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 Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2011 7:36 pm
Its been a long time since I wrote anything and I wanted to see how you guys like it. I made this when I was in a creating mood so it might be kinda random. If there is anything you think I need to work on please tell me, I'm up for corrections. Thanks for reading this. xd
Illusions and Shadows
To the darkness of one's heart
cries the solace in one's soul
To be nothing more than a dream
can be surounded by fake memories
I'm the master of my illusions
I can make things true and factual
There is nothing but silence in the wind
for there is noone there but my shadow
My blood colored tears drip down to the world
all I see is red nothing more
Can someone come?
Can someone save me from these dellusion I'm seeing
The ones I created
my voice is broken
I'm lost for words
I'm lost to the world
The world is a cruel place
The world is harsh
There is no place for me
I'm only a shadow of humanity.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:14 pm
This is great *claps* I see only one spelling error, and it flow nicely.
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