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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:59 am
_____________[│║║█║▌][ρ є я ѕ σ η α ℓ - ∂ α т α]
 Full Name: Tamamo no Mae Nickname: Dentesu-teki no Kuybi (the legendary nine tailed fox) Age: Unknown Appears to be: 17 Gender: Female Number: 0 Location of Number: cleavage Personification of Death: Purity Sexual Orientation: Straight, Height: 5'8 Weight: look and guess your self Appearance: refer to picture Personality: foolish, childish, considerate, tsundere (at times) yankee, enjoys the hunt Personal Skill: unnatural cleanliness, reading opponents move and a master of Tea ceremony Favorite Food: Fried Udon Favorite Drink: herbal tea Least Favorite Food: n/a Likes: cosplay, cute boys and girls, and nature Dislikes: dirt, anyone who calls her old, being underestimated Hates: betrayal
_____________[│║║█║▌][¢ σ м в α т - ∂ α т α] Cero: Gran Rey Cero
Balla:
Motto: "First strike the crouch, Next really strike the crouch, Repentance through crouch violence" Battle Strength: • Intelligence (Quick adaption) • Mobility Battle Weakness: • Reiatsu • Kido
Zanpakutou Sealed Appearance:
Fraccion and Higher Resurrección Sesshouseki (killing rock) Appearance: beast form (left) 
Human Forme (right) 
Abilities: Divine Kyuubi- cero takes little to no reaitsu Shape shifting- Able to change from beast form to human form (In beast form her nine tails is always shown. While in human form her nine tails appear to be one (though does commonly spread) Clairvoyance (not used in battle, one post use 5 post cool down) -Hyper Intuition (or referred to as "Fight or Flight response")- can dodge near fatal attacks (one time use per fight per opponent) High-speed Regeneration Knowledge of medicine and medicinal herbs Regenerative clothing Enhanced Endurance Enhanced Senses Sonido Master -Hyper Speed Combatant Master Swordsmanship Specialist Highly Adaptive Master hand to hand combatant -Master of Taichi Attacks: •Kiba no amaterasu (fang of Amaterasu)- Able to create a sword from the fur of one of her tails (only preformed in human forme) •Kyuubi no Ikare (wrath of the nine tail)- An condensed cero, red and black in color, -Kyuubi no tsume no Ikare (wrath of the nine tails' claw)- shoots out a concentrated blast (equal in strength to the Kyuubi no Ikare) from her sword much like Getsuga Tenshou (only capable in human forme) • Mishoku (eclipse)- a concentrated orb of cero shot from the mouth (only able to preform in beast form • Polygamist Castration Fist (not real attack)- do I really need to go into detail (it's more of a comic relief taunt then an actual attack)
Privaron Espada and Espada (unless given permission) Resurrección: Segunda Etapa Appearance:Balanced Forme

Offensive Forme
 Abilities: All stated in Resurreción (excluding Shape-shifting) Megumi no battura- Allows Tamamo to enter a form of complete offense, loses most of her defensive qualities, (Offensive forme only) -Master of Bājíquán (only capable in segunda etape offensive forme)
Kyubi no Megumi- in Tamamo's balanced forme she takes severely reduced damage from normal cero and low level hado/kido, limits the restraint in Bakudo (up to level 61 you will be restrained for 1 post anything over level 61 will only restrain you for 5 posts max), reduced damage from mid-level cero and hado/kido skills and slightly reduced damage from advance cero/hado/kido Attacks: • Higanbana Sesshouseki (Red spider lily killing rock) Cero- A highly condensed cero shot from the hands, can be shot through the fingers for increase speed and accuracy (balanced only) • Zetsumei-sama no Ikare- A continuous hand to hand barrage that deals blows so fast that they can hardly be seen by the naked eye and each punch has the same force as a white dwarf star (offensive form only), must concentrate before use •
((Hollows do not get a Zanpakutou, hollows only get basic abilities)) _____________[│║║█║▌][ѕ т α т ι ѕ т ι ¢ α ℓ - ∂ α т α] ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ω σ η : 0 Sealed Offense-82 Defense-78 Strength-75 Mobility-100 Endurance-75 Intelligence-90 Cero-15 Reiatsu-50 Health-85
Resurrección (beast forme) Offense-35 Defense-90 Strength-100 Mobility-50 Endurance-75 Intelligence-90 Cero-45 Reiatsu-75 Health-90
Resurrección (human forme) Offense-82 Defense-78 Strength-60 Mobility-105 Endurance-75 Intelligence-90 Cero-35 Reiatsu-45 Health-80
Resurrección Segunda Etapa (balanced forme) Offense-82 Defense-78 Strength- 40 Mobility-105 Endurance-75 Intelligence-90 Cero-60 Reiatsu-40 Health-80
Resurrección Segunda Etapa (Offensive Forme) Offense-90 Defense- 60 Strength-100 Mobility-80 Endurance-60 Intelligence-80 Cero-0 Reiatsu-80 Health-100
_____________[│║║█║▌][є q υ ι ρ - ∂ α т α ] Tattoos/scars/birthmarks: Extra:
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Family: • None though in a sense all of Japan • Background History: • Though being one of the earliest arrancar, Tamamo was always, well let's just say childish, considering from the beginning of civilization in Japan Tamamo has always allowed herself to be seen by humans (as a result of her powers she was thought to be a god and is still respected as a god in modern Japan as Amaterasu and in some case the Great God) as she captivated them with her beauty to the point that she became a court lady of Emperor Toba under the name of Tamamo-no-Mae which people thought was a nickname unaware it was her real name. She was said to have gradually gained the favor of Emperor Toba with her beauty and extensive knowledge. She was said to have the looks of a twenty year old. besides the fact that she was supposedly killed by a hunter not much is known of her past besides the fact that though she's actually a jackal she prefers to be called a fox because they look cute.
Theme Song:Kyoumu Densen
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 8:45 pm
I need to decline this, for you have ultimate defense, offense, speed, close, mid and long range battle tactics. Your character has much more strengths than weaknesses, you need to at least equal him out a little bit otherwise your character is a God among mortals.
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:01 am
Yeah I was going to change him but decided to post him up there for kicks and giggles, so here is my current character
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:22 am
Man, if I wasn't a shinigami...
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:59 am
Mishoku- can't be inescapable especially since it is stronger than your other attacks.
Castration Fist Technique- I would need a description since it is not as obvious as you may presume, since it is not explained you could use anything and say it is this technique.
And once again your strengths far outweigh your weaknesses. I would strongly suggest dimming your strengths down, I mean with this RPC you are not only one of the fastest and strongest but you have an ultimate defense and your reactions and tactics are supposedly some of the best. Your character is a GM, I mean to have a strong character is always wanted by everyone, but to have a character that is near impossible to beat that just takes the fun out of the whole experience for not only your opponents but yourself as well. Balance your characters a little better if you are fast don't be strong, if you are smart don't have an ultimate defense, if you are defensive don't make your attacks so strong...ect I mean it would be impossible for even multiple opponents to even graze you in battle much less defeat you. I do admire your creativity though, but you go way overboard with the powers and strengths of your characters.
I would suggest picking an element and using the strengths and weaknesses, or even picking two physical/mental strengths and basing your character(s) around those. But placing so many strengths and so little and uneven weaknesses makes your character less fun to face in battle and even less fun to RP with, since little to nobody will want to face your RPC. If you need help balancing your RPC, I am more than happy to help you if you want.
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:00 pm
there edited and so on , so it should be dubbed down some while still maintaining a presence stronger then primera and the Castration Fist was a joke in the parenthesis I put, not real attack
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:31 am
Abilities: Divine Kyuubi- cero takes little to no reaitsu Accepted
Shape shifting- Able to change from beast form to human form Clairvoyance Accepted, with post limit and cooldown
-Hyper Intuition (or referred to as "Fight or Flight response")- can dodge near fatal attacks (though based on luck) If by luck, you will roll a 10 sided die, odds you get hit evens you dodge
High-speed Regeneration Accepted, fatal injuries will be unable to be healed
Knowledge of medicine and medicinal herbs Accepted, but you will not be able to know a cure for a zanpakuto poison you have never faced before.
Enhanced Hierro Denied, since you have high reflexes and are highly adaptive
Enhanced Endurance Accepted
Enhanced Senses Accepted
Superior Sonido Accepted
-Hyper Speed Combatant Accepted
High Spiritual pressure Accepted
Master Swordsmanship Specialist Accepted
Highly Adaptive Accepted
Master hand to hand combatant Accepted
-Master of Taichi Accepted
Immunity to poison Denied, there is no reason for this to be an ability since your zanpakuto is not poison based
Abilities: -All stated in Resurreción (excluding Shape-shifting) Accepted
Monstrous Strength Denied
-Master of Bājíquán (only capable in segunda etape) Explain this, I am not familiar with Bājíquán
-No Second Strike- rumor is that Tamamo's strength is so strong that she can take down high level shinigami with one strike Denied
Megumi no battura- Allows Tamamo to enter a form of complete offense, loses most of her defensive qualities, (Offensive forme only) Accepted, remember the flaw though
Kyubi no Megumi- in Tamamo's balanced forme she is not affected by any cero, or form of kido below B (75 and below) rank (balanced forme only) Denied, immune to cero is okay to a point but if someone has enhanced cero no cause that is a strength for them, same goes for Kido if someone doesn't know all the Kido it would be unfair for you to be immune to 90% of the Kido. Change it to immune to cero that is not enhanced and Kido up to 65 and below. Vast Spiritual Pressure Accepted
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 2:16 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 2:21 pm
Sorry, one last thing Battle strengths and weaknesses will now be stats only not battle types and things that will throw your focus off.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:52 pm
change your battle strengths and weaknesses accordingly.
You have attacks listed as Cero but your Cero level is very low, so having attacks that say they Cero and do that much damage your Cero level would be higher. Other than that I do not see a problem, quote me and tell me when it is fixed.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:00 pm
Changed it, was gonna make it equal to gran rey but changed my mind
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:18 pm
Dein-zu Changed it, was gonna make it equal to gran rey but changed my mind Your battle strengths and weaknesses are still not changed.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:21 pm
according to your stats Mobility and Intelligence are your strengths and Cero and reiatsu are your weaknesses. Since your reiatsu is so low you will need to remove High spiritual pressure from your Shikai abilities and Vast spiritual pressure from your Bankai abilities.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:44 pm
Done and added kido to weaknesses
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:52 pm
Dein-zu Done and added kido to weaknesses No you need to take off your current strengths and weaknesses and only use Stat based strengths and weaknesses. So your strengths would be Mobility and Intelligence and your weaknesses would be Kido/Cero and Reiatsu. Those are the only things I want listed in your strengths and weaknesses unless you have a specific elemental weakness or something of the sort.
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