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Bokyaku Kuchiki

PostPosted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:16 pm


Full Name: Bokyaku Kuchiki
Nickname:Kuchiki-san
Age: Appears to be: 19
Squad: 6
Position:
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Height: 5”11
Weight: 88kg
Appearance: User Image
Personality: Most of the time he is rather quiet and only talks to close friends if other people show up n a group that he doesn’t know he will usually avoid them but in battle he likes to show his true lust for bloodshed
Personal Skill: Origami, and seeing in the dark
Favorite Food:Most of the time noodles but he really doesn’t have a favorite
Favorite Drink: green tea
Least Favorite Food: anything bland
Likes: Walking, talking to his friends(only unless it is the head captain)
Dislikes: Mean people, headaches and lazy people
Hates: Anyone who constantly pesters him when he tells them to leave him alone

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Kidou:
Bakudou:1. Sai, 26.Kyokko,30. Shitotsu Sansen, 58. Kakushitsuijaku , 61. Rikujōkōrō,77. Tenteikūra, 81. Danku
Hadou: 1. Shō, 4. Byakurai, 31. Shakkahō, 33. Sōkatsui, ,88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho, 91. Senjū Kōten Taihō(with incantation only)

Motto: “Under the sword lifted high, There is hell making you tremble. But go ahead, And you have the land of bliss.”
Battle Strength:
• Is well rounded in strength and speed, and excellent with the sword
Battle Weakness:
• He can be reckless charging in without thinking leaving his defense down and is prone to attacks

Zanpakutou:

Name: Kurai ko
Appearance: User Image
Personality: Dark, evil and mean
Type: Dark
Inner World: User Image

Sealed Form
Appearance: User Image
4th Seat and Higher:
Shikai
Release Phrase: Shroud them dark mistress
Appearance:
Abilities: darkness that can summon illusions
Attacks:
• shoots large amounts of his own reiatsu form the tip of the blade
• within a veil of darkness Bokyaku has the ability to control illusions that can come to life
• Can absorb the reiatsu of some attacks and shoot them back at opponent

Lieutenants and Captains (unless given permission)
Bankai: Dark Queen
Release Phrase: Devour them in the darkness
Appearance: fatter sword almost like ichigos
Abilities: within a veil of darkness it can create illusions that can come reality that the opponent will have to fight or what ever Bokyaku has in store for them
Attacks:
• Larger Reiatsu wave(much stronger)
• Can control a wide variety of illusions such that sometimes his oppenent might have to fight them


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ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ℓ σ ѕ т : 0

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Tattoos/scars/birthmarks:
Extra:


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Family: Kuchiki clans 400th head of household


Background History: He is by far the strongest shinigami ever out of the Kuchiki clan surpassing all before him…Including byakuya,jin(399th head) He is known for his kindness to most people even if he doesn’t like most


Theme Song: http://youtu.be/xWvsY8vkH6k
PostPosted: Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:47 pm


umm not trying to sound mean but thats kinda a rip off of byakuya s bankai and the name kinda sounds the same

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:00 am


A LOT wrong with this profile.

1. It's not in our format.

2. You cannot have a cannon character also meaning someone so close to a cannon character it basically is a cannon character.

3. You must apply for a Captain Position. (the last two left are being reserved till further notice.

4. You cannot have the same appearance as someone in the show.

5. only Captain of Division 5 can learn every Kido. Not even I have learned every Kido and I am head Captain.

6. There is no Bio.

7. Your spirit cannot take over your body to enable a stat increase and a prolonged Bankai.

If you want to be a distant relative of Byakuya Kuchiki that is fine. As long as you have a different zanpakuto in every way basically. It can be similar but it can't be the same thing. I could even help come up with a Shikai and Bankai to get it close but not be the same.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:02 pm


Delete it Bye bye

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:19 pm


Take this a criticism, not as defeat. It's a challenge, stand up, strive towards perfection.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 12:32 pm


Bokyaku- I can help you make an acceptable profile. You don't have to quit, just because an obstacle is placed in front of you doesn't mean it is impossible to get by it just means you have to put forth some effort to get past it. Come on don't let a simple profile mishap get you so upset you quit. Let's work together to get you a profile that you like and is accepted in the guild.

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Bokyaku Kuchiki

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 6:28 pm


Shikairu Nara
Bokyaku- I can help you make an acceptable profile. You don't have to quit, just because an obstacle is placed in front of you doesn't mean it is impossible to get by it just means you have to put forth some effort to get past it. Come on don't let a simple profile mishap get you so upset you quit. Let's work together to get you a profile that you like and is accepted in the guild.

Well if you would help it would be nice
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:53 pm


Ok copy our skeleton and send me a PM, paste it in the PM and do not delete anything and I will get you started.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:44 pm


I changed a few things on the profile when I sent it back. One thing that NEEDS to be changed is

"Can control even a space and making it almost impossible to get out"

Since controlling a space does not fall under darkness, and the gravity control as well. Either you control Darkness or gravity not both. I would choose gravity though personally it has a more unique ability, and most do not use gravity control.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:49 pm


Shikairu Nara
I changed a few things on the profile when I sent it back. One thing that NEEDS to be changed is

"Can control even a space and making it almost impossible to get out"

Since controlling a space does not fall under darkness, and the gravity control as well. Either you control Darkness or gravity not both. I would choose gravity though personally it has a more unique ability, and most do not use gravity control.

How about i just change the ability because the darkness is kind of a necessarily thing cuz how can it control a specific spot of gravity then thats what the veil is?

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:56 pm


change it to within the veil illusions will come to life. so you can create an illusion of something and the opponent will have to face it.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:39 pm


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change it to within the veil illusions will come to life. so you can create an illusion of something and the opponent will have to face it.

How is that

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 8:43 pm


Bokyaku Kuchiki
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change it to within the veil illusions will come to life. so you can create an illusion of something and the opponent will have to face it.

How is that

You didn't change it.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 9:05 pm


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Bokyaku Kuchiki
Shikairu Nara
change it to within the veil illusions will come to life. so you can create an illusion of something and the opponent will have to face it.

How is that

You didn't change it.

I just did though?

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 9:07 pm


Bokyaku Kuchiki
Shikairu Nara
Bokyaku Kuchiki
Shikairu Nara
change it to within the veil illusions will come to life. so you can create an illusion of something and the opponent will have to face it.

How is that

You didn't change it.

I just did though?

You still have this wrote in you attacks

"within a veil of darkness Bokyaku has the ability to control illusions"
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