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 Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 4:31 pm
Post your stories and poems in this section post stories in chapters to keep the posts short and sweet. their will be a general discussion thread for all you furs to discuss ideas and topics related to your work. If you want criticism on work just ask your guild members their opinions, be honest but don't be cruel about it.
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:00 am
Okay, this is a short story I wrote a couple years ago, but my original Idea was to make a book out of it. So i want to know what you guys think. 3nodding
Hand in hand we walked down the isle of judgment. The walk was a long and painful, eyes on us like we are a disease that can be spread. Her and I, just a couple of misfit girls. Just there because no one cared to see us holding hands, hanging out, and being ourselves. I loved her like no one could imagine and she loved me back in the same vibrant passion. We didn’t know what would happen, if we would be exiled, or put in jail, but what happened killed me that day. They were going to exile us but then everyone in the congregation said, “No, you can’t just push them out of society. You should take away there life together.” When we herd that at the trial we looked at each other in surprise and hoarder. “Can they really do that?” I thought, “Is that even possible without taking one of our lives? No, they wouldn’t dare to take someone’s life, let alone two peoples lives! They couldn’t, they wouldn’t. Would they even dare?” When we got back to the trail after the reassess we were in for a fight. “What had they dicidsed? What was going to happen to us?” I thought scared to know the answers. I held her hand tight, never wanting to let go. Then they told us that she was going to be executed. “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed, “You can’t do that! That’s not right! Why would you do such a thing?”
“Well it’s easy, it’s unnatural for you two to be together. So we eliminate one of you.” The Judge said. We cried for hours that night and made it a night to remember. Passion it love we made that night before She had to leave me forever. I loved her so much!
It’s been two years since that day, I still cry at night when I think about her. I have vowed never to love anyone ever again! I’ll die single and alone, as she would have if it were me who was executed, well more like murder.
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:49 pm
TK Rules Okay, this is a short story I wrote a couple years ago, but my original Idea was to make a book out of it. So i want to know what you guys think. 3nodding Hand in hand we walked down the isle of judgment. The walk was a long and painful, eyes on us like we are a disease that can be spread. Her and I, just a couple of misfit girls. Just there because no one cared to see us holding hands, hanging out, and being ourselves. I loved her like no one could imagine and she loved me back in the same vibrant passion. We didn’t know what would happen, if we would be exiled, or put in jail, but what happened killed me that day. They were going to exile us but then everyone in the congregation said, “No, you can’t just push them out of society. You should take away there life together.” When we herd that at the trial we looked at each other in surprise and hoarder. “Can they really do that?” I thought, “Is that even possible without taking one of our lives? No, they wouldn’t dare to take someone’s life, let alone two peoples lives! They couldn’t, they wouldn’t. Would they even dare?” When we got back to the trail after the reassess we were in for a fight. “What had they dicidsed? What was going to happen to us?” I thought scared to know the answers. I held her hand tight, never wanting to let go. Then they told us that she was going to be executed. “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed, “You can’t do that! That’s not right! Why would you do such a thing?” “Well it’s easy, it’s unnatural for you two to be together. So we eliminate one of you.” The Judge said. We cried for hours that night and made it a night to remember. Passion it love we made that night before She had to leave me forever. I loved her so much! It’s been two years since that day, I still cry at night when I think about her. I have vowed never to love anyone ever again! I’ll die single and alone, as she would have if it were me who was executed, well more like murder. it was quite good some typos here and there but that is expected. you could have made your own topic to post your work in, this is simply the intro thread lol hav a good day
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Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 1:04 pm
Keido Sanada TK Rules Okay, this is a short story I wrote a couple years ago, but my original Idea was to make a book out of it. So i want to know what you guys think. 3nodding Hand in hand we walked down the isle of judgment. The walk was a long and painful, eyes on us like we are a disease that can be spread. Her and I, just a couple of misfit girls. Just there because no one cared to see us holding hands, hanging out, and being ourselves. I loved her like no one could imagine and she loved me back in the same vibrant passion. We didn’t know what would happen, if we would be exiled, or put in jail, but what happened killed me that day. They were going to exile us but then everyone in the congregation said, “No, you can’t just push them out of society. You should take away there life together.” When we herd that at the trial we looked at each other in surprise and hoarder. “Can they really do that?” I thought, “Is that even possible without taking one of our lives? No, they wouldn’t dare to take someone’s life, let alone two peoples lives! They couldn’t, they wouldn’t. Would they even dare?” When we got back to the trail after the reassess we were in for a fight. “What had they dicidsed? What was going to happen to us?” I thought scared to know the answers. I held her hand tight, never wanting to let go. Then they told us that she was going to be executed. “NO!!!!!!!!!!!!” I screamed, “You can’t do that! That’s not right! Why would you do such a thing?” “Well it’s easy, it’s unnatural for you two to be together. So we eliminate one of you.” The Judge said. We cried for hours that night and made it a night to remember. Passion it love we made that night before She had to leave me forever. I loved her so much! It’s been two years since that day, I still cry at night when I think about her. I have vowed never to love anyone ever again! I’ll die single and alone, as she would have if it were me who was executed, well more like murder. it was quite good some typos here and there but that is expected. you could have made your own topic to post your work in, this is simply the intro thread lol hav a good day haha, ok, next time I will do that! smile sweatdrop
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