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 Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:46 pm
If you want to post your own stuff go right ahead, I write alot of lyrics and poems and I'd love to share them with you, if you'd like to.
Also you can share short stories or if you record music do so.
Because music is sonic poetry. heart
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 7:50 pm
Since I made the thread I mind as well post something first XD
Asylum Walls
A tremor in the night
These walls shake most violently
The candle's flame
dances ever so unnaturally.
A wretched display of blasphemy
Inversion of the faithful soul
An unearthing of shrouded secrecy
Dreams of madness awaken.
Artifacts of the forgotten one
Placed in utmost perfection
A rite of eternal damnation.
Awake from disillusion
To be brought from horror
To the darkest pit of humanity
Drown in the chambers of society.
Chained to asylum walls
Flesh devoured by pest
Heat swells my bones
As I weep on these edged stones.
Strength of the forgotten one
Transcribed through destiny
A power of the eldest visionary.
My Burden
Did I embrace the darkness?
Or was I caught, in dreams of nothing?
The mind so unchained
Yet the madness within
Leads me to this holy ground.
The gentle summer rain
Washing the tombs of the dead
Breathe the desolation into yourself
Time will vanish among the mist
Like a flower withering
In the change of bitter autumn.
Fall into the night
Bleed the soul dry
Alive yet so far from living
I carry the burden of the lost.
Loneliness holds your heart
In a veil of looming emptiness
A familiar song still plays
Among the cathedral ruins,
So distant among a forsaken past.
Fall into the night
Bleed the soul dry
Alive yet so far from living
I carry the burden of the lost.
Did I embrace the darkness?
Or was I caught in dreams of nothing?
The mind so unchained
Yet the madness within
Leads me to this holy ground.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:52 pm
Thanks alot man, I really enjoyed yours as well. I love the imagery and the flow/structure
Here is another of mine.
144
Endless hurt
Absence of mercy
My broken bones bleed
As I hunger in this chamber
Embrace me, kill me.
See into this flesh
Wounds of loss and disease
Infection pulsates everlasting
The mark of the neglected,
Seared into my chest.
My heart hollowed
Replaced with shame
No laughter, no joy
I am prisoner 144
I live to die
I die to be free
My brothers turned to dust
Yet I still draw breath
Captured among the enemy.
My final moment
I have nowhere to turn
With so many I die in the flame
None can prepare us for awaits
The furnace became my grave.
I am no more
Flesh replaced with ash
No tears, no sadness
I am prisoner 144.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 10:22 pm
I didn't know both of you were talented in such a way. I feel like a bum with no vocabulary. classified_fu
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