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An Sionnach Beag
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:02 pm


In our history sub forum, we are lacking a very significant event. Pan's death....This contest will decide who's version of his death gets posted as the actual event.

Those interested in this will first pm me their version of the story and I will post it. A vote will take place, the winner will be added to the history of neverland.

This one will be worth a lot. A lot meaning the prize on this one is 500k.

As I am expected to give half a mil to the winner, I expect a few things in your stories........

1. It must be written in 1st person (pan's perspective)
2. I expect more then three paragraphs, we are all....well mostly adults here. I will leave the length of paragraphs up to you guys
3. we all know how it ends....pan does in fact die and hook gets the sword.

His last words and thoughts will be left up to the authors as well as what happens between the time he falls and the lost boys find and bury the body.

Make it as emotional as you'd like!!! Drama and emotion makes it that much better! Move us to tears! Make us laugh in Hooks face. Let us cry with the lost boys as they bury their best friend and father figure. Point is, make it your best!

Voting will start on the fourth, so you guys have until the third to pm me all stories. Voting will last for exactly a week, and on the eleventh the winner will be announced and the prize given out.

Good luck to everyone!

Love,
Vywien emotion_yatta
PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:18 pm


And the contestants are.....

shellan21
"Damn it....what in the world was i thinking?"I wondered as i looked at the last place where wendy stood before i had told her...hell almost pushed her into leaving this place.It wasent right for me to keep her here.She needed to live her own life. In her own world....despite what i felt...i had to let her go.I rubbed my eyes letting out a small sigh."No...just...stop..it wsas the best thing to do...i had to..." i said as i walked back into the tree.

I stared around at my little lost boys and tink. They all looked back at me so confused, they were little...they didnt really understand what was going on."Boys......Wendy went back home....shes...shes not coming back..." I looked around see the frowns on their faces, well cept one...Tink...that little pixie always had it out for wendy and was glad she was gone. "She gone for good pa?" i looked down to see little dove pulling on my pant leg and gave her a light smile."Yes but its ok...we all still have each other....she had to go back to her family...they missed her."I said trying to make it easier on them. They nodded slowly...all but matches he stared at me. "WE ARE HER FAMILY....she dont need them...they were mean to her..."I sighed slightly and went over to him."Matches....she had to go back...she...she couldent stay any more" He growled slightly ."Yeah well its not fair!" he said right before he ran off into his room.

I sighed and slowly got back up."Tink...watch them please i need some time to think."She nodded pretending to be sad when really i knew she was doing a little metal happy dance.i walked up into my room and plopped down on my cot staring up at the ceiling.It felt like hours....though maybe it was just minutes before tink came barging in to check on me."Love...whats wrong with you?" she said as she sat down next to me lookin as innocent as possible."i....im fine tink...just thinking...tink...tell me...what was the codfish up to today?" Tink giggled at the pet name i had for hook and started to speak."Looked like he was getting ready to try another unsuccessful raid." I nod with a small smile on my lips. "Well then....i guess ill stop him before he even starts it." I said as i got up getting my sword. "Wait....no...dont....you dont want to go in there alone...even though hook is the cod fish he is, you have no back up...take some of the bo-"
"No....im doing this...and im doing it alone." and so wendy can come back and be safe here...I added mentally. Thats when tink got up in my face "No...i wont allow it peter i dont want you dead" Thats also when i got angry with her. "You dont think i can defend myself against him?....you think im going to die.....!?" i yelled at her and pushed her out of my way."Im going...i dont care if you not with me...im getting rid of him once and for all tink...hes nothing but a menace."With that i jumped out the window and headed to the docks.

It wasent long before i found the rodger, thanks to my old croc friend it wasent that harder either.I boarded the ship soundlessly, sneaking around,seeing most of the sailors asleep i went below deck trying to find hook. Thunk...thunk...thunk. Large boot falls...more than likely the man im looking for. I turn to face the foot falls sword drawn...the look on his face....priceless."Pan?" was all that the codfish could muster to say before he had to defend himself from a sword strike...which i was surprised that he had done so...i didnt think he was that quick. No matter though...just a small surprise he was sure there wouldn't be anymore...then again hook seems a little...different.As i fought him it seemed as though he was hiding something...something that i couldent quiet place my fingers on, until i got grabbed up from behind by shcmee. "Well now...pan seems as though your a bit....tied up at the moment dont you think?" he said with an evil laugh as he pointed his blade at my neck.s**t...this was great...tink was ******** right..."I must say you gave me quiet a good run pan....but...that run is now over...never land will be mine."

I felt it before i saw it, that hook deep within my abdomen.I stared at him seeing the life i had flash before my eyes.The lost boys...what would they do now...and tink?...would she go into a deep depression? Or would she kill herself trying to kill hook? Im just glad i sent wendy away...its best that she never know of this....I stared into those deep ice blue eyes...the smile on his features...the last thing i could muster up to do was spit on the face of his and curse him....i felt the pull...and then nothing...just darkness.

"Shcmee....dispose of the body in never wood....send the boys a message." he said with a laugh and took the sword from my cold dead hand. Schmee just threw me over his shoulder as though i were a rag doll and went aboard, going deep into the woods and throwing me only god knows where. The next morning, i think im not quiet sure since im a spirit now...i watched as tink found me....and flew back to the tree with tears...gathering up the boys...leaving the smaller ones at home of course and helped make my grave where i was laying. I watched the thousands of tears fall, heard the curses, the crys of disappointment, and could do nothing about it. I watched as the last shovel full of soil was placed over my body....and lastly i watched as poor tink sent the boys back, leaving the eldest in charge and sat there at my grave for days refusing food and water whenever some one offered.

I cyred when neverland decade into what it is now....and i pray that one day....someone will make everything right....



xX-Ignus-Xx

alright, mine is a bit different, but i like the portrayal of the characters in it.)

"alright boys! lets go get hook! there will be slashing, and guts, and shooting and screams, and some of us are going to die...but that is part of the fun right? To die, would be a great adventure!" I grin wide, drawing my blade and holding it in the air as i lift of the ground, my loud crow followed by a chorus of others, the lost boys rushing after pan on the ground, making their way through neverwood...they were brave little ones, and i would hate to see them die, but that was the drawback of this game with hook.

There it is...the Jolly Rodger, a beautiful boat really...and the stage for almost ALL the games with hook. I think it is a wonderful place, lots of high places to let hook climb so he can fight me in the air. Looking down i can see the lostboys swimming through the water...they were so afraid of the Croc, but me and that big thing had an understanding, he does not eat lost boys, he snaps at them, but never eats....but i feed them stories of it anyway. The thought always makes me chuckle.

I would let the boys climb up the side of the ship, before i swoop down and push the man off the crows nest, laughing out before i zip to the side, gunfire erupting as the pirates begin to call out "pan is here PAAAN!!" but soon their calls are drowned out as the lostboys rise up over the edge of the ship, giving a crow as they rush in, and cut into the distracted pirates, screams of pain soon turning into yells of battle as the pirates turn and fight back.

The door would explode open and hook would come out of his cabin, growling a bit as he draws a pistol, shooting a lost boy on his way down the steps, kicking another away as he draws his saber, cutting the kicked boy down. "WHERE are you PAN!" He looks up, spotting me as i lean over the mast. "well look, a fighting CODFISH!" i laugh at the look on his face as he steps forward into my diving charge, our blades clanking together. "maybe you can kill me today PAN!" i would smile. "i don't want to kill you hook, your to much fun...maybe i can make you more pirate-like though, give you an eye patch!" i laughs, dodging back from a hook slash at my stomach.

Hook was just playing the part, they would both live forever here in Neverland...and without each other, life would become pointless...Pan needed hook..now that he did not have his Wendy. I could see it, Hooks low stomach stab was to slow to mean anything...he wanted me to fly up to dodge it, and i easily could...but as i try to get air, her face comes to my mind again, the tears her eyes held as she left me...i could not fly, but i could feel the cold steel shoving into my insides...and i could still see hooks face turn to one of utter horror. "Pan no..." hi voice whispers as i sink to the ground, and he pulls his blade free, tossing it away.

He kneels over me, using his hook to hold my head up, his other hand trying to keep the wound closed. "Pan you cant die, not like this...don't leave me here alone pan.." He sounded so sad..but...i was more excited than anything...i knew everything in Neverland..i flew to the world and saw all there was to see..i fought pirates, and danced with Indians...i only had one great journey left to me. I smile for hook. "to die, would be a great adventure." I suddenly see myself, hook setting me down and rubbing the tears from his face, unknowingly smearing blood on his face. He then notices the lost boys it seems, and they had just now saw him, kneeling over me, blood covering him.

Hook takes my blade as a way to defend himself, pointing it at the lost boys, looking quite terrifying covered in blood, standing over my corpse. "take him....i give you the chance to escape now...take him, be sure his is buried or burned as he wanted to be....." he steps back, ignoring the glares of the weeping children who lift my body and take me away, taking me to my favorite spot in Neverwood...they bury me there....oh how i wanted to tell them i was fine, to tell them i was happy, and content....i wanted to tell them goodbye, and i wanted to wipe away their tears, and kiss their heads...tell them goodbye....but I was being pulled away to a light...blinding but warm....and when I can see again, I am greeted by the white shores of some strange, beautiful land...others were around me, we were all in awe of this new beautiful place...a place to explore and find new adventure...other lost boys, lost in this battle, and ones who waited for me rush in to hug me....i can only smile as i sit down on the beach..."we will stay around here...we will wait for the others...we will wait for hook, and we will wait for my Wendy." I smile, closing my eyes with a happy sigh......I will wait, and together, we will meet this new adventure.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 11:34 pm


im so in biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 11:38 pm


WOOT!!!

An Sionnach Beag
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An Sionnach Beag
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:09 pm


Due to things running and crap coming up I'm going to push all deadlines for this contest back by one week! This also gives everyone another week to write their stories!

New deadlines~
Dec 10 Story deadline
Dec 11 Voting starts
Dec 18 Voting ends and winner is announced
PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:34 pm


Um question. I kinda posted a rough "death scene" in here lies peter pan. :/ What do you want to be done about that? Lol. I could help anyone plan a history piece. Idk. I guess there isn't much of a question. Just kinda lost as to should i participate in this or guide others so they can put out their best work?

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:38 pm


iSymbi
Um question. I kinda posted a rough "death scene" in here lies peter pan. :/ What do you want to be done about that? Lol. I could help anyone plan a history piece. Idk. I guess there isn't much of a question. Just kinda lost as to should i participate in this or guide others so they can put out their best work?


lol ******** if i know ^3^
what do you think? you are muh right hand man heart
Hell you could even participate in it if you really wanna ^3^ I don't plan on voting so it would be pretty fair ^.^
PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:42 pm


Vywien
iSymbi
Um question. I kinda posted a rough "death scene" in here lies peter pan. :/ What do you want to be done about that? Lol. I could help anyone plan a history piece. Idk. I guess there isn't much of a question. Just kinda lost as to should i participate in this or guide others so they can put out their best work?


lol ******** if i know ^3^
what do you think? you are muh right hand man heart
Hell you could even participate in it if you really wanna ^3^ I don't plan on voting so it would be pretty fair ^.^

I mean i could, i already have a concrete base as to how its playing out in my mind. However it envolves spectre and idk how anyone feels about that. Wouldn't be to difficult to give you 6-8 paragraphs right now. razz but i truly don't need the gold. i don't participate in other parts of gaia enough to care. Im just here for the story... So uh..... >.< Right hand man will stand by as an aid to whoever needs it. But i will send you my thoughts v.i.a pm here in the next day or two. My story, and you can post it if you like.

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:45 pm


iSymbi
Vywien
iSymbi
Um question. I kinda posted a rough "death scene" in here lies peter pan. :/ What do you want to be done about that? Lol. I could help anyone plan a history piece. Idk. I guess there isn't much of a question. Just kinda lost as to should i participate in this or guide others so they can put out their best work?


lol ******** if i know ^3^
what do you think? you are muh right hand man heart
Hell you could even participate in it if you really wanna ^3^ I don't plan on voting so it would be pretty fair ^.^

I mean i could, i already have a concrete base as to how its playing out in my mind. However it envolves spectre and idk how anyone feels about that. Wouldn't be to difficult to give you 6-8 paragraphs right now. razz but i truly don't need the gold. i don't participate in other parts of gaia enough to care. Im just here for the story... So uh..... >.< Right hand man will stand by as an aid to whoever needs it. But i will send you my thoughts v.i.a pm here in the next day or two. My story, and you can post it if you like.


teehee ^3^ kk, and no rush ^.^
PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:57 pm


Voting is over!!! Two to one vote says the winner is Ignus ^3^

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