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 Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:05 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:28 pm
-sigh- I was hoping that I wouldn't have to be the one to start off 1st, for once. neutral Hi. I'm T.Ruthless. Also known as Solyriquist, or Relevant.
The truth, b***h? I'm awfully prone to throw lyricists into a residence,
of ants. Get them to dance and prance on you, before dismantlin' you.
then demand a chance to *rapture you. They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes.
I know he'll try to *lynch me, in his tree. s**t, it's a part of history.
But misery's his christmas tree that's glistening with tears and skeet.
So i'll remove him like wisdom teeth, with kickin' feet and fistin', free.
Sit him with my niggas, see him ripped in three, this b***h is weak.
You're dead man, It's fact. Seen some s**t you spit. I read it, it's whack.
Smack you till you're speaking backwards.*"Ow, the head of my back..."
So I guess I'm *negative Shaq.....since this s**t is simple as a Freethrow.
I meant it's a wrap. I see it but HE don't, but WE know. Thank's to Mrs. Cleo. -tips-
*I'm mean, yo. I'll put this phony picnic in a basket.....called a casket.
Then get on my Yogi, homey, and STEAL you between your glasses.
Then rip him different asses, and stitch it with lemons and matches,
then lit it and sent him to lyrical prison (my bars) as if it's skippin' it's taxes.
Go.
* "They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes" is referring to the Investigation team only snapping pictures of your pants and shoes,
which will be the only thing left of you after the "rapture".
* Made this pun because of this lame s**t here in his signature.
* Speaking backwards : "Ow, the head of my back..." = "Ow, the back of my head...", after i smack him silly.
* This should be an easy pun. Meant I must be the opposite of Shaq, since this is easy. And Shaq sucks at Freethrows.
* Yogi Bear steals picnic baskets. Picnic would be in a basket called a casket (coffin). "Stealing" meaning the slang word for punching by surprise.
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:37 pm
Solyriquist -sigh- I was hoping that I wouldn't have to be the one to start off 1st, for once. neutral Hi. I'm T.Ruthless. Also known as Solyriquist, or Relevant.
The truth, b***h? I'm awfully prone to throw lyricists into a residence,
of ants. Get them to dance and prance on you, before dismantlin' you.
then demand a chance to rapture you. They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes.
I know he'll try to lynch me, in it's tree. s**t, it's a part of history.
But misery's his christmas tree that's glistening with tears and skeet.
So i'll remove him like wisdom teeth, with kickin' feet and fistin', free.
Sit him with my niggas, see him ripped in three, this b***h is weak.
You're dead man, It's fact. Seen some s**t you spit. I read it, it's whack.
Smack you till you're speaking backwards."Ow, the head of my back..."
So I guess I'm negative Shaq.....since this s**t is simple as a Freethrow.
I meant it's a wrap. I see it but HE don't, but WE know. Thank's to Mrs. Cleo. -tips-
I'm mean, yo. I'll put this phony picnic in a basket.....called a casket.
Then get on my Yogi, homey, and STEAL you between your glasses.
Then rip him different asses, and stitch it with lemons and matches,
then lit it and sent it to prison as if it's skippin' it's taxes.
Go. HOLY s**t! I had to read that s**t twice...good luck "picnic"... eek
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:44 pm
-_5uWo0_- Solyriquist -sigh- I was hoping that I wouldn't have to be the one to start off 1st, for once. neutral Hi. I'm T.Ruthless. Also known as Solyriquist, or Relevant.
The truth, b***h? I'm awfully prone to throw lyricists into a residence,
of ants. Get them to dance and prance on you, before dismantlin' you.
then demand a chance to *rapture you. They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes.
I know he'll try to *lynch me, in his tree. s**t, it's a part of history.
But misery's his christmas tree that's glistening with tears and skeet.
So i'll remove him like wisdom teeth, with kickin' feet and fistin', free.
Sit him with my niggas, see him ripped in three, this b***h is weak.
You're dead man, It's fact. Seen some s**t you spit. I read it, it's whack.
Smack you till you're speaking backwards.*"Ow, the head of my back..."
So I guess I'm *negative Shaq.....since this s**t is simple as a Freethrow.
I meant it's a wrap. I see it but HE don't, but WE know. Thank's to Mrs. Cleo. -tips-
*I'm mean, yo. I'll put this phony picnic in a basket.....called a casket.
Then get on my Yogi, homey, and STEAL you between your glasses.
Then rip him different asses, and stitch it with lemons and matches,
then lit it and sent him to lyrical prison (my bars) as if it's skippin' it's taxes.
Go.
* "They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes" is referring to the Investigation team only snapping pictures of your pants and shoes,
which will be the only thing left of you after the "rapture".
* Made this pun because of this lame s**t here in his signature.
* Speaking backwards : "Ow, the head of my back..." = "Ow, the back of my head...", after i smack him silly.
* This should be an easy pun. Meant I must be the opposite of Shaq, since this is easy. And Shaq sucks at Freethrows.
* Yogi Bear steals picnic baskets. Picnic would be in a basket called a casket (coffin). "Stealing" meaning the slang word for punching by surprise. HOLY s**t! I had to read that s**t twice...good luck "picnic"... eek
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:49 pm
Solyriquist -_5uWo0_- Solyriquist -sigh- I was hoping that I wouldn't have to be the one to start off 1st, for once. neutral Hi. I'm T.Ruthless. Also known as Solyriquist, or Relevant.
The truth, b***h? I'm awfully prone to throw lyricists into a residence,
of ants. Get them to dance and prance on you, before dismantlin' you.
then demand a chance to rapture you. They'll snap and shoot just pants and shoes.
I know he'll try to lynch me, in it's tree. s**t, it's a part of history.
But misery's his christmas tree that's glistening with tears and skeet.
So i'll remove him like wisdom teeth, with kickin' feet and fistin', free.
Sit him with my niggas, see him ripped in three, this b***h is weak.
You're dead man, It's fact. Seen some s**t you spit. I read it, it's whack.
Smack you till you're speaking backwards."Ow, the head of my back..."
So I guess I'm negative Shaq.....since this s**t is simple as a Freethrow.
I meant it's a wrap. I see it but HE don't, but WE know. Thank's to Mrs. Cleo. -tips-
I'm mean, yo. I'll put this phony picnic in a basket.....called a casket.
Then get on my Yogi, homey, and STEAL you between your glasses.
Then rip him different asses, and stitch it with lemons and matches,
then lit it and sent it to prison as if it's skippin' it's taxes.
Go. HOLY s**t! I had to read that s**t twice...good luck "picnic"... eek Honestly homie...I understood it all nD you are totally right...these cats only feelin' a verse when Its dumb'd down enough...I for one have a keen eye for flow nD content nD demonstrate em' both as often as possible in my bars... Solid work homie...real talk!
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:55 pm
i will admit that it that it is legitimate...
i almost replied with commentary with a rhyme's initiative
so, to get into this business...
( xd let me stop before this counts as my turn. lol)
but yeah, supposing sportsmanship is only after the deed is done, let me go ahead and at least do the courtesy of replying accordingly in my next post
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:18 pm
i will admit, i am masochistic in spirit, quick to a gimmick
of wit that i'd beat you with my limbs and my limericks
but remind me, to find me, you spilled hi-c on your livelihood
and summoned fire ants with vines of poison iv? good.
you're quick to acknowledge fists of my proctologist
handiwork blocking secondary drops, diarrhea probably fits
your diagnosis of my despondence. so i'll reach further up
some meters your colon to your brain stem and murder ya,
puppet. to rummage your stomach is consequence of picnics.
the relevance of its content was a mysterious white liquid
asking for sole strategy: i had to be ruthless and generous
and finish by penetrating with my mysterious member. THIS:
prior, i read your love letter. i am flattered at the set-up,
while impersonal: i urge to go, outside and tilt your head up,
and swallow the scope in which i interject soliloquies
of your dispirited decadence as evidenced by your fillers, see?
(suppose i'll outline mine for explanation as well cause i know mine can be weird at times)
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:35 pm
a picnic i will admit, i am masochistic in spirit, quick to a gimmick of wit that i'd beat you with my limbs and my limericks but remind me, to find me, you spilled hi-c on your livelihood and summoned fire ants with vines of poison iv? good. you're quick to acknowledge fists of my proctologist handiwork blocking secondary drops, diarrhea probably fits your diagnosis of my despondence. so i'll reach further up some meters your colon to your brain stem and murder ya, puppet. to rummage your stomach is consequence of picnics. the relevance of its content was a mysterious white liquid asking for sole strategy: i had to be ruthless and generous and finish by penetrating with my mysterious member. THIS: prior, i read your love letter. i am flattered at the set-up, while impersonal: i urge to go, outside and tilt your head up, and swallow the scope in which i interject soliloquies of your dispirited decadence as evidenced by your fillers, see? (suppose i'll outline mine for explanation as well cause i know mine can be weird at times)
- with limbs, from line five to line eight.
- with a limerick, lines twelve and thirteen. it just references to your turn is all.
the mention of hi-c in line three is in regards to sweets, being what ants are drawn to upon prolonged exposure.
lines five and six just mock the fact that me not posting first left you to not be able to drop in defense. although i will not say the execution is solid, it is there.
although i do think what you dropped was no doubt good overall, and i am not saying my punches if any were superior, in some cases not all of yours felt sincere. thus the claims of the last line. but then again this is the first round for everyone, meaning anyone's a game is due to show later.
everything else should be explanatory.
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:59 pm
I think this first round was a tie but I think picnic's flows a lot smoother....
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:51 pm
i really don't know who got this...
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:07 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:41 pm
Honestly...this is ********' TOUGH! eek
I think I'm goin' to sit this Vote out for real... if I had to say which had a better flow...picnic hands down ...harder disses came outta Sol...wordplay was better from picnic...originality was apparent in both verses... sweatdrop
Let the people choose...I'ma leave this one alone... cool
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:52 pm
I underestimated the ******** out of picnic.
rofl
I'm curious as to who the people think won, myself.
Sol : 1
Picnic : 0
Tie : 1
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:57 pm
Solyriquist I underestimated the ******** out of picnic.
rofl
I'm curious as to who the people think won, myself.
Sol : 1
Picnic : 0
Tie : 1 really? i was telling myself the picnic got this competition...>.<
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:59 pm
GhostlyMark Solyriquist I underestimated the ******** out of picnic.
rofl
I'm curious as to who the people think won, myself.
Sol : 1
Picnic : 0
Tie : 1 really? i was telling myself the picnic got this competition...>.< I've never seen him around before, to be honest.
Especially since i dipped out of the Gaia scene for a while.
He has some sick a** word play.
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