This is going to be a simple review thread I'll post the link to FanFiction.net here in this thread and I'm in serious need of some critique because I'm not quite sure if my writing abilities have slipped up or not considering I haven't done it in over 2 years.

Summary: Zazie Rainyday decided to take an uneventful stroll through the park on a whim and ended up meeting a girl who is a notorious serial murderer whom Zazie strangely develops a relationship with.

So far I've only got one chapter but here's the link, Blood & Glycerin

I claim the masked girl as my own character hardly anything else.