Thus is Moonfire after she becomes Moonstar, if my sick mind gets its way. She's crying because she got to see Blackheart, who gave her her last life, the life of eternal love, and her two kits, who'd given her her first and second lives, trust and forgiveness. Blackheart would've died while protecting Moonfire during her kitting from a group of foxes who attacked the camp during a Gathering. {Saound familair at ALL?} Then a few moons later, Moonfire took her kits into the forest to show them a little. She truned her back for a few moments to kill a mouse, then heard two shrieks, and truned around to see a fowx snapping her children's necks. She would've killed it in a few moves, buried her children, then ran and hid for a moon, surviving and grieving on her own. Then she'd return to ThunderClan, and been her own self, but now a sadness was in her that could never be taken away. She was replaced by a different deputy for a while, not very long, but in that time a arrogant, bloddthirty cat become a warrior and tried to become deputy. She herslef became deputy again and now, leader. Her star and her eyes are still glowing because she's being set back down to the Earth. And it's not cleaned up yet, so sorry.
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