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 Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:44 pm
Paper-Cut Lies
Written; September-1-2011
Stars in the sky, shining bright
She sits alone with her blade
And as the pain trickles down
Like a crimson waterfall
She wonders who will notice
And who will be concerned
And if anyone will care enough
To call out her paper-cut lie
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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:41 am
Clever ending. I really thought it was -- well witty isn't the right word, but I already used clever so stick a synonym for clever in the place of witty. Very nice!
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EstoPerpetua Vice Captain
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