In case you poke your head in, here's my two cents:

I like the concept behind it a lot. The execution, the word choice, the use of repetition, all work well...but

I don't agree with "confessing with the eyes". This is about what the eyes take in, isn't it? Absorbing, or trying to, all that dust, and strangeness. A confession is an act of speaking out loud one's crimes. It's spewing forth guilt and hoping to receive forgiveness.

I think the "will not, did not" Should be grouped on the page differently. If they are to be split, they should either be on a line together or each on its own line, for emphasis.

But the "I sit, I look, I am silent" is wonderful. Such a marvelous contrast with the stanzas of charging and action.