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 Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:16 pm
Hello, just a few more steps and you're in! This is the infamous Half-Blood Hill. It's a mere distance from here to Thalia's pine as she faithfully gave her life to save her friends, but that's another story for later! Surrounding the hill is a valley where Camp Half-Blood happens to be located. But ho - if you're a mortal or monster, turn back now! You're not gaining entry to our precious lair that easily - unless of course, a camper, Chiron, or Mr. D happens to plan on letting you come... Anywho, welcome & come on in to Camp Half-Blood! Most of us don't bite!
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:19 pm
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Bara the Mercenary Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:42 pm
(( I hate to post this kind of critique, but could you please separate your really bad run-on sentences? It needs to be clean sentences not event and event, event event and event, etc ))
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:50 pm
Bara the Mercenary (( I hate to post this kind of critique, but could you please separate your really bad run-on sentences? It needs to be clean sentences not event and event, event event and event, etc )) sorry, ill fix it
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Bara the Mercenary Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:02 pm
NINJA iTUNES Bara the Mercenary (( I hate to post this kind of critique, but could you please separate your really bad run-on sentences? It needs to be clean sentences not event and event, event event and event, etc )) sorry, ill fix it (( Thanks a ton! ^^ ))
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:55 pm
Bara the Mercenary NINJA iTUNES Bara the Mercenary (( I hate to post this kind of critique, but could you please separate your really bad run-on sentences? It needs to be clean sentences not event and event, event event and event, etc )) sorry, ill fix it (( Thanks a ton! ^^ )) {yourwelcome}
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:21 pm
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Adele walked towards the hill from inside the camp with a sigh, wondering if anybody would notice if she just left - probably not. The brunette had a distressed look on her face as she sighed and ran a hand through her wavy hair. She noticed the pine tree that had a bit of a backstory to it. Something about some Zeus demi-god girl, Thalia. Adele saw another girl walking towards the camp, I wonder if she's a half-sibling, the daughter of Athena thought as she wore a smile. The girl had a rather lost look on her face as she was walking down the hill. With that smile plastered on her face, Adele gave her a wave, "Hello! Are you new?" she asked politely as she walked over towards her. Adele felt a slight breeze as her hair swayed in the wind, and she wondered when she'd see Nathaniel once more.
Of course I'm happy,
At least, in front of everyone else I am..- why am I even here? -
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:55 pm
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Adele smiled, "Nice to meet you Amanda, I'm Adele Roux. I can definitely show you around!" It was too late, Adele's switch had been turned. Her personality was already a goner. She smiled as she held out a hand for Amp to shake, "Well this is Camp Half-Blood for people like you and me. Stay wary of the Ares and Kratos kids, they're a bit... violent and well - yeah," she said, remembering the Ares' girl that she met the first day with a shudder. Adele chuckled, "Well, come on - I'll show you to your cabin first. Since you haven't been claimed yet, you'll be in the Hermes cabin."
Of course I'm happy,
At least, in front of everyone else I am..- why am I even here? -
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:48 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 7:40 am
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"Ah - your father? Well, I don't know. I mean - I'm sure he's somebody awesome!" she said with a smile as she led the girl downhill. Suddenly a burst of shimmering yellow appeared above Amanda's head, leaving a misty looking lyre. Adele's eyes widened for a bit, Ugh. Apollo, she thought with a shudder as she remembered her many encounters with the annoying sun god. "Ah, I suppose I'll take you to a different cabin now - it seems like you've been claimed by Apollo the sungod. I'm a daughter of Athena by the way." Adele smiled as she gestured for the girl to follow her towards a different direction now, the Apollo cabin. A place that was commonly avoided by Adele since her last few run ins with the god.
[exit - Apollo Cabin]
Of course I'm happy,
At least, in front of everyone else I am..- why am I even here? -
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:29 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:51 pm
Elizabeth sat on the Hill, tapping her blue ball point pen against her lip. She just couldn't find the right words, it seemed. And she needed to finish her novel before the end of the fall break or she'd be stuck waiting until Christmas break to write again. College just kept her so busy! Then again itmight of been what she was majoring in. Virology was a hands on and study type of prefession. Elizabeth sighed, and stared up at the sky, hoping for inspiration.But the blue sky and fluffy clouds that looked like cotton balls pulled apart offered none of the worlds major secrets. I blame the purfume fumes of the cabin for my clouded mind. She said, her French accent still thick. Purfume fumes never help a restless mind, or a mind that thought.
She sighed, and started to doodle in the margins of her notebook. Writing was her passion along with Science. And that earned looks and whispers from her fellow cabinmates. They tended to be "airheads", while she was always studying for finals or tests, organizing her notes, or writing. So far she had written about 20 of the 40 chapters she had planned out for her book. And she despertatly wanted to finish it so she could try to get it published. But thatmeant finishing it before the rest of the world caught ontoher subject. Zombies created by a Virus, and a girl who is mutated but is in harmony with the virus. Sure Resident Evil was around, but no one had written a story like this. Elizabeth sighed, grabbed her bag, and headed to the forest.
{Click Picture of Outfit}
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:18 pm
 Shiloh McloudAge:16 Godly Parent: Hades Shiloh: As Shiloh walked along the road with his headphones on his head and his clothes in his bag flipping his weird coin he thought about family " They should be woorying bout me right now". Shiloh Walked on just thinkin bout this camp " I wonder if there are any girls.
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:22 pm
Jason Grace Son of Zeus Shiloh McloudAge:16 Godly Parent: Hades Shiloh: As Shiloh walked along the road with his headphones on his head and his clothes in his bag flipping his weird coin he thought about family " They should be woorying bout me right now". Shiloh Walked on just thinkin bout this camp " I wonder if there are any girls.
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