Love's Progression

[ZachClark]

This has no real form to it just a poetic expression of ideas.
I'll do my best to make it in a form of a true poem.

Once I never loved at all
Until you emerged before me

Then I loved with half my heart
Until I felt half empty

I wanted to feel completely whole
So I loved with all inside me

Then I felt overly energized
So I gave you all my love

After I gave away my jewel, my heart
I wanted to give you more

But I searched and the sanity
That was the only thing I had

So I gave it away, I did
So that I could show you that I care

Now since you emerged before me
There is few that I can say

Love has driven me into a madness
My true found new reality in me

Unable to believe that anything else
Nothing else could have ever existed

My life has turned to a single pivet
A vocabulary point inside of me

My endless craving for your love
Has driven me into madness

And until my final breath draws
Left on the steps of deaths cold door

Forever will every breath I take
Remind me, I gave my all for you

I Loved You With All Inside Me  

[AmaryllisSunshine]

Truly Remarkable.
I loved it ^^. Coming from a long term growing poet of my age, still young, & only a year or 2 into this.
It seems that your doing very well. What a great Write!(: heart Thumbs up 4laugh
Writer: DarlingBride a.k.a BulletproofBride  

[ZachClark]

Thank you very much. pirate