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 Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 8:31 am
To sail the seven seas.
It must be every Man's dream.
I, however, take to the ocean.
You may think I'm a joke and
A Scoundrel, but you don't know me.
For my life is my decision,
I pull my hair out of it's tight ribbon.
A Pirate, but not just any.
A Pirate, different from many.
For I am a woman,
High above the Piratical men
A piRadical girl, in a Piratical way of life,
Never to be just a man's wife.
Hand of your jewels now,
Before I shoot, and you bend over and say OW!
My poem of My Piracy. Love it, while I live it. Tell me what you think.
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 12:47 pm
really great poem! love the visuals! heart keep it up!
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:32 pm
evil_twin_1975 really great poem! love the visuals! heart keep it up! visuals?
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 4:52 pm
Supergirl126 evil_twin_1975 really great poem! love the visuals! heart keep it up! visuals? I think she means your visual imagery descriptions. Not bad.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:20 pm
dramaartwriting Supergirl126 evil_twin_1975 really great poem! love the visuals! heart keep it up! visuals? I think she means your visual imagery descriptions. Not bad. oooooh, thanks. *comprehension dawns* sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 1:19 pm
i like it. it sounds like it would be some sort of song, almost a ballad of long ago.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:32 pm
By the way I love your Anemone comic strip PineKnot
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:51 pm
Very nice! -^^- I like it very much
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 6:54 pm
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