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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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 Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:17 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:18 am
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:28 am
whoa..that's a lot of art..xD
On the next post...i'll c & C =3 (the first post)
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Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 11:49 am
1st Picture: It's really good, 'cept there's some problems with anatomy. Such as: The head is a little too big for the body (or the body is too small for the head), The neck is kinda long..which kinda ties with the first anatomy problem, and the hands seem kinda of small..but that also ties in with the first one.. =3
The coloring it also really good..but..i would try adding some shading and folds =3
2nd Picture: Basically the same thing i said about the first picture...some anatomry problems with the head and arms and body...
3rd Picture: There's anatomy problems again, but that's a pretty good full body picture =3
4th picture: The breasts..are a little to high...
5th picture: Some minor anatomy problems: the hand...the thumb is supposed to be on the other side, the ear..., and the guy's head is a little flat...on the top
6th picture: This one is reallly good =3..there's not really ANY anatomy problems, 'cept that the shoulders are a little broad..., but..it's pretty good =3..just add some folds in the clothes.. =3
7th picture: The eyes are kinda wide, the hair...looks kinda flat..compared to the other inuyasha pic.
8th picture: Anatomy problems (minor) , but that's a really cool drawing =]
9th picture: that's awesome! no anatomy problems that i can see =3
10th picture: Just minor problems with anatomy
11th picture : One this one, the boobs..aren't..correct... and one shoulder looks kinda..TOO wide...
12th picture: OH! these are really good! =3... Did you trace them? Well... if you look at these pictures you can see how you drew the boobs wrong on the other girl =3... on these drawings the hands..kinda...seem...not correct..
13th picture: ..they don't look like they're kissing..for some reason... but the guy's hand isn't..correct..looking..
Whoa..that was like.. A LOT to critique..D=... but.. on all of them it just seems you have problems with anatomy and folds and stuff..other than that you seem to be doing really well.. =3
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 4:41 pm
i say she has gotten better.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 5:34 pm
It depends if I take my time or if it is a really quick one I was learning from my friends at school until I moved and they helped me alot.
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 5:40 pm
No I drew them all the perfect ones I took my time on the really bad ones are old ones or just five minitue pictures before the bell rings.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 6:23 pm
Sayoko Shiranagatani No I drew them all the perfect ones I took my time on the really bad ones are old ones or just five minitue pictures before the bell rings. OH, that means you've improved a lot then =D..from the five min. drawings to the ones that you took a lot of time on..those are really good =D..it'd love to see more art drawn by you, though. You draw very well =D
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 7:12 pm
Thank you blue and thank you for the tips.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 5:20 pm
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 9:18 pm
I will post some more recent art if I have time
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 3:04 pm
I will try to get some new drawings soon but I do have many edits if people wish to see my edits
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:45 pm
Sayoko Shiranagatani I will try to get some new drawings soon but I do have many edits if people wish to see my edits Oh, i'd love to see your edits =D but please post them in a different thread...and don't edit this one...=D it's just so that when i delete threads after a certain time... you don't really..want..ALL of your stuff there...and it's also in the rules..so..,yeah =D
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 9:05 pm
I know blue and you may deleted this one I can make another one later I promise not to put any of my edits of Sanzuro here for Loki but I am keeping my slideshow on myspace I think that is fair
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Sayoko Shiranagatani Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 5:14 pm
Sayoko Shiranagatani I know blue and you may deleted this one I can make another one later I promise not to put any of my edits of Sanzuro here for Loki but I am keeping my slideshow on myspace I think that is fair OH ok =D...i'm just reminded you =] It's fine...about the slideshow...just...drop the subject.... though... I may not find it offending..but others may...i'll delete this soon =D.. I'll wait till maybe some others have a chance to see your art =D
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