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 Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:00 pm
Kaaayyyy, so... I got this drawing, and I need feedback on it... just so I can make it look better. It page stretches so... le link.It was done in MS Paint. Took about 6 days to do. No shading to it yet in case I need to tweak some things. I had to look at a picture of a skeleton to help me with the bones. The picture was small and blurry, so the skeletons can very well have extra bones, or some bones could've been left out. I dunno. Sooooo... if you're an artist... pleeeeaaaasssseeeeee give me some feedback. <33
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:58 pm
The main thing I have to say overall is that I'm quite impressed, especially with the skeletons. The only thing that really bugs me is that the girl's head is about the same size as the waist. I've probably done it before without meaning to but it's one of the first things I notice. Of course, not everyone aspires to be super anatomically correct so it's most likely irrelevant.
I couldn't really tell how you did your ruffles, but if you ever need to make super poofy ruffles, usually I start by making little U shapes, making the lines up to where they all attach to the skirt or whatever, then filling in the caps in between those with upward-U shapes.
http://xxrouexx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4mfhg5
Uh, like how I did the skirt there.
Hmm, I like how your arms and legs actually look like arms and legs and not limp spaghetti noodles. The pose and perspective are great, and I can't wait to see how it looks completely finished :3
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:12 pm
Captain Silas Manner The main thing I have to say overall is that I'm quite impressed, especially with the skeletons. The only thing that really bugs me is that the girl's head is about the same size as the waist. I've probably done it before without meaning to but it's one of the first things I notice. Of course, not everyone aspires to be super anatomically correct so it's most likely irrelevant.
I couldn't really tell how you did your ruffles, but if you ever need to make super poofy ruffles, usually I start by making little U shapes, making the lines up to where they all attach to the skirt or whatever, then filling in the caps in between those with upward-U shapes.
http://xxrouexx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4mfhg5
Uh, like how I did the skirt there.
Hmm, I like how your arms and legs actually look like arms and legs and not limp spaghetti noodles. The pose and perspective are great, and I can't wait to see how it looks completely finished :3
Ooh, sooo... the head and waist shouldn't be the same size? O 3 o; Mmkay, I'll remember that the next time. (just attempted to start over on the head, but I messed up majorly, and kept the same head.) xP Ah, the ruffles; I attempted to make them, but I failed so I made them like ^, but wider and not so point at the top. Thanks for the feedback. <33
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:15 pm
Dig the skeletons, very nice. Just noticed on the chest area that there are some marking that are in the same or near the same color as the dress, perphase a lighter shade for the strings so it is more clear. Also I love the dress, only wish it was real, would be a very nice dress to wear somewhere....fun.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:52 pm
PoisonIvy_Quinn Dig the skeletons, very nice. Just noticed on the chest area that there are some marking that are in the same or near the same color as the dress, perphase a lighter shade for the strings so it is more clear. Also I love the dress, only wish it was real, would be a very nice dress to wear somewhere....fun. Oh there is? I'll have to fix that. Yeah, I was thinking of making the strings a bit lighter. xP Thanks for the feedback. <33 Haha, I know. After I was done drawing the dress, I was thinking "Damn it, this needs to exist." > w <;
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:30 pm
--Beckys Nightmare-- PoisonIvy_Quinn Dig the skeletons, very nice. Just noticed on the chest area that there are some marking that are in the same or near the same color as the dress, perphase a lighter shade for the strings so it is more clear. Also I love the dress, only wish it was real, would be a very nice dress to wear somewhere....fun. Oh there is? I'll have to fix that. Yeah, I was thinking of making the strings a bit lighter. xP Thanks for the feedback. <33 Haha, I know. After I was done drawing the dress, I was thinking "Damn it, this needs to exist." > w <; Always happy to help.
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:11 pm
That is so cute! I love it.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:32 am
So pretty! That's such an awesome dress *o*
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