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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 11:07 pm
Basic Info: Username: The Criticizer Character Name: Caleb Nickname(s): The Red Salamander Age: Twenty-Seven Gender: Male Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance Info: Height: 5'11" [180 cm] Hair Color: Dusty Brown Hair Length: Medium Long Eye Color: Gold Skintone: Light Scars/Marks/Tattoos: None
In Depth Info Nation: Fire Rank: War Minister Bender: Yes Bending Level: Low Master Weapon of Choice: Dual Dao, Firebending Profession/Job: Minister, Former General
Background Info Likes: - Intense Combat - Board Games - Ember Island Dislikes: - Ignorance - Children - Sweet Foods
Hates: New Rank/Job Loves: Jasmine Tea Greatest Fear: Losing to an Agni Kai Darkest Secret: None Family: None [Thought to be deceased] Origin of Birth: Shu Jing Biography: Born into the outskirts of the Fire Nation, I was immediately teached the art of Firebending. My father was a retired Military Soldier, while my mother almost never left the house, meaning that she had no real job. And after going through a few Academies on the art of Firebending, I finally reached experience and age to become a Soldier. The next few years were simply monotone, trying to raise my authority so I could not work that hard anymore. And as I reached General, I tried to stop growing, but I was then promoted again. This job I hate, I just hope I can still fight. Theme Song: None Forgotten Info: He has never lost an Agni Kai until now, and has gotten no scars yet.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:48 am
Change your bending level to High Apprentice.
It hardly matters if your the War Minister, considering War Ministers don't usually fight.
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Rakiaya Tressorea Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:51 am
As I said, he was before a General. And I plan to use him actively to fight, he hates his job after all, but will keep it for formality and access to the inner plans.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 1:37 pm
wow, you went pretty in depth with the character. you should include a weakness though. it seems like he's pretty cold and distant, but i think he should have someone that means a lot to him, like a long lost lover, or a younger brother who looks up to him.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 2:15 pm
He basically cares for noone, look at his biggest fear and you'll notice. It's not loosing anything but a battle.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:26 pm
High Apprentice, preez. Consider this a generous offer, as bureaucrats usually aren't this powerful. (I'd put a face icon here, but I can't find the one I want.)
Man, those sort of characters are sooo cliche, no offense. Cold, distant characters without someone to love or something to believe in.
No character can be invincible. Otherwise we'll be having dozens of this sort of character who care about nothing and think about nothing except for combat.
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Rakiaya Tressorea Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:11 am
Oh well, if you insist so much. I don't see how rank would change my RPing anyway, it's my skills who varies if I win a battle or not.
And once more, such weaknesses don't bother. If you can beat me in combat, that's all what it takes. Plus, I never said he's invincible, that's just the personality a true soldier of Fire nation has, or am I wrong?
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:26 pm
The Criticizer Oh well, if you insist so much. I don't see how rank would change my RPing anyway, it's my skills who varies if I win a battle or not.
And once more, such weaknesses don't bother. If you can beat me in combat, that's all what it takes. Plus, I never said he's invincible, that's just the personality a true soldier of Fire nation has, or am I wrong? Brilliant speech. I agree almost completely, except for the last sentence that implies this is the personality of a "true soldier" of the Fire Nation. That's a generalization, and if the Avatar World was the real world, it would be called racism. x Alright, the profile is approved once you change the rank to High Apprentice. After that, you're also officially the War Minister.
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Rakiaya Tressorea Captain
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