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 Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 7:55 pm
Emotions conjure up behind my black eyes. Tears turn into crystals then shatter into a million pieces of worthless glass as they drip agonizingly slow from my eyes. Blood mixes with the glass when it cuts my cheeks and continues on its path.
My blood.
My tears.
Puddled at my feet.
Gathering on the floor.
Meaningless now.
Like me.
Sitting on my knees, screams of pain and frustration reach deaf ears and ignore me.
Lonely and forgotten.
Forever.
-----a friend of mine encouraged my to post something, despite my shyness
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:37 pm
i love this poem. it is amazing heart
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Posted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:30 pm
I would change the way you break the lines but other then that you are on the right track. 3nodding
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