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Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow Dash, doing her duties, and showing off as always. She remembers she has to meet up with Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie in a bit. “Ugh, I really don’t have time for them right now. But I don’t want to ditch them… Darn! I don’t wanna lose their friendship, I guess I gotta go.” Rainbow Dash flies off to meet up with Twilight and Pinkie. She goes to Pinkie Pie’s cupcake shop, the door creaks eerily open. “H-Hello? I-Is anyone here?” Rainbow Dash looked around, and out pops Pinkie Pie! “HI!” Pinkie pie screams jumping from inside a cabinet. “AH! PINKIE! DON’T DO THAT!” Rainbow Dash Complained.
“Ugh, so what did you want me for anyways Pinkie, I was really busy.” Rainbow Said. “CUPCAKES! LOTS AND LOTS OF CUPCAKES!” Pinkie said jumping with joy. “Cupcakes?! YOU TOOK ME AWAY FROM WORK FOR YOUR STUPID CUPCAKES!” Rainbow Screamed. Pinkie Pie, looked at Rainbow Dash sadly. “Oh, I’m sorry Pinkie, I just don’t know how to bake is all” Rainbow admitted. “Hehe, that’s okay! I made you a sample!” Pinkie Pie gives Rainbow Dash a cupcake, made like always with lots of frosting on top.
Rainbow Dash took a bite, and her eyes lit up. “Sooo, how is it?!” Pinkie said eagerly. “It’s really good Pinkie, best cupcake I’ve ever had.” Rainbow said then started losing her balance and started feeling a bit nauseous. “Feeling dizzy Dash?” Pinkie Pie said, hiding a smirk. “Uhhh, y-yeah, kinda…” Dash Replied. “Oh, I’m sorry to hear that. But before you probably pass out, tell me something.” Pinkie Pie leaned in closer. “W-What Pinkie?” Rainbow Dash said with increasing fatigue. Pinkie Pie giggles, “Did your cupcake taste like Sparkles?” Pinkie Pie grinned. “Huh?! W-What do you mean?!” Rainbow Dash went unconscious.
Rainbow Dash awoke, she was pinned by elongated boards holding her hooves in place. She couldn’t see a thing, it was so dark. It smelt of formaldehyde and decay, the scent of putrefaction. “Wha… Where am I?!” Rainbow thrashed around, to find she was restrained onto a table. The table was cold, and had sharp pieces left on it. “A-Anyone here?” She said starting to get scared. When Pinkie Pie turned the lights on, revealing a most hideous sight.
The whole room, was decorated with organs, and hides of ponies. A banner made of pony hide, said a twisted saying ‘We’re all just numbers now.’ She looked closer to find, it was Twilight Sparkles hide! “OH MY GOSH!” Rainbow Dash teared up a bit, but then chuckled, “Okay guys, y-you got me good. You can c-come out now Twilight.” Dash said. “Oh, This isn’t a prank Dashie, sorry. Yours and Twilight’s numbers came up.” Dash looked back at the hide with ‘We’re all just numbers now’ written on it. “Pinkie, i-if I did something that upset you I’m sorry!” Rainbow Dash was on the verge of tears. “Oh, no Dashie! You’ve done nothing of the such!” Pinkie Reassured. “T-Then why am I strapped to this table?!” Dash was starting to panic, hyperventilating as she talked. “I told you, your number came up. I’ve got customers to feed you know!” Pinkie Pie yelled
Dash thought ‘I’ve got customers to feed you know,’ then looks back to the hide on the wall and remembers, ‘Did your cupcake taste like sparkles?’ Dash cringed at the thought that had just gone through her mind. “Anything wrong there Dashie?” Pinkie Pie asked her calmly. “Y-you fed me Twilight Sparkle?!” Rainbow Dash tried to regurgitate the cupcake, but she couldn’t get it out of her stomach. “Wow! You’re a smart one Dashie! No one has ever figured it out that quick! Too bad no one will know.” A darkened look was upon Pinkie Pie’s face, not of anger, but of enjoyment.
Spitting, Dash managed to yell, “WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU DO THAT PINKIE?! SHE WAS OUR FRIEND!” Pinkie smirked, “Your numbers came up, ever wonder where ponies, who…Try to leave go? Let’s just say, you’ve eaten a lot of your own kind Dash.” Rainbow Dash was sickened by the thought she had eaten her friends before this made her stomach churn. “Pinkie, y-you can still s-stop this y-you k-know,” Dash said in utter fear for her life.
Pinkie looked up, “Hmmmmm… I can,” Pinkie said, while Dash let out a sigh of relief. “But I won’t!” Pinkie Laughed sadistically, Dash’s eyes got wide and she shook, and smashed against that cold table she’d been upon the whole time. She eventually tired herself out, and passed out, last thing she had seen, was Pinkie looking angrily to her for a second.
When Rainbow Dash awoke, she’d noticed she’d been suspended from a frame. The wooden planks still holding her hooves, to where she can’t escape. Too weary to try to escape anymore, Pinkie comes out from the darkness. “HOW DARE YOU FALL ASLEEP ON OUR PLAYTIME! ‘Oh I’m sorry Pinkie, you’re boring me now, I think I’ll take a nap!’ NO!” Pinkie was steamed and worked up. “owwww, m-my leg burns…” Dash said, looking down to her leg. Looking down, she saw an area of exposed flesh where her cutie mark used to be. Dash reacted quickly to the exposed muscle, “PINKIE! WHAT THE HELL!?” Dash notices that Pinkie slipped a red little cube into her mouth, “W-What was that?” Dash asked frantically. Pinkie Pie looked back and said, “It’s you, I’m just sampling a bit for myself. Oh! Perhaps you’d like to try some!” Pinkie shoves a red cube into Dash’s mouth. “Don’t you spit that out either, I spent good time getting it in a perfect cube!” Pinkie commanded Dash. But Dash couldn’t help it, she couldn’t eat herself, she spit out the piece of muscle and vomited.
“EEEEEEEEEEW DASH!” Pinkie said jumping out of the way, “You could’ve just said no! You didn’t have to barf on my floor!” Pinkie yelled at Dash. Dash had a defeated look on her face, “Please Pinkie… I-I wanna go home…” Dash was starting to cry. “Home, HOME?! YOU CAN’T GO HOME! WE JUST STARTED!” Pinkie was frantically ranting to herself walking in a circle, which frightened Dash even more so, it mortified her. “OH!” Pinkie runs and grabs a dress made of cutie marks, and a necklace made of unicorn horns. With the newest addition, Twilight sparkle’s Cutie mark and horn. Dash was sickened by these sights, then again causing her to vomit. “DAMN IT! I TRY TO HAVE A NICE TIME AND YOU JUST KEEP THROWIN’ UP!” Pinkie was angered, stomping around the floor. “M-My leg, it hurts. I…I can’t deal with that pain…” Dash closed her eyes, and when she opened them a second later, Pinkie was looking at her leg. “That’s all? Just your leg? You’re more of a wimp than I thought.” Pinkie sadistically smiled, then licked Dash’s leg from the hoof to the thigh. “P-Pinkie! S-STOP!” The saliva from Pinkie made the sore burn even worse. Pinkie smirked and said, “I wonder what the meat from your crotch area would taste like?” Dash looked at Pinkie, the idea of that made her sick. “I’ll make a cupcake from that for myself.”
Dash cried at the thought that she would be eaten, and no less by her unsuspecting friends. “You can’t do this Pinkie; you can’t lose a friend can you?” Dash tried to persuade her. “Sorry, everyone has a number, and everyone must be taken out on that number, or the whole balance will be off! And I wouldn’t have any cupcakes! That would be just terrible!” Pinkie exclaimed. Pinkie then noticed she was wasting time now, so she wheeled in a covered medical tray. Dash looked at it in shock, “W-What’s on there?” Pinkie smiled, “Your, tor. OOPS! Out play things!” Pinkie giggled at the mistake she made, then uncovered the tray to expose scalpels, bonesaws, hacksaws, and even a machete.
“This isn’t funny anymore Pinkie! Please let me go!” Dash screamed at the top of her lungs, sobbing. “Awww, don’t cry Dash, we’re having fun! I wanted to play a bit more, but sorry. I’ve still got customers to feed. This week’s special ingredient! YOU!” Pinkie laughed. Grabbing the scalpel from the tray. “If you didn’t have those earlier… H-How did you get the cutie mark o-off?” Dash said, cringing at the disturbing question she’d just asked. Pinkie smiled “You’re finally taking intrest! I always carry a handy-dandy little pocket knife, and if you keep using language like before, I’ll cut your tongue out.” Pinkie gasped, then smirked, and brought a bright painted skull to Dash. A skull, about pony size, but she saw the beak, “Pinkie! Is that! Did you?!”
Pinkie smiled, “Come on Dash, come hang with me, these ponies are dweebs, dweebs, dweebs.” Pinkie laughed. “PINKIE! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! THEY’D DONE NOTHING TO YOU!” Dash screamed. Pinkie broke from her nice pony mood to a dark and agitated mood, “BESIDES BEING A TOTAL a*****e! I DON’T GIVE A s**t THAT SHE’S DEAD. And, mmmmm, she tasted soooo good! Like two different animals at once!” Pinkie smiled and went back to her nice pony act, as if nothing had ever happened. Pinkie grabbed the scalpel, and went behind Dash. “I never knew how pretty your wings were Dashie! OH! That reminds me!” Pinkie ran off to get a little part of hide, with Pegasus wings attached to them, and leftover cutie marks were sewn into it.
Dash looked at the little dress she’d made from it in disbelief. Dash knew that soon, she’d be a part of it too. The sight was sickening, and quite a bit more than she can handle. Hyperventilating even faster now, Pinkie went back behind Dash. “Oooooh, I never noticed what a nice butt you had either,” Pinkie, now teasing Dash, licked her butt up to her wings; “I bet they’ll taste good in a cupcake!” Dash was sobbing, she knew she wasn’t getting out of this, but she wouldn’t give up. “Pinkie, please, I’ve known you a long time, please let me go! I won’t tell anyone about this! I swear on my life I won’t!” Dash exclaimed, barely able to see with the tears in her eyes. Pinkie gave a stubborn face, “Yeah, and you’re my friend, that’s why I’m sad to see you go.”
Pinkie then put the scalpel to the top of Dash’s left wing, she dug the scalpel into the skin, Dash let out a blood curdling scream of pain, but then the scalpel hit bone. She tried to force it down, but it just wouldn’t cut through. “Oh poopie, I guess I forgot to sharpen it before we started.” Pinkie went back to the tray, leaving Dash to feel the searing pain on her back and wing. “Ah-ha!” Pinkie came running over with Hacksaw. “Why do they call it a hacksaw? You don’t hack away anything with it, if anything; they should just call it a mini saw. A machete hacks away stuff! But then why do they have such misleading names? Oh well, let’s get back to business.” She then cut through the bone, and started sawing off the rest of the wing until it hung by only a small portion of skin, blood poured from the open wound, and the mostly severed wing.
“That was kinda easy! Come on Dash, cheer up! We’re spending your last moments together!” Pinkie then moved to the other side of Dash, then started sawing off the other wing, until halfway, the hacksaw had broken. “NO! NOT NOW! We were almost through too, okay Dash. I’m going to have to tear it off. It’s probably going to hurt, a lot.” Pinkie pulled at the wing, determined to get it off, Dash kept letting out such violent screams, it was a horrific scene. “Come on wing, get off, of there!” With a final tug the wing came off, along with a long portion of hide down to her rump. “Oh, there it goes. Sorry that took so long Dashie.” Pinkie was covered in Dash’s blood. The screams left Dash light-headed, she slipped from consciousness.
“Oh no, you don’t!” Pinkie injected Dash with Adrenaline, and she immediately woke up, “I’m sorry if this is boring you Dashie, But you don’t fall asleep when we’re playing! It’s not fair to me! How would you feel if I was hanging out with you and I just fell asleep?! How would that feel then, huh?!” Pinkie looked at Dash dead in the eye and then injected her with a burning liquid. “That was a numbing agent, in a bit you won’t be able to feel anything below your neck.” And Pinkie was right, a moment later, Dash’s body went completely numb, all she could feel was her head. Hyperventilating crazily, Dash looked on Pinkie’s face, she had a sad look on her face. But then Pinkie grabbed a newly sharpened scalpel, and made a line incision just above her crotch area, and then a vertical line going up to the chest, and another horizontal line, on the chest. Pinkie giggled, “It looks like I have my ‘I’ on you Dashie!” Her laughing mortified Dash, her face contorted in fear.
With a wet sound, Pinkie separated the skin and muscle from the bone, but then she suddenly stopped, “Aw man! I just came up with a pun for the wings now! ‘I think I’m just gonna wing it’ Maybe the next time though.” Then she continued and laid the flaps of skin down on both sides. Seeing herself get cut open, and the lack of feeling made her heart race, and breathing heavy. Pinkie pierced the abdominal sac, and began pulling out organs. Pinkie giggled, “lookie at me! I’m Rarity! Isn’t my new scarf lovely?” Dash was light-headed from this new source of blood-loss. Pinkie swung the tube of intestines around her neck getting blood everywhere.
Pinkie then cut the small intestines from the bowels, squeezing out all the excrement from inside, and running the intestines through her teeth, mumbled she says. “Dentis say ya’ gawta floss everyday Dashie.” Dash didn’t hear, she was on the verge of unconsciousness, Pinkie got upset a little, “No! Dashie, don’t go yet! We’re not done playing yet!” Pinkie drove another shot of adrenaline to Dash, waking her up. Dash was weak, she couldn’t do anything, she was trapped, more so, she was dead.
Pulling more organs out and making puns along the way. “I know I can be a real paincreas, but you know I’m just kidney with you. You just gotta learn to liver up a bit. Man these jokes are getting bladder, just gotta develop a stomach for ‘em I guess.” She puts all the discarded organs into a bucket. “Oooh! Bagpipes!” Pinkie puts her mouth on the end of the esophagus and squeezes the stomach a bit. Stomach acid hits her tongue, she jerks back and exclaims, “BLECH! Oh Dash, it’s your cupcake!” Dash was just about done, but with one last shot of adrenaline, she was up for a couple moments longer.
Pinkie continuing her puns, she finishes off with, “I wish I could have known you lunger, but I guess, you’ll hold that to heart. Just wish eye could spend a bit more time with you. But not now, you’re a bit brainish now. I’ll let you rest…in pieces” Pinkie laughs as she moves the bucket of organs aside. She had a sad look on her face, she had just finished on her best friend. “Sorry Dashie, I wanted more playtime, but you were a tad late, so we couldn’t.” Pinkie then took the body, and ripped out all the bones from the body and removed the hide from the muscle. The ordeal only lasted but fifty minutes, the longest fifty minutes of Rainbow Dash’s life that is, and…The last.
“I wish she was still here… Wait, maybe… She can be!” She gathered needles, and stuffing, and began piecing together Rainbow Dash once more. “I have all the pieces! Why not! This way Rainbow Dash will always be here with me! I don’t have to lose my best friend!” She stitched and sewed the pieces of Rainbow Dash together, until she had a life-like taxidermy of Rainbow Dash herself. “Time to bake some cupcakes! Thanks sooooo much for the help today Dashie! I appreciate your hard work today! You’re still my favorite Dashie!” Pinkie headed over to a grinder, and started shoving in pieces of Rainbow Dash. Out popped meat no different looking than regular meat. Pinkie picked up the bowl and began mixing her cupcake batter, scooping little bits of Rainbow Dash’s meat inside. “Oh everyone’ll love these! I just know it!” She bounced around happily while making the cupcakes, and when they were done, she took them straight out and frosted them and put them on the window.
Soon all of Ponyville wanted a sample of them, Pinkie was ecstatic to let everyone try the newly baked batch of cupcakes. One by one, each pony got a single cupcake, the last being Pinkie herself. They all ate the cupcakes with joy upon their faces. Fluttershy approached Pinkie and told her how good her cupcake was, “Yeah, the cupcake was really good Pinkie, Best batch I’ve ever had from you I’d say,” Fluttershy managed to say to Pinkie. Fluttershy turned to leave, but was stopped by Pinkie’s hoof. “Hey Fluttershy, can I ask you something?” Pinkie said to Fluttershy. “Uhm, yeah I-I guess Pinkie, what is it?” Fluttershy shyly slurs. Pinkie smirked, “Did your cupcake taste like rainbows?” Pinkie giggled, and it made Fluttershy uneasy. “W-What do you mean by t-that Pinkie?” Fluttershy curiously inquires. “Oh nothing, just poking fun I guess. Hey do you wanna come over tomorrow and help me bake some cupcakes?”

That's cool.
I'm remaking it for fun.
And her personality it like that, she's deeply disturbed. This is just technically my version of it.

everyone is different.
Not everyone likes the same things.
It works more, as it's own little side-story really.
There are certain parts that are a bit off-putting, but that happens.
I'm working on more parts. in these parts she's mostly like the original.

Doen't matter.
It's more of a thing for fun right now.

Its written nice, but I really don't like the idea of the story. I'm not one for gross stories like that ;-; I like... happier stories. No offense to you btw, I know its based off another story. I'm just not into those.

But your very good at writing! Do you RP or write stories or anything?

I RP a bit, haven't found one that has caught my attention in awhile though. Keep on writing, it seems to be a talent of yours