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 Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:06 am
http://fav.me/d48wyblI know there is a lot I need to work on, it is still a work in progress, but I am making a pic for a contest. The contest is for an OC group and the theme is back to school.
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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:53 am
So what do you think? Good? Bad? Besides the notes I wrote for the pic in the link, what do you think I need to work on? I never know unless someone says something.
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Yokai Orochi Revived Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:38 pm
Playboy Karasu Uchiha So what do you think? Good? Bad? Besides the notes I wrote for the pic in the link, what do you think I need to work on? I never know unless someone says something. I think it's pretty good. Kotorii's skirt needs a bit of work, I think I can see a bit where it's too thin. Skirts like that tend to flare at the bottom and be a bit wider then the actual body. My reaction to "Not sure what Kotori is reading, the expression on her face looks like she is shocked" was immediately to think it's one of Karasu's dirty magazines.
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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:00 pm
Yokai Orochi Revived Playboy Karasu Uchiha So what do you think? Good? Bad? Besides the notes I wrote for the pic in the link, what do you think I need to work on? I never know unless someone says something. I think it's pretty good. Kotorii's skirt needs a bit of work, I think I can see a bit where it's too thin. Skirts like that tend to flare at the bottom and be a bit wider then the actual body. My reaction to "Not sure what Kotori is reading, the expression on her face looks like she is shocked" was immediately to think it's one of Karasu's dirty magazines. Yeah, I know about the skirt, that is one things on the list I need to fix. Though at the moment I am a bit more worried about the arms as they seem really off. sweatdrop I will keep that in mind or try to member anyways. LOL he probably had a book cover on it and wrote something like "Science" and Kotori probably picked up, probably thinking it was an biology book or something. rofl
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Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 1:14 am
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:13 am
http://fav.me/d494mwkLine art, can't seem to get the hands right. Please comment. Seriously people, I don't have the plague you know. neutral
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:49 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 3:45 am
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 3:57 am
I have the plague tho
Today, I was so stressed that my foot nearly suffocated (the veins were constricting or some s**t) to the point where I nearly had to be hospitalized.
Srsly. It was the worst pain I've ever felt in my life.
I ******** hate everything right now HJVghyuvFCGHUXCFGVyhUCFGHUFCGyuGHUCGhjFgu
As for the drawing, me likes cool
You're improving quite a bit, keep it up. One thing I think could use work is their faces though -- they're usually too wide or too small and rarely are they that "perfect" size that fits with their body.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 4:00 am
Incubus Shane I have the plague tho Today, I was so stressed that my foot nearly suffocated (the veins were constricting or some s**t) to the point where I nearly had to be hospitalized. Srsly. It was the worst pain I've ever felt in my life. I ******** hate everything right now HJVghyuvFCGHUXCFGVyhUCFGHUFCGyuGHUCGhjFgu As for the drawing, me likes cool You're improving quite a bit, keep it up. One thing I think could use work is their faces though -- they're usually too wide or too small and rarely are they that "perfect" size that fits with their body. Well I have a cold on top of two diseases, so.... sweatdrop But ouch. Thanks. Yeah, I know. I been practicing on faces, it is fine on their own, just not on full bodies yet. That is where I have the most trouble.
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The Wild Hunt Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 4:12 am
I'm good at matching female bodies to faces but I suck balls at males, lol
I think I've gotten worse at males yet better at females... go figure, seeing as how I'm gay and like drawing males more... lol
For faces I just let myself go and experiment a bit... then I try to think of a neck-shoulder slope that would fit...
...but it doesn't always work XD
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 10:10 pm
I draw females better, probably because I am one and it is easier for me and been drawing them longer. Yeah sloping can help but not always. One thing I need to remember is that the males have wider shoulders than females. Well here is the finished pic- http://fav.me/d49e1dwBy the way, stay away from Doctor-Cruel on there, they are an a**. They only been there for a week and basically go around insulting people. He shoves crap down people and called me a stupid a**, s**t, etc...Hell his profile is basically about how he hates everyone and not nice. See, if I am rude, chances are you were being an a** first and I probably won't take you seriously or listen. Why would/should I? I swore I blocked him. stare
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 9:58 pm
Well this one lost again but I personally disagree with the results. Mine actually was the only one with a story behind it and a background, even crappy. I also actually worked on the pleats and plaid for the skirt, only one to do so as well.
I don't know, I thought it was better as it was a small contest most artist that entered were no better than me really but whatever.
They didn't even say why they won or what they liked about unlike some other contest I've seen.
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