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PostPosted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:00 am


Quote:
I hope I did this right!
;;ouo

Eira- the winner (has mild agoraphobia)
Paris- the candy


Username: Contumelious
Which Candy: City Night Lights
Monster Background: ----
Prompt:
____Eira sat it the squealing subway car ruminating on how she came to be in her current position…
•••

____Her therapist of four years suggested that she go out every week and go somewhere new. Motivated to change her ways to better her life and to become less of a burden to her parents, Eira decided to take up her therapist’s challenge and go somewhere new—her publisher’s office in New York City. Eira took a taxi in to the city on a Sunday, after she had completed the illustrations for The Yeti and the Princess Snow. She sat in the backseat with her legs together and hands resting lightly on the manila envelop in her lap. The classical piano music emitted from the white earbuds commanded her attention and distracted her from the confusion of a sweltering summer day in New York City.
____After arriving at her publisher’s office and delivering her pictures, Eira emerged from the large steel and glass building expecting her taxi to still be there—alas it had picked up another passenger and left Eira to fend for herself. Eira had been too nervous to call the taxi herself, her mother had done it for her. In her current situation, Eira was even more unfit to get a taxi. On the brink of a panic attack, Eira recalled her breathing exercises. Once she calmed down, she reached into her bag and pulled out a small map of the city that her mother had given her, in case of an emergency.
____Eira sighed. Once again she had to rely on her parents. Slightly downtrodden, she penned in a route on the map’s laminated surface and headed towards the heart of the city, Times Square.
____Just as she was about to go underground to the subway, Eira noticed an almost uninhabited Arcade. Strangely calmed by the Arcade’s pulsing lights, Eira mindlessly trudged toward it. Eira was an avid gamer and spent most of her time playing games online or on one of her many game consoles. She opened the door and stepped in, comforted by the dark and cool of the large room.
She headed towards the back, near the emergency exit and spied an old-fashioned game with a slick black fiberglass body. She was drawn by the yellow glow emitted by the rectangular screen and came to stand directly in front of it. Without tearing her eyes away from the glow, she reached into her pant’s pocket and pulled out a slim wallet. She retrieved two quarters and slid them one after the other in the thin opening on the lower part of the machine.
____The machine hummed and the screen’s starting image was replaced by the silhouette of a large city. The pixilated sun sunk behind the towering skyscrapers and slowly the sky turned from orange to red, to blue, to purple, and then to black. One by one the buildings lit up, small yellow rectangles in rows specked the large black buildings. Suddenly the screen zoomed in on the streets and the view paned so that Eira was looking down below at the city as if she were flying. The buildings and streets crossed and became a complex maze full of obstacles. A small white dot appeared at the bottom of the screen. Eira’s hand reached for the joystick and began pushing—left, forward, right, left, back—she avoided all of the obstacles with ease while progressing through the labyrinth-like city. The game progressively became harder, with more and more obstacles, more wrong turns and dead-ends. Soon three red dots began chasing her, the music’s tempo increased, and Eira’s knuckles turned white as she tightened her grasp on the knob.
____With a triumphant trumpet and a pleasing view of a city at sunrise, Eira escaped the maze and won the game. She smiled and released the joystick from her death grip. The machine whirred and a small round candy shot into the prize tray. Intrigued, Eira leaned over and plucked the sphere from the machine with her thumb and forefinger.
____The yellow candy seemed to scatter even the smallest amount of light that was emitted from the screens of the arcade games and soon the arcade was specked with bits of light. Eira smiled as she felt the weight and the warmth of the candy in her hand.
____Eira was violently pulled back into reality as her cell phone buzzed and rang, twittering out high notes like a robotic bird. Eira quickly put the candy into the inside pocket of her bag and pulled her black phone from her pocket. She flipped it open as she headed towards the door.
____Yes mom, I’m ok, I’m on the way home right now. Be there in about an hour. Okay, bye.”

•••

____On another one of her weekly excursions, Eira decided to brave the early-morning water of the community pool. She walked down the street two blocks with her towel wrapped tightly around her hips. Slung over her shoulder was her bag, containing some sunscreen and a change of clothes.
____Selecting a chair located in the shade she slipped her bag onto the white concrete, letting it fall onto its side. The candy bounced out of the bag and rolled the long distance to the pool, as if it was almost attracted to the water like a paperclip to a magnet. She ran after it and sighed when it plopped into the pool and sunk to the bottom. She swung her legs in front of her and slid into the pool, legs first. She submerged her head into the water and opened her eyes, searching for the candy. She found it, just a little further away, and began swimming towards it.
____Without warning, the ball began to release a steady stream of bubbles. The water became gradually warmer as the amount of bubbles increased and soon there was a muffled crack and a stream of light was released. When Eira opened her eyes again, a small child-like creature was standing at the bottom of the pool, looking around. When they locked eyes, he smiled, and Eira smiled back, warmth radiating from within her. She reached out for him and grasped his hand, pulling him up…

•••

____That had been three weeks ago.
____Since then, the impish boy had been pestering her, begging her to go out into the city. He would wake her while she was sleeping, swap caps on her markers when she was coloring, and hide her phone and her wallet. Eventually she caved in, and agreed to take him out—
____But just this once,” she said firmly.
____And so she came to be in a crowded subway, on a stained and beaten plastic seat, seated next to Paris, who seemed to be rocking with excitement.
____He shot a dazzling smile at her. “Where are we gonna go? A club? A movie? A concert? Ah! I bet we are going to a concert! I love the loud music and big crowds!”
____He leaned back in his seat and stretched his arms above him and touched the dirty window.
____He smiled again at Eira and giggled, unable to contain his excitement. Eira smile back nervously, and then looked to the ground. In fact, Eira hadn’t planned anything…she thought they might just have a short little walk.
____She groaned and placed her head in her hands. What am I going to do? I didn’t even bring that much money. Just enough to cover the subway ride and an inexpensive dinner…Well, besides the emergency card…
____Eira quickly sat up and ruffled her hair in frustration. She slid her hand over her face and closed her eyes, trying to relax. Breathing deeply, she restored her nerves and her resolve.
____The brakes of the train screamed as it came up to the plat form. The hydraulic doors sighed as they opened and the passengers began exiting in a steady stream.
____"Hooray! This is our stop,” Paris yelled, grabbing Eira’s hand and pulling her though the crowd.
____The little boy led the way though the maze-like tunnels of the subway, knowing—as if by instinct—where the surface was. When the dim lights of the tunnel ended, Eira and Paris were greeted by the hundreds of thousands of lights that made up Times Square.
____Eira and Paris both stood in awe of the sight before them, paralyzed by its beauty and magnificence. Upon recovering, Eira tugged Paris’s arm. Paris looked up at her, smiling, his face lighted by the city.
____I’ve got a surprise for you,” Eira said, with a smile upon her lips. “I think you’re really going to like it.”
____Paris’s smile grew as Eira led him to the curb. The warmth of the youngster’s hand brought confidence to Eira, and she was able to call a cab for them. The cab scooted away from the lights of the heart of the city and made its way to New York harbor.
____Paris looked around, slightly disappointed to be away from the brightness of the shops and restaurants of Times Square. After buying two tickets from an elderly boot attendant, Eira and Paris boarded an almost empty ferry. They took their seats and the boat started up, slowly moving along the dark New York Shore.
____After rounding a dark corner, the water began to sparkle with thousands of lights. Paris gasped and leaned on the rails of the ferry, reaching towards the sparkling cityscape.
____It's beautiful,” he exhaled, a reverent look upon his face.
____Eira grinned and joined Paris at the rail. “I knew you’d like it,” she whispered.



Quote:
Username: iStoleYurVamps
Which Candy: yakuza boss
Monster Background: Once the little guy he grew up wanting to become the best. When honest life proved to be a hard life he took the easier road. The tought road. The road paved in blood and honor. His home was a wreck and he thought himself better, knew he was better and with ruthlessness, and a firm hold on what he held to in his heart, he got it. Tradition with a twist…of a blade. But like any past from nothingness, he wanted to beef up his image, make himself a force to be feared and worshiped. He didn’t want any of it, he didn’t want that past for himself so he cast his past aside, remaking it, and no one could tell him otherwise. Ask him and he’d tell you a dozen stories…only to ask why you wanted to know. His past is a dead thing to him. He is the boss now. Or rather was the boss. It’s no matter. He didn’t it once and he can do it again. Just give him a little…time is all.
Prompt: It is like a backseat driver, or that annoying guy who tries to sound like a know it all but doesn’t know it all. It sounds like him. He came out and started to make demands, started to bark orders and it was just like having a baby. A baby with a vocabulary, bad attitude and the ability to drive everyone insane. The first day was the worst. He just narrowed his eyes at me, and glared, as if I had done something wrong! Because you know, offering to help him was a totally d**k move on my part. His legs folder, arms crossed, eyes narrowed, lips pursed. Total. Douche. A tiny douche. A tiny know it all douche. Taking him in was pretty much a bad idea in all retro spect but I could just abandon him. I did discover very quickly as we left, cars? ******** cars. The ‘boss’ was convinced they were demons out devour us. End result was walking home. The subway? Demons. Bikes? He was enchanted. Still is. Ended up getting him one. A Barbie kid’s tricycle. His reaction was hilarious. At first he thought it was a joke. Stormed off in a fit when he realized I was serious. Because I was. It was a garage sale bike. It was…touching when he he did go out and try it.
For the most part he’s leery as ******** about everything. I guess he understands he has to deal with it, and make due but he’s at least trying. Sometimes when we talk I admit, the way he talk about life kinda of freaks me out. He’s a user. A guy who used to lord over the lives of others. I mean s**t, he said he’s killed bitches and I believe him. On the other hand..he speaks of his home, the way things were in this..distant sense. He misses it and I kind of feel for him. s**t must suck to go from the king to a kid. Life is slowly getting into this sort of normal understanding with him. He’s made it clear, he knows I have power but he is his own dude. He wants to be at least. But he sticks around. He helps out when he thinks I’m not looking. Under his harsh gruff mask he’s got some honor in him, some twisted honor but it’s still there. He’s holding to it and in the end of the day..I think that is what keeps him going.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:34 am


Shnazz


Hmmm...

I'm trying not to sound like too much of a writing snob, but I'm a little iffy on both, to be honest. :/ I'll break down my opinions based on the entries.

City Night Lights
Initially I was a little curious that we were hearing all this detail about how the monster was obtained and released-- it didn't seem like something that needed to be in the prompt response. What was the reasoning of not having the City Night Lights entries answer the background? Is there something already planned for this monster?

The prompt was written well, but it didn't ensnare me or make me want to keep reading to find out more about these characters. I guess I would have wanted to see more of CNL's wanderlust portrayed rather than a scene with a more sentimental turn. Though it's interesting to have a guardian with agoraphobia, I didn't see Eira's panic or fear of crowds/inability to escape coming through as much as maybe I would expect for someone who's been going to a therapist for a while. Also, it's mentioned that she's a writer, but that she spends all of her time playing video games. Surely she has to write at some point, too. Also, if she'
so afraid of living with people/being around strangers, then why not just live in a suburb/the country and then write about the difficulties of raising CNL/learning to like the city more from there?

I guess that I think the style in this entry is okay: technically speaking, there's not too much with grammar to complain about. It's more the execution that I'm iffy on. The story takes a long detour at the beginning to explain unnecessary things, and then doesn't get me invested enough in the characters emotionally to make the final, actual prompt scene ring true to me.

Yakuza Boss!
For the background section, I was hoping for something more about what he did with the Xia Tribes, at least something to show that the writer maybe looked over the different planets in the Otherworld and read up on them. The background's okay, but it's a little confusing. When the writer says that "his past is a dead thing to him," I really don't know what to think. Does this mean that YB has decided to throw away his traditions? (seems unlikely) Or that he's determined to start afresh and not hurt people? (maybe?) But, at the same time, this monster should be grounded in his past because he's not a newborn, so I don't really know where the writer meant for that to go.

I feel like the prompt could have been written better, or that maybe the writer sent it in to us because they were running out of time and didn't get the chance to edit. I think that the subject matter is capturing what YB should be like, and it's interesting that maybe YB wants to not go back to being a killer, but it would have won me over much more if the writer could have elaborated on this more. This prompt feels like a stream of consciousness that could be an introduction to a response, but I'd like more dialogue, more specificity-- the part about the Barbie bike was great! Why didn't we get to hear more about that as the prompt? I think that, with more description and actual interactions between YB and the guardian would have been really good.

But the shortness of the response, as well as the lack of paragraph spacing and other technical flaws, in addition to the short and choppy-sounding voice of the stream of consciousness really make it difficult for me to want this to win. :// I don't know, this entry just doesn't make me feel like journals/rps from this writer would be easy to read, however interesting the ideas in them were.

Conclusion:
Contu's entry rambles, but eventually does get to the point and answers the prompt clearly. I can tell that it was edited and that it was cared for. Vamps' entry seems like it was rushed.

Since only two people entered for the flat, you could let both of them win. I'd be interested to see if Vamps' style improves--it might be that she was rushed rather than not interested/applying herself for the prompt. Since Contu already won a candy from the CYOA, even though I liked the CNL entry better than the YB one, there's still that rule about only getting two candies from one event. But maybe you could PM her and say that because she didn't know that she'd win a candy from the CYOA when she entered the flat that you'll let her decide if she wants to have her CYOA candy and CNL or just her CYOA one and let CNL go to the flaffle.

It would be bending the rules, though, to let her have two candies at once from the g/o. :/ and that's more your call than mine (sorry if I'm overstepping boundaries here, lol xD;; )

If either of them want critique on their entries after the judging, etc. I'm happy to provide it. xD I guess this would come int handy for when more people compete for the same candy, but just putting it out there.

What are your thoughts, o great Shnazz? :3

Saint-Cinq
Crew

Dapper Phantom


Shnazz
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 7:22 pm


Saint-Cinq


You made a lot of good points Cinq, and we're... Well. Pretty much on the same page about everything. Hahaha.

About Contu's entry, I was really intrigued that she wrote about everything. Though that really isn't the purpose of writing a prompt entry, I don't think she's entered very many flats. There was definitely a lot of rambling and left a lot to be desired.

And on Vamp's entry... Well. Frankly speaking. For a prompt-based flatsale, this is extremely poor quality to me. I would never let an entry like this win. She did close to nothing with the possibilities of a yakuza boss and not being a newborn. Considering his main personality traits, I highly highly doubt that he would throw away his past and turn over a semi-new leaf. Plus the fact that cube types are known for their traditional values. I honestly don't think she put very much effort into this entry, but that's just my opinion.

I want to uphold the one-an-event rule. So I will PM Contu about her flat entry. Though I probably should've talked to her about that before certing/journaling the hip hop girl. lol.

And if you want to offer prompt-crit to them, that would be nice. (:

I'm really uncertain as to what to do about flatsale candies because the entire point of them is that you're supposed to be showing us your writing skills. And I'm not so sure I even want to put them in the flaffle. Because Vamps could simply enter it and try to win the YB that way. Unless she's offended about losing the flatsale.

And I'm slightly disappointed about the outcome of this event. Very few people entered. I may not hold a flaffle at all, though I've been considering taking one of the kids as my own so I can RP with everyone. But really I don't know what else to do with the candies that are left over. As of now it's Catwalk Queen and all the flatsale boys that haven't gotten a home. And we may as well count the Rainbow girl in also because Apo hasn't come to claim her. I PMed her yesterday about it though.

Do you have any ideas on how to bring more life to the shop? I've always failed with this. lol.
I honestly don't know what else I can do. I don't think I have poor art. Nor do I think the shop idea is boring. So I really don't know what else I can do.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:57 pm


Shnazz


Yay for being on the same page! 8D

Oh good. To be perfectly honest, my initial response to both of these was that I didn't really feel like either could win. xD;; But again, if there's a flaffle then it's pretty much moot either way, so I didn't want to be all doom and gloom unnecessarily. In either case, there was an expectation that was needed to be met in answering the prompts, and both weren't able to get there.

I was trying to be nice to Vamps because I kept thinking "maaaan, i f I had this candy I would do this," etc. and I thought I wasn't being fair. xD But it's good to be supported in saying that it's actually pretty bad.

I don't know if Vamps would be upset about losing the flat. :/ I have a feeling that she lurks, but she doesn't really stick around to chat in thread. I have a feeling that she'll be a little disappointed, but I'd be surprised if she didn't enter for another event later.

Well, Ela wanted the Catwalk Queen ( xD;; even though she was about a week late and never mind the one per event rule, lol), and it's clear that the Yakuza Boss and City Night Lights have their fans and the Rainbow girl was highly contested. I agree with you-- it's definitely not your art. And the fact that the shop isn't desolate means that people find the concept interesting and are happy to RP and work on it. Sometimes it just takes a while for things to get started.

For example: most of the new RP shops that I've been interested in/following, unless they have a huge following either at their set-up or are brought over a crowd from their IT, generally only do 2-5 pets per event. In contrast, there were 3 flatsale boys, 3 CYOA girls, 2 raffle candies, 1 ad contest girl, and 1 semicustom, all up for grabs in a short time frame. That's 10 candies. 11, if you count Fish Bones.

I think (cruel as it sounds) that some of the draw is supply and demand. The fact that you have at least two owners (Contu and Ela, and I've made it no secret that I covet more too, lol) mistakenly trying to win two candies from one event means that the idea's fine and that people are interested, but that there's an overflow of candies. Obviously, you want to get a lot of people set up with monsters so that RP can start, but I think you're not looking at what this shop's already accomplished.

Out of 12 candies (counting Apo's barbed wire) there are 8 owners with no one owning more than one. That's pretty good! Or, if you just count the g/o, that's 6/10 candies, which is more than the average event of 2-5. Even if you decide to take one, then the shop will have 9 candies/9 owners, which is pretty ridiculous going into it's, what, not even second month of being officially open?

Basically, what I'm trying to say is that you need to give yourself credit. It's not like RM is staggering along. I feel like a lot of artists would be hard-pressed to keep up with this kind of workload already. The shop even opened earlier than it was expected to. : D These are all good signs.

And if you're still feeling down, think about it this way: it's coming up to the end of summer. Sure, some people will come back online, but a lot of Gaia's users will have to get ready to go back to school/go back to regular jobs/not be on vacations and in general increase work hours. So, sure, you're gonna have less people frolicking around than say, at the start of May or June.

The way I see it, if most of the people keep active in the shop and RP, then we're bound to draw in some more people, either by signature candy or word of mouth, or just affiliating more (which I also haven't been as on top of, which is my bad). Holding an event per month, even if it's just a few (3 or 4 at most, until there's significant demand for more) candies should keep interest up without saturating the candy market, lol. xD

I think that the shop's already on it's way to having more life in it. :3 There are three new monster owners, one of them not a thread regular/frequenter. Let's affiliate more, plan a fall/September event, and see what happens. I don't get the feeling that this shop is unloved, not by a long shot. I think it's more that people are busy with the start/onset of school. And hey, maybe the Chit Chat Rewards could come out in the mean time, if you feel like it, to try and boost thread posting. But honestly, I think RM is doing okay.

/end preach mode

Oh, and random: I think Contu's CYOA gal actually was named "Baast" not "Baas". Like the Eygptian cat goddess. :3

Saint-Cinq
Crew

Dapper Phantom


Shnazz
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:11 pm


Saint-Cinq


Ahahaha. Yeah. I don't really have a filter for this kind of stuff. I'll say what I think, and it's pretty obvious when there's effort put in. So I wouldn't feel too bad about.

Thinking about everything you said, maybe I won't hold the flaffle then. If Tox comes back, it would really only be her, me and Vamps that would be entering I think. But that would only be for the Catwalk Queen and Rainbow. Neither of which I would want to RP for myself. Haha.
What do you think we should do about the extras? Just put them aside for other reasons? The next event is all going to be sphere candies. And probably the event after. The g/o was the only event that was going to have this many uncommon ones at once. At least for now. I guess that was why I decided to have so many.

I don't know how I'm going to make this announcement. xD;
It's always tough to word things appropriately so people don't feel bad about losing.

Thanks Cinq for putting things into perspective. I actually didn't think about any of that. Hahaha. Like the supply/demand thing. And how well we're actually doing in reality. I guess it's hard to see that when so many other new shops are doing so much better. Though I guess the style of those shops are quite different and cater better to what is popular.

And I did take into consideration that school is starting again for several people. I worry about activity. xD;
I was actually thinking about doing a mini-pet thing next month or October. I want to do a Halloween event.
It's so nice to have support in this. 8D;
Running a shop alone is hard. Hahaha.

And yeah, I caught that just now actually. xD;
I'm going to fix it after Contu replies to my PM about CNL.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:50 pm


Actually maybe we can setup different games for each one that hasn't been won yet.

I'm not sure what kind of games though.

Maybe for Catwalk Queen there can be a thread in the guild for posting fashionable clothes? Rule being that they can't double post. So whoever posts the most intimidating 'fashion statement' type pictures wins?
Obviously I guess this would be mostly our opinions on which we think look most like that. Hahaha.

And for Gothic Poet...
Whoever can post/write the most dark/cynical poetry? I don't know. Maybe there should be something more interesting for him. I don't have many ideas on him right now.

I'm not sure how we could game off YB though. In ways that would involve writing anyway. Maybe it could be like a CYOA except more RP-based where we would give an event/some sort of interaction and they would have to RP their response from their idea of YB's point of view. I think that would be appropriate.

Really don't know about CNL though and Rainbow gal.

Shnazz
Captain


Saint-Cinq
Crew

Dapper Phantom

PostPosted: Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:32 pm


Shnazz


Yay for no filters! 8D I will be more kind to peeps who want critique, though.

I agree with you about the games. :3 Maybe wait a week or so after now (G/O's end) and then have one or two candy events go on at a time that last maybe two, three weeks each. That could take us through September, and then October start the Halloween event, which are always fun. 8D I'm actually really excited~ I like ghosts/Halloween a lot.

And yeah, RM is definitely different from a lot of other popular shops in that I think it's more original. I have a feeling it'll do fine; again, it's still gathering momentum. And no prob! <3 Part of being invested in something is realistic cheerleading, lol.

I knoww~ I wish Apo would come back (if she could, provided life isn't too crazy). It would be nice to have her active as well.

But yeah, I am totally happy to provide support! 8DD I'm actually kinda glad that my IT is on hiatus, because seeing how a shop works (even from my limited view) is making me appreciate really how much work goes into it. I'm really psyched that I get to write/plot, as well as gain insight/experience~ *happy intern*

Oh sweet! I saw your post in the thread and I wondered if we'd had the same realization at once, lol.

And for the games:

I like the idea of doing something related to clothing for the Catwalk Queen. Maybe it could be a game of rounds? Like there's a blouse/ top round, a handbag round, shoe/boot round, etc. And for each round entrants need to post a picture of a fashionable piece of clothing to win. But the Catwalk Queen is a fashionista with her own sense of style, so there's no guaranteeing that different garments from the same designer/company will please her. Winners of the round get 1 ticket/point, and the most points wins.

Poetry also seems fun~ but we'll probably have to google the poems to make sure that they're original/not plagiarized. =___= Lame, but it should be done. Maybe give people the option to either write a really over-the-top sad poem, or a really good romantic-tragic poem? Sonnets, maybe? Or should we insist on free verse? Free verse might yield better results...usually people slaughter things that rhyme. xD;;

Sure! It could be like a RPG! YB encounters enemies in the otherworld and then the players would have to respond, maybe in one paragraph or two, about what his response should be. It would be like a multi-round RP contest, almost.

For the Rainbow girl, maybe we could do something related to writing and color. It would probably also be a contest in rounds, where we post a color and give people a few days to write the best description of that color, or a paragraph expressing that color (? e.g., for red : luscious curving skin of an apple, dripping into a sunset that kisses rust colored dirt roads, etc. ). Points awarded per round, most points wins.

CNL...maybe something with skyscrapers? For example, a matching game. You post a grid with numbers, then when people guess two windows, you tell them what's behind them: either a person/pet or a lamp. The goal would be to match the correct lamps to the people. 8D

Though, I guess it should involve more writing. ... :/ Sorry, I'm starting to get really tired, so I'm going to sleep soon, lol.

Also, why is the mule sending me a trade of 30k?
PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 6:44 am


Saint-Cinq


lol. Yeah. That would probably be a good idea. If I was giving crit, I'd be more eloquent. But since you're the one doing that, I don't have to worry about it. Ahaha.

Yeah. I was thinking these games could happen in like a week or two and go into September and then have a Halloween event. I love doing events... So do you want to discuss what we should do for it now? Ahaha.
I'm thinking one game, one flat and one ad contest again. And maybe a concept contest one. And then a special limited edition Halloween mini-pet that people can either buy or win through various ways. I'm just not sure what the aspect of the candies should be.
Or maybe we should have an ORP event instead? I don't want to do too much. Cause I feel like I tend to do that. Hahaha.

Well I'll be excited for your shop once it starts going though!
Small shops are extremely homey to me when everyone is friendly with each other. And you're a great cheerleader by the way Cinq! 8D;

Hm. So how about we split up the games.
You take care of the Catwalk Queen and the Rainbow girl and I'll take care of the flat boys.

I think this order for games would be good:

Catwalk Queen + CNL
Gothic Poet + Rainbow
YB

I think for CNL it'll be less writing either way. The first two are more game-like and then the second two are more writing-based. And I guess the last will be full-on game. Hahaha.
I just don't know what game it should be.... If we do the matching game, it'd be really annoying. xD;
And not many people will enter I think. Maybe it can be a riddle. Though you would have to think of one because I'm terrible at that. Or a trivia raffle, give a fact about a big city and get a ticket? I'm getting these ideas from Ela's shop's event though. lol.

Oh yeah. But actually Cinq I'm leaving on the 20th to the 4th to visit my friend in Nashville. So I won't really have a computer, just my iPod Touch. So I'll be scarce. I'll come on maybe once a day if I'm lucky to check on things. But I hope you don't mind having to take care of the games. You'll have to do the CNL too if we do the first two games starting next week.
Here are some estimate dates, let me know what you think:
Aug. 21 - Sept. 3
Sept. 4 - Sept. 17
Sept. 18 - Sept. 30

I think a certain time frame to answer prompts should be put in place. Like for Rainbow and YB's games since they require more than one response. I'd say within 24 hours is good. Or 48 I guess.

But I think the dates are getting a little too close to Oct. I want there to be more space between these games and the Halloween event.... Ideas?

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:39 pm


Shnazz


How about one game, two flats, and an ad contest? :3 I think if stuff gets spaced out then there won't be a problem. And giving people more than one option to enter for in the flat seems like a good idea to me. How would you work a concept contest? Similar to the haiku semicustom?

Events are awesome! 8D Umm, so we're thinking up Halloween themes for the monsters or the minipets? Okay, here's a few: ceremonial candles, hay bales, apple pie and cinnamon, black cat, ghost's sheet, graveyard tress, maple syrup, scarecrow, flocks of birds.

xD some are more general fall-ish than strictly Halloween, I guess.

Yeah... :/ actually a trivia raffle with questions about big cities could be really cool for CNL!

Okay! Actually, I'm really excited~ I've always wanted to run an event. 8D I will do my best.

Let's see... yeah...I can see how those dates end up cutting it close. :/ Huh. Since the first two are more answering questions/ responding with fun pictures, then maybe they could be shorter/ start earlier to get things away from Halloween. So, my idea is:
Aug. 18- Aug. 26 :: CNL, CQ
Aug. 28 - Sep. 10 :: R, GP
Sep. 12- Sep. 24 :: YB

If you're cool with me setting up two events and then running the CNL and CQ one, then I'm fine with that! Hows the spacing look to you now?

Also, just so I know: are these guys still counting as part of the G/O event? For example~ if someone had a demigod stage monster by the time of the events, would they be able to win one from these three upcoming events, or would they have to wait until Halloween?
PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:43 pm


Saint-Cinq


Yeah. That sounds good. I guess having more than one for a flat is standard. xD

I like Scarecrow and Flock of Birds. :U
Ceremonial Candles reminds me of something else. But then again it also reminds me of witches and witchcraft.
I think I want to do something relating to witchcraft for the game. As for the two flats, I don't know. I guess those could be more general?

And maybe for the Ad Contest it could be Unlucky Thirteen. I just like the sound of that, plus designing this one would be loads of fun. 8D;
I already know what his weapon would be. Hahaha. And that it would be male. I'm going to go add all these ideas to my thread in my subforum. lol.

Actually Cinq, if you wanted to take care of CNL, CQ, R, and GP.... I would have no qualms about it. :U;;;
YB is the only one I really want to do. And the spacing looks waaaaay better now. Hahaha. Thanks Cinq.

If you want to start setting up threads, just set them up in the subforum the CYOA was in and title them G/O (game title) and make sure to post on the mule.

And actually... These candies are still technically part of the g/o unfortunately. So I don't think people would be able to try for them if they've already won one. But we'll see how many people end up trying for them and then I may change it. If someone miraculously managed to get to demigod stage by the time these games start, then sure they'd be allowed to win another one. But no one's really in that position right now. xD

Also Cinq, if you want to have your custom sooner. I'll do your custom before the Halloween event/with those candies. By then I am kind of going to guess Mack will be pretty close to demigod stage anyway. Hahaha.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:16 pm


Shnazz


Yay, glad you like some of the ideas! I'll brainstorm more, too.

Oooh, I really like Unlucky Thirteen. :3 That sounds like something that a lot of people would compete for. What would his weapon be? *legit curious* number swords?

Okay! I'm fine doing both, if you're okay with it. Actually this should work out pretty nicely; the first mini-event (xD? I guess? Since it's for two candies at once) should be underway before you leave, so you can double-check to make sure I've got things right. It's like training, woo~

And no worries! I'm happy doing whatever.

Alright, I just wanted to make sure where they fell before starting the event, so that I could post and let people know up front that these are basically newbie candies.

Also, have you contacted Vamps and Contu about the results of flat? It might also be a good idea to post in the thread that there weren't enough entries for there to be a judging, and that the flatsale boys and remaining candies will be available through events to come. :3

And in the sad case that some candies still don't get won...maybe those can enter the random candy rotation for semicustoms/randoms? Or is there somethign else you have planned for them? Because I'm getting the feeling that some people in the thread would like a shot at them, but they already own one. :/

lol, I can wait! xD Actually, school's gonna start soon for me, so it's probably good if I wait until around the start of September anyway to adjust. And yeah! xD Depending on how other fast people are RPing/journaling, he could in theory be growable before August's end. 8DD
PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:58 pm


Shnazz


Sweet~ I like how you worded the announcement!

I'll start asking for affiliates in the week before the games start to garner interest/support early. :3 Some places I was thinking of were Yes, My Lord, Legends of Lunaria, and a few other RP-based shops with heavier traffic. But that's for tomorrow~

Also,want me to make a mock-up thread for all the games/writing things I'm going to plan in this subforum for critiquing/feedback?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:33 am


Saint-Cinq


I guess we'll figure out what to do with the candies if they still don't get won. xD;
I think maybe for people whose candies have become imps may enter again.

And thanks for being so helpful Cinq~
Speaking of this, accept your payment woman! D:

Also if you want to make a mock thread, go for it!
This subforum is all of ours. Hahaha.

And thanks, I was hoping it was alright.
And yay for affiliates~
PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:39 pm


Shnazz


Okay. So as it stands, all the events are open only to new people/people who have not won a candy already.

Hmm...idea: if, during the last three days or so of any event no one has entered (worst case scenario), what would you think about opening it up to people who have fulfilled all the requirements to bring their candy to the imp stage? :/ It kinda bends the rules, but maybe if we included a sentence saying "only enter if you feel like you can handle the requirements of two monsters; this is a one-time exception to the demigod stage rule" that would make it less bad. This having owners being able to enter wouldn't be announced at the beginning of the events-- it would only be if no new person entered.

It's just an idea. I just don't like the possibility (even if it's unlikely) of having to announce no winners again, if it comes to that.

And, I probably should have asked this sooner, but are all the
se events going to be free? Or are we going to charge a entrance fee? Or are they effectively still flatsale pets-- if you win, you pay 30k?

And no prob! Duude, I had no idea what that money was for, orz. xD;; But yeah, I don't know, don't feel obligated to pay meeee~ I'm doing this because it's fun and I like plotting/shops in general, lol, not for the money. I mean, yeah, if there's a crazy auction that leaves the mule like swimming in scads of money and you need to get rid of some of it, then I will happily accept 8D but 30k seems like a lot for relatively little work on my end. xD;; idk, if you still feel a burning desire to pay me, then I'd be happy with a sketch of Mack/Remy, honestly. *art hoarder*

Okay, cool beans! Imma affiliate for a while and send Vamps her critique and then work on that thread. :3

Also: what about the chit chat rewards? We're almost at 50 pages and we have a pretty healthy group of people talking. Maybe if we started those before the events, it would help? Your call, I was just wondering. :3

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:51 pm


Saint-Cinq


Yeah, that sounds like a plan. We should do that. Hahaha. And yes, if they win they pay 30k.

I think I wrote it in the title for that trade. lol.
But yeah. I want to pay you. And you're going to be starting to do stuff for me now. xD
Like managing the next few games and stuff. And you've been great on sharing your opinions. So it's not like you haven't been doing anything.

Sorry. I'm kind of out of it cause I've been really tired lately. But there are a bunch of things I need to get done aside from getting the chit-chat points going. I've been lazy on that cause I need to make the mini-pet they're going to win once they get a certain amount of points. I think 50 points. I need to rearrange the ticket/prize situation for that. Hahaha....
And organize a post. I don't know how we're going to keep track of people's tickets/points honestly. That's probably the most difficult thing about it.

And then I also need to update the owner's list on the front page.
And yay for affiliates~ 8D
Let me know which ones have accepted our request.
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