((Still deciding the name, because all the ones I've come up with stink! This is the beginning chapter; if you post up a comment or opinion, I'd really like to hear a suggestion or constructive critizism please!!!))
Rath woke up in a dark, dank hotel room not knowing why she was there. The sheets smelled like mildew and water spots mottled the ceiling; she didn’t even want to know what kind of state the bathroom was in. Rubbing her eyes, she glanced around at her mates. Selena was sleeping soundly on the queen bed next to her, Toby and Greldon sleeping in the other. Toby was lying on his back, snoring softly; Greldon, on the other hand, was tossing and turning, bunching up the sheets and clenching his fists.
Yawning, she rolled her shoulders and rubbed where her wings connected with her shoulder blades. The soft, black feathers helped to sooth her confusion; she knew them so well, unlike the hotel room. Surprisingly, her wings were extremely stiff, which never happened unless she over-used them the following day. Rath quietly got out of bed and shuffled over to Greldon.
“Greldon, hey, Greldon,” she whispered, leaning close to him. He bolted upright so fast, his head hit hers. His snake hissed and jumped out from where it was snuggling beneath the covers; luckily, it was smart enough not to strike her. “Ouch!” she breathed, stifling her surprise and rubbing the top of her long, dark hair.
“Sorry,” he breathed back, “Nightmare.”
“You, too, huh? Tell your tail to shut up before it wakes the others.”
Calming the green snake by rubbing its head, he replied, “I can’t remember what it was about though. But there was a lot of darkness. I remember that much.” He shuddered, his matted hair now sticking out everywhere like porquepine quills.
“Actually, mine wasn’t that bad. It was more like a dream than a nightmare,” Rath said.
“Well, aren’t you special?” he said in a mocking tone of voice.
With a smirk, she said, “Yes I am.” She put her hands on her narrow hips and tried to look like she thought very highly of herself, which she knew would annoy him.
“Special people don’t usually…” he was looking up at her but now his eyes darted around the room. “Wait, where are we?”
“In a hotel, or should I say trash bin. The place is a dump!” Rath said, still whispering.
He shook his golden hair and pushed it out of his face with his hand, which made it stand up even straighter. “I don’t remember checking in, how late did we stay up last night?” He groaned softly and rolled his muscular shoulders and threw his arms back behind his burly frame a few times. “I’m really stiff!”
“Dunno,” Rath said, “I don’t remember either.” She glanced at the clock, it read 2:13 PM. “Probably very late, check it out. We’ve slept in past two in the afternoon.”
“We should wake the others,” Greldon suggested, stretching his sore arms with a grimace. He reached over and tousled Toby’s dark brown hair and plugged his straight nose, “Yo, wake up. You slept through half of the afternoon!”
Rath walked back over to Serena and touched her shoulder very softly; her heart-shaped face was perfectly surrounded by her long, strawberry-blonde curls. She seemed so content Rath almost regretted waking her. “Serena,” she purred, “Serena.”
“You’re never going to wake her up like that, Rath. Try this: Ay Serena! Times a’ wastin’!” Greldon shouted. She gasped and flinched, covering her eyes when he yanked open the curtains of the window above her. Greldon loved messing with everyone in the morning; it seemed he was the only morning person.
Toby quickly pulled his head under the blanket, “Dude! Too much sunlight for me! If you keep this up, one of these days, you’ll kill me! Close the curtains!” He groaned and thought, what a great way to wake up in the morning- one of your best friends exposing you to pure pain. Greldon just laughed.
“Would you quit it? The light is too bright!” Serena scolded in a scratchy I-just-woke-up tone of voice.
He pulled his hand away from the window as if the curtains caught fire. “Alright, I’m sorry.” Rath giggled and Toby cracked a half smile, peeking his face out from underneath the sheets.
“There’s Serena for you,” Toby joked; but Rath knew it was a true statement. He sat up in bed. “Ugh, do yourselves a favor and never stick your nose near the covers unless you like the smell of mildew. Have they even washed these sheets in the past decade?”
“How did we pick a shabby hotel like this?” Serena asked, wrinkling her nose at the disgusting state of the cheap, cheesy décor. “I don’t even remember taking one step inside this disgraceful place!”
“Me neither!” Toby, Greldon, and Rath said in unison.
“Does anyone remember what happened last night?” Toby asked, stretching his long legs.
Just as before, everyone shook their heads at the same time. They took turns glancing at each other’s confused faces. Serena noticed they were all wearing street clothes- jeans and t-shirts. Even their shoes were still on. It seemed to her they just rolled into bed without getting pajamas on first.
Rath moved towards the window. “Toby, I’m pulling back the curtain again.”
“Oh, no. I get the wonderful opportunity to experience mildew up close again,” he groaned. He dove under the covers again and she pulled back the curtain.
“Hmm,” she said, “I think we are in a small town near the coast. We’re still in the human’s land, but we are close to Xander Island- your home, Serena.”
“Interesting,” Serena replied, a confused expression on her face. “But that doesn’t really help us remember what happened last night.”
“We’d better find out!” Greldon announced. “There’s my backpack; let’s see if we can get some answers.” He tromped over to it, turned it upside down, and shook it until all of its contents spewed onto the stained, dark grey carpet. “Here’s my wallet!” He held it close to his face and opened it triumphantly; he slapped it back onto the pile and dejectedly announced, “No money.”
Serena spoke up, “Wait, there’s a slip of paper sticking out of it, hand it over.” Greldon sprang up and gingerly placed the wallet into Serena’s hands, she gave a smug smile. She loved it when he cooperated. “It’s a receipt,” she announced, “Apparently, we bought a pair of sunglasses, a notepad, a twenty-four pack of crayons, a compass, string, and two bags of powdered donuts at a mini-mart yesterday.”
“Oh, yeah,” Greldon held up the notepad and the crayons for everyone to see. “It’s all here except for the sunglasses and there’s only one bag of donuts.”
Toby knew something was in his pocket while stretching; he reached a hand inside his pocket and pulled out the sunglasses. “Got ‘em here.” He realized they must have gotten them for him; living in the Underworld most of his life, Toby was extremely sensitive to the sun.
“Then we must’ve eaten the other bag of donuts yesterday,” Greldon deduced.
“Why did we buy string? Are we gonna dress up a Thanksgiving turkey with it or something?” Rath asked, joking but still as confused as ever.
Serena scoffed, “It’s not that kind of string, Rath. It’s more like twine.”
“Yeah, and there’s about two miles worth on the roll,” Greldon added, “Unless you managed to get a huge turkey, I doubt anyone would buy this much string for Thanksgiving.”
“Besides, it’s the end of January. November is a long way away,” Serena added.
“Guys!” Toby yelled out to get everyone’s attention. “Focus.”
“There’s a business card in the wallet, too. For some psychic named Rodolfo Hughes. Says he can tell you almost anything you want to know, ‘for a small fee.’”
“You think we went to see him last night?” Toby asked.
“It’s a good lead, if any. Greldon, is there anything else in that backpack?” Rath said.
“Hmm. Not much else in here except this first aid kit and my bag with a vial of snake poison inside of it. But I already knew that was in there.” Having a snake for a tail, he sometimes had to extract some venom from it so it wasn’t a danger to his friends. Of course, he also had the anti-venom in the bag as well. He flipped through the notepad and stopped at a page written on with a violet crayon. “Hey, this might be something, check it out.”
They all crowded around the notepad, which couldn’t have been bigger than Greldon’s hand. Scribbled in sloppy, sideways writing, almost too difficult to read, it said, ‘Early to bed, early to rise. Doesn’t look like you are waking up anytime soon. Have fun trying to remember now. Hope you all die. See you soon, Demi.’
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