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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 1:36 am
ok, i really dont feel like typing it all out...so im jus doing the link thats already typed up WITH the picture i drew too. Most of you here wont get the Jade an Jay thing..jus read an you'll find out..hope you like it. ^-^ The beginning-Jade and Jayoh, an if you want to read the other storys (an there are others) go to this link. this set has them all in it. i think they are in order, but, i donno..take the shot thoughz. the Jade an Jay story SEThope you like it smile
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 9:30 am
I've read some of this awesome, cant wait to finish!
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:52 am
whheee ^-^
though anythingz? i mean...like, critique or w/e'z. being silent doesnt help meh..
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 4:20 pm
ALright, I just read the start of Jay and Jade. I liked it.
Some critique, there's grammer flaws, but that'll be every story though. ( Mine more then most sad )
Also are you writing in 2nd person narrowtive? I had just a little bit of a hard time keeping up, it seemed like it switched back and forth between those two alot.
But my rating of Jay and Jade the beginning 7 out of 10
Really enjoyed the hidden super natural part.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 1:13 am
its meant to switch back an forth. there the two main char's. when i get mroe into the story..ie; writing block ends, i'll introduce more char's. but it stays mostly with the POV of Jay an Jade, an then more so with Jade. an yeeaa..those grammar things are evil. usually i type so fast, i space rite on through them. sweatdrop eventually i'll get to fixing em lolz thankzez thoughz. when iz getz to it, ima fix some stuff :3 ...oh god i forgot what i even wrote there..oh yea! xD yea, you'll be shocked when i bring that part in ^-^
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