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PostPosted: Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:29 pm


https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/ptM4PI3ZIwZ9glQqDkItUZ-jpP75PVSpl9NULOo3w4A?feat=directlink

Supposed to be Yuna from final fantasy, but I feel I can't draw 3D very well and her nose is too small. sad Help?

https://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/ZtC9IRJZncND_WWp_hMBuJ-jpP75PVSpl9NULOo3w4A?feat=directlink

A final fantasy character that I've started but not finished. (Don't know her name, I just like their look and am trying to work on clothing/body. Also, her her arm that is crossed is holding an invisible sword, so that's why her fingers look short.)
PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 10:02 am


Overall I think your art is pretty decent. You could improve on a few things
like on your Yuna picture it doesn't look like she has much hair I usually draw the hair first before the face or before I finish the head position. Try quickly sketching your picture using a very sharp pencil but don.t press down too hard. Then draw over it with pen or darker lines for the line art and discard any mistakes from the underneath sketch I find this helps a lot with my art >.<

With your second picture of lightning i think you just need to work on drawing clean straight lines.

I hope this helped I hope it didn't sound too harsh or anything >.<;;

Jodapan

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