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PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:37 pm



_____________[│║║█║▌][ρ є я ѕ σ η α ℓ - ∂ α т α]
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Full Name: Kira Sohma
Nickname: Shi
Age: 611
Appears to be: 20
Number: 7
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 5'5
Weight: 150lbs
Appearance: see pic
Personality: Calm even in battle
Personal Skill: Swordsman, Open Hand fighter
Favorite Food: Fudge, Cookies, Bagels
Favorite Drink: Saki and Soda
Least Favorite Food: Onion
Likes: Girls
Dislikes: Guys
Hates: Humans

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Cero: Black
Balla: Red
Motto: "Fight with all your might or not at all."
Battle Strength:
• Close Quarters
Battle Weakness:
• Kido

Zanpakutou
Sealed see picture
Appearance: see picture
Fraccion and Higher
Resurrección
Appearance:
Abilities: Can use Hierro (obviously), Cero Oscuras and Gran Rey Cero. Can shoot black fire from his hands and black lightning from his fingers.<3>
Attacks:
• Unnamed - Shoots Balla from his fingers.
• Unnamed - Shoots Gran Rey Cero by putting his hands together as it grows to the size of a basketball, he then puts one hand up with the Gran Rey Cero and shoots it like a beam.
• Unnamed - Channels a Cero into the sword and can fire the energy at the enemy.

Privaron Espada and Espada (unless given permission)
Resurrección: Segunda Etapa
Appearance:
Abilities: All abilities are enhanced by 50%
Attacks:
• Death's Gaze - Puts right hand over his right eye, shoots a combined Cero and Balla beam.
• Lighting Footsteps - Can move as fast as lighting, leaving scorch marks where his feet were. Attacking while in Lighting footsteps can destroy body or weapons.

((Hollows do not get a Zanpakutou, hollows only get basic abilities))
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ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ω σ η : 0
ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ℓ σ ѕ т : 0

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Tattoos/scars/birthmarks: Scars - Cresent Moon on his left wrist
Tattoos - An eye on his right palm
Extra:

_____________[│║║█║▌][H ι s т σ я y - ∂ α т α]
Family:
• none

Background History:
• Kira was born on March 16th, 1400 in the Middle Ages of Tokyo, Japan. Kira was 14 when his parents abandond him. Kira wandered the street for 3 years when he found Keizo Nakamura and lived with him on the streets. 3 years later 2 thugs poured animal fat on Keizo and lit him on fire, Kira saw and tried to fight them but got his right eye stabbed as a reminder of his loss. As Kira tried to fight the flames Keizo put his flaming hand to Kira's chest, leaving a scar of a burn mark. Kira died 3 days later.
Theme Song: Welcome to My Life - Sick Puppies
PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 9:16 pm


Please go into deatail about Lighting Steps and Death Gaze (since apparently it's only reason dor existing is to cut your death preception by half, I mean if you're that beast-made and you ned an attack that gives you a handicap just so the enemy can try to beat you then go 'head, just kidding though, but add on to those two ans maybe add on another attack.

And on another side note Cero and balla are natural abilities you can omit them if you want

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 10:09 pm


I have edited. Though I could not understand I did the best I could. If I missed something please let me know. Also, after the alterations will I be accepted?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 11:37 pm


in your Resurrection, you do not need to use Balla and Cero as attacks since they are normal abilities of a Hollow/Arrancar. So if you want you can take those attacks out and add some original attacks. For the death move it seems to not be powerful enough to have such a drawback if you want to make it more powerful and keep the drawback then that is fine otherwise you do not need that bad of a drawback.

Yes after you make the changes you will be accepted.

But I would recommend adding pictures of your Resurrection and Segunda Etapa forms to make it easier for others to envision your characters attacks. Also it might just be my comp but your main pic isn't showing up for me, is this a problem on your comp as well?

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 1:55 am


I have edited. Please inform me if this is acceptable. As for the pictures I don't know why I will post them here:

Appearance: http://images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/9800000/Katana-anime-guys-9867958-418-600.jpg

Ressureccion: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/dzKTJUOGa4I/TXxixE4N_lI/AAAAAAAAGSU/3FHApyRgRnU/s320/demon+samurai+warrior+from+hell+armor+and+sword.jpg

Ressureccion Segunda Etapa:
http://noobyvids4u.webs.com/photos/NOOBYVID4U/GrimReaper.jpg
PostPosted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 12:50 pm


Am I accepted?

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:08 pm


I said you were accepted after the changes were made.
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