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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 11:45 pm

Read here: Kaishijin's curse

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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:36 am

It's interesting so far. I like it.

I'll give a more detailed opinion when I get a bit more sleep and I'm not trying to do fifteen things at once. xd

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Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:40 am

Momma Mira

It's interesting so far. I like it.

I'll give a more detailed opinion when I get a bit more sleep and I'm not trying to do fifteen things at once. xd

Just finished updating for today. heart

It will provide background and exposition! Eventually.

I look forward to your well-rested analysis. heart

I have so much more of this to write gonk All eight of the chapters I've written so far are a quater of a notebook. At it's end the story is 21 notebooks long. Expect it to be slow updating.

Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 12:01 am

Update sweatdrop

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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:16 am

I really like how you're presenting the time-line, pretty much where Kaze's attention is at the moment (dreaming or reality). It actually really fits.

I actually wouldn't be surprised if the "reality" parts turn out to be part of the dreaming parts either to tell the truth.

Like it a lot so far.

Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 1:05 pm

Momma Mira

I really like how you're presenting the time-line, pretty much where Kaze's attention is at the moment (dreaming or reality). It actually really fits.

I actually wouldn't be surprised if the "reality" parts turn out to be part of the dreaming parts either to tell the truth.

Like it a lot so far.

There is a reason all his dreams are memories, he has his nightmares when he's awake.

Arguably looking back on this the whole "line of reality" gets even more ambiguous. Kaze has a tumor is his memory center.

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