Since I am bored and Yuko's story and the war probably won't be written here unless I do something, I decided to work on that comic.
Here is the redo of the cover as I hated the first one. Looks much better now and seems for natural.
http://fav.me/d4c003tI wanted to work in her parents as edo tensei somewhere but I don't know how, any suggestions please?
Here what I original wrote as a place and created the panels for the three pages.They could change, but I need help.
This was planned awhile back, never made comics before but Yuko needs some love and a story. Or at least a proper goodbye to Itachi and her parents if I can find a way to work them in.-
Page 1
First panel shows edo tensei Itachi (I would imagine that he would be sad about everything that is going and what happened in the past. He would probably be subtle about it though).
Second- Yuko is shocked to see him. She heard about all this, but being in second or third trimester, she wouldn’t be fighting. She probably went out to quickly transport a patient to a hospital that was set up.
Yuko: Itachi….
Third- Itachi is probably facing her, maybe putting his hand on her stomach (not sure what to write, they might not say anything at all). He knew about her pregnancy, but he died shortly after finding out and she will give birth during the war. Karasu was born on November 18th by the way.
Itachi: So this is our child? Looks like it won’t be long before the baby is born
Yuko: No, just a few more months.
Fourth-She would probably hug him for the first time in months, not really expecting to see him after his death. It will be an emotional reunion, like the title would say.
Fifth- She would also probably kiss him, not really caring that he is basically a zombie. I bet a lot would be running threw her head at that moment.
Page 2
Panel one- Itachi: I didn’t want to hurt you by leaving again or having to fight against you. (Since he is being controlled like the others, who knows might have happened. Kabuto could be cruel. This is probably towards the end as I’m guessing he probably won’t show up until tend and this probably his last moment, some closer before being released like how Sasori and Shin was. My guess or how I want it to be anyways. Makes it more emotional that way).
Second-Yuko: I don’t want to lose you again! (Yuko is probably shouting, probably hysterical she sees him one last time and knows what’s about to happen. He probably only came to say goodbye to her as he didn’t get a chance before).
Third-Itachi is facing Yuko, taking her hands in his. Itachi: I’m sorry Yuko, this is goodbye.
Forth: Itachi smiles at her before fading away or something like that. Sort of like how he smiled at Sasuke and telling him that was the end or the last time before he died.
Fifth: Yuko wiping a tear from her eye, probably silently telling him something, not sure what (Probably how she loves and will miss him or thanking him for being there for her, etc….).
Page 3
Panel one: There are a bunch of crows/ravens flying.
Panel two: Yuko is looking up towards the sky, probably watching the crows/raven.
Panel three, it's about few a weeks or months later (depending how far long she is. She would most likely be five months before hand, maybe six) and she looking at the window seeing a crow on the window seal. She is holding her new born son.
Panel four: Reminded by her former lover, Itachi, she looks down at the baby, deciding to name him Karasu. Especially since he would look a lot like his father
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