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Emmerah
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:41 pm


Alright, so No-one has posted for months!! :O What's up with that? Lets keep this guild alive, people!!
Anyway, I'm a bit of a guilty party too, so I'm going to be spamming guild with stuff I've written over the past few months (not all of it just yet, because that would be ridiculous.)

And here's the first of the lot.

To you, my friends - Written August 30 2011

To the ones who can't smile
because of sadness too deep
and the ones who are laughing
away the terrors of sleep
To the ones who are grinning
because of some inside joke
and the ones who are crying
tears of joy for new hope
To the oldest companions
and to those who are new
To you my dear friends
I truly love you
PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:39 am


Emmerah
Alright, so No-one has posted for months!! :O What's up with that? Lets keep this guild alive, people!!
Anyway, I'm a bit of a guilty party too, so I'm going to be spamming guild with stuff I've written over the past few months (not all of it just yet, because that would be ridiculous.)

And here's the first of the lot.

To you, my friends - Written August 30 2011

To the ones who can't smile
because of sadness too deep
and the ones who are laughing
away the terrors of sleep
To the ones who are grinning
because of some inside joke
and the ones who are crying
tears of joy for new hope
To the oldest companions
and to those who are new
To you my dear friends
I truly love you


Oh My Gosh!!!! I love it! This is brilliant! (so many exclamation points). I think the fact that you don't include any punctuation, and that you capitalize only the T in To is very Emily Dickinson and exceedingly lovely. I love the theme. I love the rhyme. I love the rhythm, I love the message. Fantastic work! This is definitely my new favorite poem!

EstoPerpetua
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