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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 4:17 pm
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx D A N G E R xxxxD A Y Sxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx the true lives of the fabulous xxx K I L L xx J O Y S
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:01 pm
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx D A N G E R xxxxD A Y Sxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx the true lives of the fabulous xxx K I L L xx J O Y SR U L E S xxxxxxxLiteracy isn't too bad. Just about two paragraphs should do it, but never only one paragraph. Put more than just actions behind your words. Give the characters life rather than commands.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 8:21 pm
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