Sabaku!". Vexel cast a spell that binded his arms together. " Really? A kido spell. Do you really think that it will stop me haha! You don't know who you are dealing with. Usikule forced his arms forward and breaks the spell. " Now you made me mad". Usikule used Sonido to appear in front of Vexel. He raised his hand and a black and white ball formed in his hand. He released his cero at Vexel. " Oh no you don't Bakudo no. 81 Danku". Vexel creates a Rectangle the shielded himself from that powerful cero. Once Usikule stopped his cero, the only thing behind Vexel was a large gorge. The Rectangle was shattered and Vexel was in shock. He raised his sword and pointed it at Usikule. Usikule as well unsheath his sword and pointed it at Vexel.
They both ran towards eachother and clashed their swords with eachother. Each one striking blow after blow, but after Usikule last strike he smiled as he did a low sweep that caused Vexel to go off guard. He raised his sword and pointed towards Vexel as he stood there in the ground. " You call your self a captain". He fired a black cero from his sword that made a creator in the ground. All that was left of Vexel was his captains jacket and his glasses. Usikule took the captains jacket and walk back into his room. " This could be a good souvenir.
(Thank You for reading this and i hope i was able to make the cut as Primera)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 3:29 pm
I seen some punctuation and grammar mistakes, but over all it wasn't a bad a RP sample. I will approve you as an Espada but I would feel more comfortable with you taking the position of Tercera. If that is okay with you.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 3:54 pm
Shikairu Nara I seen some punctuation and grammar mistakes, but over all it wasn't a bad a RP sample. I will approve you as an Espada but I would feel more comfortable with you taking the position of Tercera. If that is okay with you. Okay I can cooperate with number 3
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:27 pm
Gaia name: Dein-zu RPC Name: Tamamo no Mae Link to profile:Tamamo no MaeDesired Number: 0 RP Sample: The humid air, the endless white sand that seemed to stretch for an eternity, that was only equal in vastness to the never ending night that was home to the luminescent beauty that was the moon that watch the world know as Hueco Mundo. Even in such a barren desolate world which seemed to not be able to hold any form of life, one humanoid-like figure stood amongst the nothingness, only made visible through the light of the moon. The figure appeared female with pink hair tied in pigtails, wore a royal blue gothic yukata, and sported golden-brown fox-like ears that stood up as if on full alert and an equally golden-brown fox-like tail that bushed around with the coming breeze. As she viewed the moon, the moon itself being reflected in her lightly golden eyes she spoke. "You've been watching me for a while, come on out and show yourselves so that we can converse and drink tea" spoke the woman as she closed her eyes revealing a kindred smile to the denizens who were watching her.Within seconds a group of figures up to confront the kitsune-onna (fox woman), they wore the same type of uniform which consist of a black kimono with white undergarments underneath each held a distinctive distinctive difference, mainly the number and insignia on their badge. "We of the Gotei 13 are here to arrest you on the accounts of-" spoke the shinigami with untidy black hair, wearing a badge that held the kanji for 1 before being cut off."I'm sorry to interrupt but my memory doesn't last long for minor things, that is why I suggested tea, since even if I don't remember any of you at least I can recall the flavor of tea I drank with some unsavory characters" spoke the kitsune-onna, her smile still as kindred as before making her insult appear to have no malice."Unsavory characters! We are proud lieutenants of Gotei 13, I lieutenant of squad 1, Itoshiki Hiro, will make sure you face the most extreme of punishments for your crimes against Seireitei, everyone get into position" commanded Hiro, as the other four shinigami readied themselves by unsheathing their zonpaku-to, HIro himself unsheathing his zonpaku-to. "Everyone don't hold back, we were giving to the choice of bringing her back but, if that is impossible kill her" spoke Hiro as his rose his zonpaku-to over his head, "Yabuku (tear), Seinaru-ookami." As Hiro called out the name of his zonpaku-to, the sky above him began to roar with thunder until a bolt of lightning stuck him. Within the second the lightning crushed down on HIro, it quickly dispersed, revealing that not only had the black haired shinigami had not been damage but that the lightning was part of his shikai, seeing as his zonpaku-to had disappeared but, Hiro had gained something else in return on his fingers and thumbs were nail appendages made of lightning that had the appearance resembled claws and his face had tribal markings that were radiating the same off white color as the claws."Everyone on point" commanded Hiro his torso leaned forward while his closed extended much in the fashion of werewolves.With Hiro's command the other shinigami began to call out their zonpaku-to's name. "Fusho (wouind) Kumawana" spoke the female lieutenant with green hair tied in a pony tail the badge that had the kanji for 3. As she spoke her zonpaku-to was engulf in wind and as quickly as it appeared it disappeared leaving a short dagger with a butterfly etched in the blade."Sakebu (cry), Kanashimu" spoke the crimsom haired female wearing a badge that held the kanji for 4 on it. Withing seconds her zonpaku-to turned into a staff with long lavish red ribbons on it."Daku (embrace) Gekko" spoke a male lieutenant with dirty blond hair who had the kanji for 6 on his badge. While the other zonpaku-to's revealed a new form, his kept it's normal blade looking form but began to glow with the same radiance as the moon."Hi o tsukeru (ignite) Moyasu-uma" spoke the final lieutenant who had long black hair that reached his back and a badge that had the kanji for 10. His zonpaku-to was swiftly engulfed by flames that extended into the form of a trident.
"Now" commanded Hiro as the five shinigami vanished, leaving the Kitsune-onna alone but, before one could even blink the shinigami appeared each one closing in. The first to strike was the Lieutenant of squad 10, "HI-SATTOU" he yelled, as he began to thrust his zonpaku-to continuously as the woman at an incredible speed making his strikes seem almost invisible, yet even with the speed of his thrust none of his attacks seemed to hit, the woman just simply took a few steps back while dodging with each advance, luckily for shinigami the thrust he was attacking her with were feints for the second the kitsune-onna's footing was slightly off, the female shinigami of squad 4 swiped the arrancar with her staff, though this was obviously a feint the kitsune-onna dodge the staff but before she could regain her posture the flaming trident come piercing her way and the sound of the Squad 4 lieutenant preparing her attack could be heard, "Hadou number 4; Byakurai" as she finished speaking a bolt of lightning careened towards her both the trident and the spear would hit her as soon as she would have regained her footing. As the two attacks collided with the kitsune-onna an explosion occurred creating a smoke cloud distorting all visuals, but within the could a figure was jumping out into the sky, it's figure that of a woman. As the woman cleared the cloud, the moon's luminescent light revealed it to be the kitsune-onna who though appeared unscathed by the attack, the sleeves on her yukata were singed but before she could put herself in an favorable position an assailant came behind her. As the arrancar twisted toward her assailant, the attacker revealed to be none other then the green haired shinigami who was actually some distance away for the arrancar but sliced her dagger anyway.Though the distance would have be impossible even with a regular sized zonpaku-to, the arrancar still put up her guard for in the manner that the shinigami sliced the arrancar's yukata began to tear as if being seared by scissors.Before the tear got close to her body the arrancar pushed off the air to get distance away from the shinigami and her unknown ability. As the arrancar landed she noticed that the shinigami with the badge that had the kanji for 6 dashed at her in a frontal assault, this time the kitsune-onna was going to go on the offense for as the shinigami closed in she balled her fist and struck the shinigami, but as her fist connected with the shinigami it literally went through him but before she could react a blade shot through her torso. As the arrancar looked down she noticed the pale light the blade gave off as she watched the crimson of her blood run down it. As the blade was gashed out the arrancar staggered as if trying to catch on to something but before she could catch her breathe the sound of electricity began to circulate. As soon as the arrancar turned to where the crackling sound originated it was too late for the lieutenant of squad 1 Hiro was already swiping his claws at her torso the sound of flesh and electricity filled the air around the kitsune-onna, and in an instance Hiro had already passed her the time it took to close in, rip through her torso and halt 11 meters away was under one second. As the kitsune-onna fell to the ground the lieutenants of squad 3,4,6, and 10 looked at each other with satisfaction but before they could shoot of there victory Hiro began to shout "EVERYONE DON'T LET YOUR GUARD DOWN!" As the other shinigami looked at him puzzled they heard a voice, a rather feminine voice from behind them. All of there faces except for Hiro's began to grow in horror and disbelief, but the truth was there, the arrancar that should have been dead or at the least incapacitated was standing there in the mint of condition, except for her yukata which was seared and had a hole sliced in it. "Now look what you did" spoke the arrancar as she inspected the damage done to her outfit, "now Tamamo has to wear that monochrome yukata instead of this lavish one, someone's going to pay" spoke the arrancar who address herself as Tamamo, as she sent the the four lieutenants a glare before vanishing."Did she retreat" spoke the female shinigami of squad 4 before falling to the ground unconscious."What hap-" spoke the male shinigami of squad 10 before falling just as his comrade.As Hiro witnessed what had happened to his comrades he looked at the remaining two but before he could utter a word they too had fell to the ground. Now he, himself were alone but his determination to live was not weakened for as soon as he felt a presence get near him he swung his right arms, the claws racing at an alarming speed but instead of making contact with flesh he instead felt the impact of his arm being caught. "So shinigami Hiro, how did you know that I was still alive" asked Tamamo as she tightened her grip on his arm.
"Simple, when I slashed the torso on the fake lying on the ground, I noticed that it had a tattoo of it's chest, though I don't know which number you are, I know you're an Espada, not a fraccion like the reports state and you've been playing with us from the beginning" spoke Hiro as he increased his spiritual pressure. "So what do you want" asked Hiro trying to either stall for time or wait till his strength surpassed Tamamo."Wind manipulation, fire manipulation, light manipulation, lightning manipulation and enhanced Hadou" spoke Tamamo "these were your abilities, correct" she continued as if she were breaking them down by abilities rather then kill them. "I've learned all I needed from you 5 so you can leave" Tamamo continued as if she were bored of the group.
"Leave? just because you think you know us, I'd rather die then be thought so little" spoke Hiro in disgust at what the arrancar had said, as if allowing him to live meant that his existence itself were being belittled.
"You'd rather die, no you'll live, that is until we destroy everything you stand to protect, then and only then do you have my permission to die" spoke Tamamo."You're permission, fine, do I have your permission for this, BANKAI" yelled Hiro as an explosion occurred around him causing Tamamo to back off some feet away. Within the smokescreen Hiro's voice could be heard, "Tengoku no kizuato Seinaru-ookami" Hiro spoke as the smoke quickly dispersed as if his words purified all the darkness in his way, revealing a man whose torso was covered in a jet black fur like jacket. The man losing his claws but gaining a over-sized fang like sword in it's stead.
"Kyaa!" shrieked Tamamo in excitement "so you have bankai, seventy points" Tamamo continued but before she could utter another word the fang like blade was already at her neck."Kandenshi" spoke Hiro as a vulcan of lightning shot from out the blade, hitting Tamamo. "Don't even try to move, you'll find it to be impossible for a while, Kandenshi doesn't fry the skin or even cause physical damage it just halts all the signals your brain sends to the rest of you body for a period of time, truth be told if you hadn't of been wearing such lose clothing this attack would have even worked since it needs direct contact to be proficient" continued Hiro as he pulled his blade away from Tamamo, she standing there unable to move, as a flat yet fancy object dropped from her sleeves.
"What's that, a mirror" spoke Hiro as he viewed the object, "you didn't even bring you're zonpaku-to, oh well" continued Hiro as he brought his zonpaku-to towards him "you're too dangerous to bring along, so for you punishment you are giving death" spoke Hiro as he thrust his fang-like zonpaku-to now encircled with electricity, sending a huge explosion at contact.Through the smoke Hiro figure was distinctively seen but the whereabouts of Tamamo's were questionable, when suddenly a voice came from in front of Hiro, "so scary, that abilities of yours" spoke the voice of none other then Tamamo."Impossible" this thought ran rampant throughout Hiro's mind, "how could she still talk or for that matter even be alive" continued Hiro in thought as the smoke cleared.As the smoke left the vicinity, Hiro noticed that something stood in the way of his blade and Tamamo's body, well not so much as stood as in floated. "How is that possible" spoke Tamamo as if reading his expression as she slowly began to move "well I'll tell you, you're attack did mess up the signals of my central nervous system but electrocution doesn't make a person completely paralyzed at the moment the current is going through the body, it makes the person twitch, and while you thought I didn't bring my zonpaku-to you sealed you faith" continued Tamamo as she began doing neck exercises "for I don't need to have my hand on my zonpaku-to in order to use it." "You don't mean" spoke Hiro as he began to ascertain the situation to another depth."Exactly, this mirror is my zonpaku-to" declared Tamamo as the mirror knocked back Hiro's zonpaku-to prompting him to jump back to evade the attack."Damn, I was to naive, thinking that she didn't have her zonpaku-to, and she hasn't even resurrected yet while I'm done to almost half of my strength. The first thing I need to do it get everyone out of here" thought Hiro as he ran through the number of possible ways to escape but all of them would take time and that was not a luxury he could afford. "Well I do have enough strength to accelerate my body to grab everyone and get some distance till the Dangai opened up, but there's no way of knowing if she could still catch up to us before then" continued Hiro in thought before he was interrupted. "Have you finished thinking yet" spoke Tamamo as she began to twirl her fingers causing the mirror to follow suite. "Sesshouseki" whispered Tamamo as the mirror shattered causing an explosion that greatly blocked the visibility.As Hiro watched the transformation in progress he noticed the debris and smoke taking the form of a huge fox with nine tails, seeing as it was now or never, he took the time as a chance to get his comrades and get some distance, using the electricity from his zonpaku-to to control the flow of gravity, he vanished towards his comrades using carrying each one of his shoulders, though under normal circumstances this would have been a burden but his bankai took off the burden. "Trying to escape" spoke a more seductive voice from where Tamamo resurrected the smoke still blocking her figure, as she pointed her finger at Hiro as she began to increase her spiritual pressure."We're done for" thought Hiro "I can't stay in bankai for much longer and if I'm taken down then now... no I can't think like that I have to at least get these guys to safety thought Hiro unaware that he was about to run into a dimensional rift. Without warning Hiro and no way of stopping Hiro took his chances on the dimensional rift only to appear in the World of the living or more along the lines of falling down into the World of the living. As Hiro landed in a meadow just outside of a town he heard the the seductive voice that was Tamamo's, "next time we meet I'll give you permission but as for today, well I'm done and thanks to you all I have to go wear that black and white yukata and be all monochrome like it's late night black and white" voiced Tamamo as the dimensional rift closed leaving Hiro and his comrades.
Back in Hueco Mundo, Tamamo had reverted back to her sealed form, seeing as it weren't necessary now that she had let her prey get away. "now back to Los Noches, where I'm sure nothing but business and plans to take over something will quickly ensure" spoke Tamamo as she looked at the moon one final time before vanishing, leaving nothing but the moon shining on the endless night and the endless sands.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:58 pm
I have read your RP Samples before, and all of them are detailed and lengthy but they also have grammar errors and punctuation mistakes. I know nobody is perfect but I would like to give you the Primera position for now and if nobody steps up to take the Cero position I will promote you in RP to Cero.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 7:04 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
