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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 8:37 am
The Quiet One
I wrote this about a year ago...
i sit here & i wonder why, people just pass me by. i see them, and they see me, sitting here beneath the old birch tree, thinking of all the things i've done, and all the places that i've gone, and all of those of whom i miss, all on a foggy night like this.
A man stops by and says hallo, and i ask him "where ye go? he told me "I go over yonder, to save my son from a blunder" "what's this blunder might I ask?" "To seek a love that will never last" "If he only seeks, how can u tell, that in this love he is already fell?"
He looked me over with a sigh, "How can you say his love won't die?" "I say so for I am she, who sits here underneath this tree, waiting for my long lost love, who was beckond to them above. And in my solitude I love him still, so in my heart, stay he will"
At these words he was surprised, for he saw within thine eyes, the love of which i spoke so clear, and he of whom i spoke so dear. So parting then he went away, to his home so far away, waiting for his son, to his love, to say, "won't you marry me today?"
I stay here waiting quietly, for someone to come and talk to me. To tell me what is wrong today, and for me to tell what i have to say. And so my work is always done, Yet never finished under the sun. For always there are those who cry, for the love there parents would deny.
If you go walking far or near, you will always find me here. sitting under my old birch tree, waiting for you to talk to me. Don't be shy to say a word, or I will stay quieter than a bird. I'll help you if you have the need. but only if you will take heed.
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:57 am
Very elegant and poetic in style. Beautifully done.
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Matron_ofthe_Herd Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:57 am
redface sweatdrop thanks...
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 1:14 pm
Matron_ofthe_Herd Very elegant and poetic in style. Beautifully done. I'll definitly second that! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 10:23 am
Lady Yume Matron_ofthe_Herd Very elegant and poetic in style. Beautifully done. I'll definitly second that! 3nodding *blushes* thanks
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Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 3:57 pm
I LOVE IT heart heart i love it so much,its so beautiful biggrin smile 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Jun 06, 2006 6:39 pm
acedia2 I LOVE IT heart heart i love it so much,its so beautiful biggrin smile 4laugh O_o *blushes* sweatdrop i wrote it right after i met my man
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 10:30 am
My Kind of Morning
the light came through the window, the birds began to sing, in came the dawn, in came the spring
needs work..i know >_O it changed since i dictated it this morning...
This was moved from another thread here to save space in the subforum
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 10:34 am
Breaking Away
blow by wind. the air does me well. it carries my soul away, to a bright new day, where i might live free, just my souji and me. a chance for a new beginning, with no need of winning. oh parents that are mine, tell me, what is wrong? with believing what i do, & loving whom i do. I having no regrets. I'm just doing my best, to keep myself alive, while you seem to want me to die. soaked in my depression and pain, to be tormented again and again. but what's there for me here? just another weeping tear? without hope for a brand new day, or the chance to get away, to live my life today, to do so, i can not stay. for if i do i'll fall, from this towering wall, that you yourselves have built, to keep me here against my will. oh parents have you no hearts? are you so selfish that you can't let me go? do you have feelings you do not show? because it doesn't seem so. And so I wait for my day, when the winds will sweep me away, to some land far away, where my love and I will stay, safe from your tiranny, safe from your lies, free to be who we are, together under the stars. And when that day does come, I'll say goodbye dad and mom. You'll see me not again, And so you see I win. I'll never see them again. ~Ros
7/10/06 sorry it's not pagan related...just started typing & that's what came out... i meant for it to be pagan but...i guess i've got the wrong things on my mind at the time... This was moved from another thread here to save space in the subforum
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 8:39 pm
Untitled i sit here alone in my room wondering where the time went i see the pictures of parties & fun & wonder why i'm not there what happened to the good times when i was involved when everone laughed & played the endless nights of drink & talk the wandering around mainstreet where'd the time go? how fast did it fly? once i moved away it's been 3 years but feels like forever oh why did I have to go away. i was dead for 2 years then started to wake up but i've grown tired again longing for times i know that are gone longing for the past my life is great i've passed the test but there's something that holds me down under the surface of the river of life i feel i'm going to drown lost, disconnected, lonely here in my room of solitude i turn to religion but what does that do? takes my mind off things for awhile it's not that i'm sad it's not that i'm lonely it's just my need for the past the times when surrounded by so many friends friends that i thought would last but i feel it's not so though we still do talk not the way things used to be they're all having fun still clubing & drinking when they do, do they think of me? i see them all growing going their seperate ways from where i'm heading to am i sad? not much i'm just wishing that i could go too these are the years, that are to be the best of our lives but mine just seems so dull it's not that i'm bored or that i'm lonely i just notice a different between me & my friends "friends till the end" or so the saying goes but as 21 draws near will i still be here drinking all on my own? I don't mean to fuss i don't want to cuss but damnit am was i? when everyone has their parties i'm here on the computer in my room do i dare confront this? will i tell them i want in? i think not, because i've done it before & no difference has there been made do i care? it seems so why? i have no idea my life is great, i've got a job i have the love of my life school's going good & home's not too bad so what is the big deal? not much i supose i wish not to impose so i'll just sit here some more no matter how much i'm bored & i'll say not anymore. Nov 9, 06 sorry it's not pagan related... when i write poems...it's completely random & usually just me ranting about something... but literarily...what do u think? heh heh i suck at writing anything... This was moved from another thread here to save space in the subforum
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:20 pm
I really loved the first poem but the second too I love even more! ^_^ I can relate to them, they reach the heart. Your poems are truly beautiful!
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